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Posted: 13 years ago
#71
Ausum update...

luved the bro-sis convo..😆😆

n y is swayam crying???😕
😕
sumthing haapened to kriya???????

plsss dnt let nything happen to kriya..😭😭
😭
n update sooonnn
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: shemlisalim7

for the first time i loved vp today...afterall kya punishment diya hai vp ne...ye toh bahuth kam hai...pls make her life difficult...
But wth is swayam doing!!!!helping naani?!?! 😡 seriously i hate it...
By the way uss news paper mein kya hai...vo bhi kria ke baare mein.. 😒 waiting to know more...


ohhh so u r in love with vp ha 😉😆
dont mind plz
u will get ur answers in update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: puja_arsha

Amazing prologue...
Do continue n pm me plz...

Originally posted by: YashInani

nice starting... waiting for the next part eagerly... do update fast...


thanks
will update today
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74

piya madam unres kab karoge
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: Nirju99

omg,kriya ko kya huwa? Update soon


u will get ur ans in nxt update
will update today
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: kuhu_Arsha

amazinggg,,,,,,,,,,,update soon


thanks
will update today
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: ..Surbhi..

WOW.

what a prologue :)
amazing job dear
do pm me when u update it
AND UPDATE SOON.. plzz

Originally posted by: Kriyansh_jaanu

amazing concept...loved it alot

updt sooon..!!!😊
n sry for commentin late

thanks dearies
will update today
Edited by Kriti_rox - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: Ritu_ArSha

Ausum update...

luved the bro-sis convo..😆😆

n y is swayam crying???😕
😕
sumthing haapened to kriya???????

plsss dnt let nything happen to kriya..😭😭
😭
n update sooonnn


thanks dear
u will get ur answer in update
will update today
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79
amazing prologue
do continue ND pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
#80
Hey Guyz
Thanks for all your encouraging comments...
now here's the update
enjoy...!!!!!

Note : Please Add kritzd3pm in ur buddy list for the pms...

Chapter 1

swayam look at the front paper...his eyes grew bigger..and and only one whisper came from his mouth "kriya".and next moment tears started flowing from her eyes...and he started crying bitterly...

Taani surprised to saw him crying...she sit beside him

Ta :bhai...bhai kya hua...aap aise ro kyo rhe ho...(but he's still crying)...bhai plz batao na...kya hua aap aise ro kyo rhe ho...(still crying)...(taani shake him with his shoulder)...bhai kuch toh bulo...
Sw :(with shaking voice)...taani kriya...taani kriya is no more...she's dead...
Ta :kriya...rey rey ki ex-gf...(swayam nodded and again started cring)...(now he hugs taani)
Sw :taani taani meri bestfriend mujhe humesha k liye chod k chali gyi...
Ta :bhai bhai plz sambhalo apne aapko...agar aap aise tut jaoge toh rey ko kon sambhalega...
Sw :taani rey toh puri tareeke se tut jayega...woh ye baat bardhast nhi kar payega...
Ta :bhai lekin ye baat unhe aur sabko batani toh padegi...
Sw :hmm...(he wipes his tears)...taani bohot raat ho chuki ab tum jaake so jao...
Ta :jee bhai...bhai aap bhi so jaiye..
Sw :hmmm..

(both go to his room...and lie down on his bed...and think about kriya and his friendship...all scene are played in his mind like a movie...and tears continuously flowing from his eyes..and after some hrn he drifted to sleep...coz of tiredness)

Next Day
In college
Swayam enters the canteen and all weaklings and dazzlers...chitchat with eachother except rey he's not there...(taani is not weakling nor dazzler)...all look towards swayam...and nil and viky go to him and pull with his each hands towards the table...

Ni :are ye toh newspaper leke kya ghaum rha hai..
Vik:swayam mere bhai is newspaper main tu mere liye bhelpuri laya hai kya...
Ni :are yaar ise toh khaane k ilawa aur kuch sujhta hi nhi...
Sw :Guyz mujhe tum tum logo se bohot imp baat karni...
Vis:ha dude...bol sixth dancer mil gyi kya...
Sw :nhi vishakha sixth dancer nhi mili...par ye baat sixth dancer se bhi jyada imp hai...
Vis:dude sixth dancer se imp kya baat ho sakti hai...
Sw :vishakha tum khud hi dekhlo...
(he handover the newspaper to vishakha and tears started flowing from her eyes after reading )

(oh guyz main toh aapko batana bhul hi gyi newspaper main kya likha hai...)
(ok newspaper main kriya k naana (kriya maternal grandfather or smriti's father) ne apni beti aur naatin ki maut par newspaper main add dekar shradhangli arpit ki hai...)

tears flowing down from vishakha's eyes...neha saw her...and asked

Ne :vishakha why u crying...(she handovers the newspaper to neha and started crying bitter)(I knw mujhe aap log bohot marne wale ho maine vishakha ko bhi rula diya...)...then neha also started crying...all saw the newspaper one by one...and tears started flowing from their eyes...even sharon is also in tears...

Ri :sharon kriya toh tumhari enemy thi na...toh fir tum bhi
Sh :rinni...kriya meri enemy nhi thi...ha main use pasand nhi karti thi...lekin maine aisa nhi chaha tha ki uske saath aisa kuch ho
Voi:kiske saath kaisa kuch ho sharon...(all look towards the owner of the voice...and they saw rey standing at the door of the canteen)
Re :guyz tum log ro kyo rhe ho...sab theek toh hai...aur sharon tum kya keh rhi thi...kiske saath kaise...guyz tum chup kyo ho...mujhe koi batayega yahan ho kya rha hai...
Vi :KRIYA...(rey is numb after hearing her name...)...kriya is no more rey...wo ab humesha k liye hum sabko...is duniya ko chod k chali gyi apne universe ji k paas...she's dead...(and after saying saying this she ran out from there)

rey is totally shocked after hearing this...

Re :swayam ye vishakha kya...
SW :ha rey kriya is no more...
Re :swayam ye tum...
Sw :rey main sach keh rha hoon...jab kriya aur uski mom dehradun ja rhe the...aur jis bus se wo ja rhe the uska accident ho gye...aur kriya...aur kriya ki mom...bhi...(he's unable to talk more he choked with his words and next moment...he also step out from canteen...and sharon follows him)

(rey is totally shocked after hearing all this he's totally numb...he dont know how to reack...he step out from the canteen...and walk towards the canteen...he's walking like a dead body...like there's no soul in his body...he enter the fireexit...and sits on the step...after sometym...when he's able to understand what swayam and vishakha said...tears started flowing from his eyes...and he screamed...KRIYAAA...

and here's In delhi...
Max hospital
a girl lying on the hospital bed...reacts after 6 month...and utter a single word...in whisper "rey"...


phheeww...
thak gyi main ab...
ok now tell me hows it...???
ya guyz...plz dont forget to click LIKE tab and plz leave ur precious COMMENTS...
and guyz from next update I'll pm u from kritzd3pm...guyz plz...add dis account in ur buddy list...if u want pms...

kriti <3







Edited by Kriti_rox - 13 years ago

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