Arhi: Desert Rose Chapter 11 updated pg 113

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dancedanceRR

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Posted: 13 years ago

#101

Loved the twist in the story and how strong Khushi seems to be! Great job!

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Crazy4IPK

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Posted: 13 years ago

#102

Awesome start!

I'm loving it so much!

Omg Payal is pregnant and Khushi is in the Akash search mission! She is on the way to meet her soul mate,haa! 😃

Plz update soon,can't wait to read more.

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charlotte74

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Posted: 13 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: nia252
update plz😃

still working on it 😊

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norolim

@norolim

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Posted: 13 years ago

#104

Amazing. :) Please PM when you update. :)

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deviarshi

@deviarshi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#105

Sorry for the late reply. Your prologue was very interesting the way Khushi & Arnav met was just like in the serial but the end when Arnav said he is getting married in a week really made me sad. Then comes ur chapter 1 with a beautiful dream & the twist Payal is pregnant with Akash child & he is missing. So now the sisters r going 2 look 4 him & I m sure Khushi will meet Arnav but just that it has been 4 years & by now he would have got married. So many mystery in one chapter really a good job👏

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charlotte74

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Posted: 13 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: ndevi
Sorry for the late reply. Your prologue was very interesting the way Khushi & Arnav met was just like in the serial but the end when Arnav said he is getting married in a week really made me sad. Then comes ur chapter 1 with a beautiful dream & the twist Payal is pregnant with Akash child & he is missing. So now the sisters r going 2 look 4 him & I m sure Khushi will meet Arnav but just that it has been 4 years & by now he would have got married. So many mystery in one chapter really a good job👏