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Posted: 12 years ago
Just caught up with last 4 updates...the story is very interesting... just cant keep my excitement in control want to read the entire thing today itself..so please update sooner.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Last two chap was awesome...
Loved the way nani came and met them in temple...
So finally khushi met khalid bhai???and she has met him before??
Loved arnav and khushi's convo...
Lavanya is more intelligent than i tht..
Khushi..dunno wat all she has to go thru...She lied to her best friend..
So wat is abbhas doin????
Felt very bad for arnav when he said to khushi that if she wants she can go and tell the truth
Waiting for more...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank God I read first the notes of 139 page then the update!!😲
Otherwise meri toh aaj 'the end' hi ho jati!!
Man! Ur last lines was way too freaking- i almost end up getting a heart attack thinking that this was the last of Mirage!! Thank God that read the notes first(mentally patting myself😆)

Ok! Coming to the updates - It was awesme👍🏼Not ur best but still the better!😃

Oh! I hate this Lavnya!😡
So finally they r getting married( aint they??) Would love to see their honeymoon too😉😆

Khushi wanted to save him from the evil world- Way to go,Girl!!👏
Lets see how she set her man free from this world!!😊

Waiting for the next update & Thats too on a new thread,What say bud??😉🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the update !
Are they getting married in the next update?
I just hope Arnav won't trust Abhaas ..N what did Arnav do..he blurted the secret codes...Hope Khalid changes the codes..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing story, it's kept me hooked from the beginning. Arnav and Khushi's relationship is so intense but everyone and everything is against them! There was a moment when Arnav was coming back to Delhi after Khushi called
him and he met Shyam in the airport where I thought Arnav would be kidnapped! Thank Devi Maiyya you didn't take that track, it was bad enough
on the show!! Can't wait for the resolution of everything, I hope Arnav and Khushi will eventually be accepted by the Raizadas. ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
you really thought that this was going to be the last thread of 'Mirage', didn't you???good luck, with that thought!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry ji sorry! Couldn't comment for so many days! Me not happy with myself. Stupid exams! Have to study like crajy!! >.<

Arre hugs and kisses to you! You are so delightfully daani! You give us so many updates, woh bhi itna fasht fasht! :D :*

You'll be happy to know that you've earned another phangirl. And no, this time it's not me. I've been boasting about your story [and my genius searching-for-mind-blowing-stories ability B)]and this friend of mine is read it and is loving it! I'm sure she'll comment here soon enough.

Ohk, back to what I thought about the updates.
WONDERFUL. AWESOME. BRILLIANT. SPECTACULAR.
All of 'em.

Will say more later. Gotta study now -.-
BYE! :D
Edited by LoveToDream - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey rachel!! what a emotional update

don't tell me this is the last part of mirage

pleeej
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally I read it 😃😃

In fact I had to print the chapter in order to read it in the train

What a wonderful update !!!

First I'll start with Abbas !!
What a 🤬 !!
He disgusts me ! His aim is to kill his own brother in order to monopolize the malik empire and all his properties ! 😡😡
Does he know how much Khalid sacrified for him, how much he suffered from him, how much he loves him ??? 😡😡
I don't think that Abbas considers Khalid as his brother !!

If only I were in this FF, I would kill him with my own hands 😈😈

*** fifteen minutes later ***
So I have thought how I would kill him, and the best idea is to leave him alive amang 100 crocodiles who will enjoy him 😈😈

Back to the FF
As I said Abbas is a 🤬, I'm sure his plan will fail but I'm still afraid !! He manipulates so well Arnav that I'm afraid Arnav won't see his trap !! 😕😕
Abbas knows how to put him to his side ! He's givinfg what Arnav wants and I'm afraid Arnav will take his offer because of Khushi !!
I know Arnav will never betray Khalid but he can do it unintentionnaly !!

What a mess !!!

I don't know what should Arnav do !!

Just two things reasure myself :
- Abbas doesn't know YET that Arnav and Khushi are still together !
- Arnav knows that Aman is lying to him !!
😃😃
Please Arnav don't trust that Abbas he's just a 🤬
Please Rachel introduce 100 crocodiles in your next update 😆😆


Well let's forget Abbas for a while

Arnav and Khushi's scene was so cute !!! 😳😳
I loved it ! Arnavis the only man in the world who even drunk is cute !! He's the 8th wonder ! 😆😆

So I knew that Arnav was insecured because of Aakash !! But at least now Khushi is aware of that !!!

But I expected that Khushi will prevent him from agreeing to Abbas proposition as she always takes the right decision so quite disappointed ! But how will she know that it's Abbas's trap ! 😕😕

In their next scene : what a naughty Arnav !! you know what I was too blushing reading that (I was quite embarrased as I was in the train with people staring at my smile and blush) ! 😳😳
So Khushi wants so adventure ?? I think she will have a lot of adventure without going anywhere !!
What the Arnav wants to invited Aman to his mariage the day Aman has planned to kill him !!! Seriously that's funny !! (I absolutely want to be wednesday in your FF just to see Aman's reaction !!)
😆😆

Then comes Lavanya !!!
Gosh I didn't realise she was so sharp 😆😆
But now she has linked all together, well it was high time !! 😉😉
However I didn't think she would tell everything to her father ! I thought that she will ask Khushi for explanation !
So Lavanya thought that Arnav is also manipulating Khushi ! That's nice from Lavanya that she didn't think Khushi was with Arnav, personnaly I would have suspected Khushi directly, but that shows how much Lavanya trusts Khushi ! 😃😃

For the first time you showed us the negative side of Khushi !! She deceived her best friend and a man she considered as her father in order to help Arnav !
Really I don't know what to think about that !!
I'm happy that she supported Arnav, but I'm sad because she had to hurt her best friend !! 😕😕Really I'm not disappointed with what Khushi did, because I don't know what I would have done if I were in her shoes ! The fact is that with that part you have highlighted the fact that Khushi too isn't perfect !

I know Lavanya isn't a saint, but this time she was right, and no one listened to her ! quite sad ! Hari Kashyap doesn't trust her daughter, quite comprehensible but he should know his daughter better !

Well I'm sad because Lavanya and Khushi's friendship is completely ruined, and I'm afraid Lavanya will never forgive Khushi after that and we can't blame her !
And maybe things will be worse when Lavanya will take actions !!



To finish with this long comment

I want to say that the event with Lavanya will push Arnav to take Abbas's offer !

I have the feeling of reading a plate of noodles !! 😆😆

You have complicated things so much that now I'm almost sure we wont have an ending with everyone is happy with everyone !! 😕😕

So overall this update is a frightening one !!
And 100 times sorry for the late comment 😳😳

I address that to Abbas, please send my message to him 🤬🤬
And that's for you 🤗🤗
Can't thank you enough for giving us such a good FF

I have edited to correct all my faults, but if there're some left then don't mind them 😆😆
Edited by R66725 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
yipiiie...finally i read d whole ff...n vl cont to read till d end...u shld b proud of ur self n ur ff...i never read any ff if its above 2 threads n nw look...m hea on dis ff wich vl finsh d thread 3 n thread four...amazing...i loved everything abt it...

ur way of writting gt me hooked...plzzz cont soon...want to read more...n plzzz make a happy ending...plzzz dunt make it lyk in movies wer d hero eithr dies or stay a criminal ol his life n looses his family...

plzzz let arnav khushi togthr...n happy ending dats wat i accept...nw dat i hav cum dis far...


hw much more chptrs??? are left???

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