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Posted: 13 years ago

Holla Guyz

Thanks u all for all the comments and likes...

Note : If u want PMs plz add kritzd3pm in ur buddy list

now here's the update

Chapter 4

Its been a week when kriya shifted to Khurana Mansion Delhi...she accepted all the family member with whole heart...

ok ab thoda past main jaate hai aur dekhte hai...kriya mansion main aayi toh kya kya hua...

Savitri devi (dadi) welcomed kriya by doing aarti...and then she enter the house...after she enters...dadi embraced her in a motherly hug and kisses her forehead...all hab ters of happiness in their eyes...all mansion was also decorated for the welcoming of kriya...why not...the priness of khurana's came back her home after 15-16 years...

then dadi and geet take kriya to dining table...and dadi make her eat with her own hand...khurana is very happy to get her daughter back and kriya is laos happy to get a loving family who love her soo much...but still she misses her smriti mom,her friends from mumbai...and especially rey...after lunch...geet take kriya to kriya's room which is all decorated by geet...

Ge :(with nervousness)kriya tujhe room kaisa laga acha toh hai na...dekh agar kuch pasand na ho...toh batade...

Kr :bhabhi bhabhi bhabhi...thoda aaram kijiye aur mujhe bolne dijiye...

Ge :ha toh bol na maine kab roka hai...

Kr :bhabhi room bohot pyara hai...its beautiful...I love it..

Ge :sachi

Kr :muchi...

Ge :menu te pata hi tha...room tujhe bohot pasand aayega...kyo ni aayega bhai room MRS Geet Maan Singh Khurana ne decorate kiya hai...

Kr :bhabhi ek baat puchu...

Ge :are nanand ji aap ek kya do baat puchiye...

Kr :aapki aur bhai ki Love Marriage hai...(geet blushed and)

Ge :haa...

Kr :aap log pehli baar kab mile the...

Ge :main aur maan pehli baar new year party main mile...(then kriya remember her first meet with rey in new year party)(but she came back to reality with geet voice)...par hum apni pehli mulakat main ek dusre se lad baithe the...

Kr :kyo..?

Ge :tumhare bhai ne meri new dress par cold drink giradi thi...us tym mujhe itna gussa aaya tha na ayr ab sochti hoon toh hassi aati hai...main kitni chotti si baat par maan se lad baithi thi...par tumhare bhaiya bhi kuch kam nhi the...hum log us tym jaani dushman ki tarah ladrhe the...fir hum college main mile...aur maan mere senior the...maan ne mujhe bohot pareshan kiya...lekin kisi ko mujhe pareshan karne nhi dete the...lekin main bhi kaha chup baithne wali thi...maine bhi unke saath khub pranks khele the...hum log itna ladte the na...aur ladte ladte hume kab pyaar ho gya pata nhi chala...(all the tym kriya remember her and rey moments)

Kr :bhabhi aap kitne lucky ho aap ko aapka pyaar milgya wo bhi bina kisi dikat k...

Ge :kriya wo pyaar hi kya jismain dikate na ho...jismain hume apne pyaar ko paane k liye mehnat na karni pade...aur humdono ne bhi ek dusre ko paane k liye bohot mehnat ki hai...meri family the orthdox thi...wo log ye pyaar vyaar main believe nhi karte the...aur maan...maan ne meri family ko manane k liye bohot mehnat ki hai...aur itni mehnat k baad aajhum saath hai...aur ab toh humare pyaar ki nishani bhi is duniya main aane wali hai...(she said this while blushing)

Kr :(excitedly)wo bhabhi main bua banne wali hoon...

Ge :hmm

Kr :wow bhabhi congrats...

Ge :thanks...(and then the voice come )

Vo :geet geet...(and then here's come maan in office attire looking damn hot)...

Ma :geet tum yahan ho...main tumhe pure ghar main dundh raha tha...

Ge :ha maan wo kriya ne na mujhe baato main laga diya tha...

Ma :geet mujhe banane ki zaroorat nhi hai...mujhe pata hai...kisne kisko baato main lagaya hoga...chatter box(in whisper bur audible to geet and kriya)...

Ge :haaw maan aapne mujhe chatter box bulaya...

Ma :nhi meri itni majal main aapko chatterbox bulau...

Ge :haaw maan aaap mujhe ched rhe hai...aaj toh aap gye...(and then geet start chasing maan...maan aaage aage geet peeche peeche...and then when geet is going to slip...maan saw this ran towards her and prevent her from falling...he possesively hold geet that his life depends on her...and their baby...all the tym kriya just admire their love...

(plz give me one pic of some beautiful and decent room for pics...I'll add it)

Present...

kriya came back to the reality...after hearing geet screaming...KRIYA

Kr :kya hua bhabhi...aap aise kyo chila rhe ho...

Ge :kya hua...tu mujhe bata kya hua...itni der se bula rhi hoon...kaha khoi hui hai...

Kr :kuch nhi bhabhi bas aise hi...aap bataiye kyo bula rhe the aap mujhe...

Ge :oh ha...yele...(she gave her a file...)...in forms par sign karde...

Kr :bhabhi ye kis cheez k forms hai...

Ge :tere visa k aur oxford university main university main tere addmission k forms hai...tere bhaiya ne sab forms toh fill kardiye hai...bas tu...sign karde...

Kr :bhabhi bhaiya mujhe london bhej rhe hai...(with baby face)

Ge :are tujhe akele kyo bhejenge...hum sab london wapas ja rhe hai...sorry main tujhe pehle batana bhul ki hum sab london ja rhe hai...isliye tujhe laga hum log tujhe akele london bhej rhe hai...tere bhai itne saal apni nanhi si princess k bina rhe hai...ab nhi reh sakte...chal ab tu is pe sign karde...ye submit bhi karwane hai...

Kr :bhabhi mujhe visa k liye ambassey nhi jaana hoga...

Ge :oh meri nanandji...tere bhaiya koi aam insaan thodi na hai...wo toh business tycoon Maan Singh Khurana hai...har kaam unke ek ishare main ho jaata hai...aurye toh sirf tere visa ka kaam hai...chal ab sign karde...

Kr :bhabhi main baadmain sign kardoon abhi man nhi kar rha

Ge :aelo...sign karne k liye bhi koi man ki zaroorat hoti hai...

Kr :plz bhabhi baad main karu...(with a cute puppy dog face)

Ge :ohk...

(then kriya go to her room...and sat on the bed )


Kr :thode din baad main london chali jaungi...aur rey...main rey ko nhi kho sakti..universeji plz aap hi kuch karo...ek baar firse unhe call karti hoon...shayad utha le...agar nhi uthaya toh main rey ki yaadon k saath hi apni zindagi main aage bad jaungi

(she take the codeless and dials rey number)

In Mumbai...

Rey is totally shattered after kriya death...but after so many days...he came back to his real self...he not forgets kriya...and he never forgets her...but he came to his real self for his friends...who care for him like everything...they are already sad...coz of their friend's death...and they become more sad...after seeing him shattered...so he decided that he will be happy and remember kriya with happiness...not with sadness...

In St. Louis...

rey came college with his real self...and his friends were happy seeing him like this...

(ok guyz their friends meeting hii hello kaat rhi hoon ok)

In Gs office...(I dnt know colg main gs office hota bhi hai ya nhi...but meri stry main hai...)rey is working on some files...and then his cell rings...and some unknown number is flashed...he recive the calland said "hello"...

In KM delhi...

after 2-3 rings...someone pick the call and said hello...yes its his voice...she listen ths voice after so many minths...tears flowing from he eyes...

Kr :"rey"

phewww

thak gyi...

chalo ab batao...kaisa laga update...

jyada bor toh nhi hue na...chalo aise mat baitho...

jaldi se like button click karo...aur long long comment dedo...Mind one thing...I WANT LONG COMMENTS...

chalo chotte se bhi kaam chala lungi...par comment zaroor karna plz...

ok ok jyada nhi pakati...ja rhi hoon main

oh precap wo toh dena bhul gyi...hmmm chalo khud hi soch lo...

bye

kriti

Edited by Kriti_rox - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
res

unres

Sorry-3 for unresing it dis late

but i cant help it too

im busy wid my FAs

Well kriti me angry

why u ended it at sch a point

pls jaldi update karo na

btw awsm update!
Edited by abhiyakreya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
res😃
iss bar pakka unres karungi😃
unres
let me start from the 1st
di apne jo storyline chose ek dum bindas ,mast, super cool mein kya nahi bolu😆
yeh ff pad ke meri dil garden garden ho gaya hain
aap ne kria ki life mein kya twist mari hain
kria singh khurana,kya naam hain
aap ne toh meri khurana surname ko use ki
koi baat nahi aap bhi kya yaad rakhogi ki pia ne aap ko khurana use karna ki permission de di
coming updates pe kria-mann ki relation aur highlight karna
geet toh bohut masat hain
louians ke galti femi jaldi dur kar lena
aap cliffhanger di,bohut bura ki hain apne
par koi baat nahi updaate superb tha
jaldi update kar na
waise kria ki dadi-balika vadu ki kalayani devi hain kya?😕
Edited by unnipgc - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update...cliffhanger pe rakha hai...jaldi se next part update kar...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Cute update.
Thanks for the pm.
Lovely one.

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Posted: 13 years ago
Great update
Aww hope kriyansh meet soon
Don't make kriya go London aww
Thnx 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice part 👏...
Kria seems to fit in with "The Khurana's" 😆...
Haye kahan par la kar rok diya ...
Continue soon...
N thanks for the pm 😊.
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome update...
Thankx 4 d pm...
Update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awessumm updte
luvd it vrryy mch ❤️
maan nd geet r soo sweeet 😊
kriya goin to london 😒
uuunnnwwaaahhh nahiii 😭
cliffhanger par kyuunn chodaaa
hope kriya london na jaaye
kriyansh ko unite karvdo plsshhh
updte soon
Edited by cookie_arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
woww awsome yar but no precapp not fair krits kya yaar well i hope rey recgnises her voice plz jaldi updte i wnt mre

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