Destiny's Game KR SS ch7/pg123 (#2 link pg1) - Page 45

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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update with sum cute nanad-bhabhi moments...hope Kriyaansh cum together soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago

hey guyz

Thanks for all the likes and comments...sorry for not replying u all...I'm hell busy those days...I'm really sorry,,,,and again sorry forthe late update...

Note : If u want PMs plz add kritzd3pm in ur buddy list

now here's the update

Chapter 5

rey is working on some files...and then his cell rings...and some unknown number is flashed...he recive the calland said "hello"...

In KM delhi...

after 2-3 rings...someone pick the call and said hello...yes its his voice...she listen ths voice after so many minths...tears flowing from he eyes...

Kr :"rey"

Re :hello hello

Kr :rrey main kriya aap meri baat sun rhe hai...rey...(there is a problem in network...kriya hears his voice but rey not)

Re :hello....

(and then taani comes in GS cabin)

Ta :hiii rey

Re :oh hii taani....(she place the cell on table without disconnect it)

Ta :aap busy hai....

Re :nhi....

Ta :oh toh fit theek hai...sab ne shaam ko movie dekhne chalne ka plan banaya hai...aap chal rhe haina...

Re :nhi taani....

Ta :rey aap nhi jayenge toh main bhi nhi jaungi...

Re :are yaar tum meri wajha se apna plan kharab mat karo...ok main chalunga...happy....

Ta :very happy...toh theek hai main sabko batake aati hoon aap bhi aarhe hai....(and taani left from there)

In kriya's room

kriya hears Ta and re convo...tears flowing down from her cheek...

Kr :wo ladki kon thi...kahi rey ki gf...iska matlab rey apni lyf main aage bad gye hai...(she started crying)...mujhe toh khush hona chaiye main yahi toh chahi thi na...toh fir mujhe itna boora kyo lag rha hai...kyonki kyonki main unse pyaar karti hoon...ha main unse pyaar karti hoon bohot pyaar...par wo apni lyf main aage bad gye hai...ab main unki lyf main koi problem create nhi karungi...(then she look towards the folder which contain all forms...she take it...and sign all the paper...it is the firt tym she sign with name KRIYA SINGN KHURANA not kriya ghai...)

Howz it...??

I hope u like it...

I know its too small but something is better than nothing...

plz click like tab and leave ur comments...

one more thing guyz...is update se samjh toh gye KR ko milane ka abhi mera koi plan nhi hai...milwaungi...lekin aisi sitution jaha ye chahke bhi na mil sake...lekin ye milenge zaroora...toh now plz suggest some name for this story...plz

Precap :raksha bandhan special

kriti

Edited by Kriti_rox - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
arghhh!!!!!!!!!!! this taani ...i swear mai uska ye haal karungi ki...🤬...kriyaansh ko allag kyun kiya???????// :(
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Posted: 13 years ago
i hate tht tanni..
yaha bhi pecha nahi choda..plz update soon...
thnx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Not again...y d hell dat stalker has 2 come in between kriyaansh...arghhh!!!i hate her...😡
ab kria rey se aur door chali jaegi...😭
waiting for next part...
Update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
nyc update

bt vryyy choootuuu

update sooonnn

n badawala plsss
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Posted: 13 years ago

hello madam gussa kyo ho
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Kriti_rox


hello madam gussa kyo ho


2 reasons

ismein taani aur tera OS
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Posted: 13 years ago
and 1 more i didnt got ur comment
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Posted: 13 years ago
dont worry main commet karungi...
cell se online thi na toh kar nhi paai...
aur ab update dene main lag gyiii
abhi ya evening main karungi

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