Destiny's Game KR SS ch7/pg123 (#2 link pg1)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Guyz
I'm Kriti...u can call me kritz...aur kris...
After reading so many FF SS or OS...
I m thinking to start my own Story on Kriyansh...
plz have a look...

Characters :- same as D3 including tani..(and taani is new ags)..and except shivam...(abhi meri story main shivam ka koi kaam nhi hai...jab hoga toh uski entry karwa denge)

Prologue :
Swayam's house
swayam enter the house & he's totally shocked coz full living area is covered with newspapers...(ghar kam kabadkhana jyada lagraha tha...
Sw :taani taani...
Taani comes girti pirti...
Ta :ha bhai...
Sw :taani ye ghar ka kya haal kiya hua hai...aur ye itne saare newspaper yahan kaise aaye...
Ta :oh bhai ye newpaper main layi...
Sw :tum...tumhe is newpaper k saath kya kaam hai...
Ta :oh bhai wo main humesha girti rehti hoon na...aur aaj rey ne mujhe vp sir k cabin main bheja tha...aur main waha vp sir k upar girte girte bachi...lein vp sir ki coffe unke upar gir gyi...aur unhone mujhe punishment di hai ki is saal 2011 aur 2012 main abhi tak jitne bhi accidents hue hai...uske upar ek 5000 words ki reports banani hai...bas usi k liye main ye newspapers kabadi wale se kharred k layi hoon...
Sw :Taani tum bhi na...thoda sambhal k chala karo dekho tumhare girne ki wajha se tumhe ye faltu ki report banani pad rhi hai...(swayam ise dantne ka koi fayda nhi hai...miss earth lover ne nhi sudharna)...chalo main bhi tumhari report banane main madad karta hoon...
Ta :nhi bhai aap rehnedo main karlungi (wah kya behan hai bhai samne se madad kar rha haiaur ye mana kar rhi hai...aur ek main hoon...jo apne bhai se madad mangti rehti hoon...aur wo madad nhi karta..huh)
Sw :nhi taani main tumhari help kardeta hoon...waise bhi mujhe kuch jyada kaan nhi hai...
Ta :ohk...

Both started their work...they collect the information from all newpaper of hindi english...all...then swayam take one of the hindi newspaper...then he look at the front paper...his eyes grew bigger..and and only one whisper came from his mouth "kriya".and next moment tears started flowing from her eyes...and he started crying bitterly...



howz it ...?
I'll give u the name of this ss or ff later

kriti

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Index:-
Prologue uppar hai yaar
Chapter 1 page 12
Chapter 2 page 23
Chapter 3 page 31
Chapter 4 page 40
Chapter 5 page 72
Chapter 6 page 93
Chapter 7 page 123

Edited by Kriti_rox - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it d swayam tanni part was rofling😆😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: pkriyaansh

loved it d swayam tanni part was rofling😆😆😆


thanks 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing proluge
do continue nd pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: cookie_arsha

amazing proluge

do continue nd pm me


thanks...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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rofl

seriously

today is FF falling day!

4th one lolz...

Luved swayam and taani convo!

haha earth lover! kitna girti hai!

bechari ki isi aadat ki wajah se she has to do a stupid project!

rofl!

Last mein kya hua!

kahin kriya ka accident toh nahi hua na???

pls dont say that she met an accident!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: abhiyakreya

rofl


seriously

today is FF falling day!

4th one lolz...

Luved swayam and taani convo!

haha earth lover! kitna girti hai!

bechari ki isi aadat ki wajah se she has to do a stupid project!

rofl!

Last mein kya hua!

kahin kriya ka accident toh nahi hua na???

pls dont say that she met an accident!


hehe ff falling day...awesome
ya taani is such a earth lover...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Intresting stry and amzing prologue..do continue soon and PM me .. :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice

update soon and pm me

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