FF: Indecent Proposal #2 [Thread 3 - Page 158]

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sony1980

@sony1980

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Posted: 13 years ago

#871

wohooo...i like this ASR n Nani too!!!!!!!!! 😊

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sanyukta90

@sanyukta90

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Posted: 13 years ago

#872

Nice update. It is interesing to read thar ASR is aware of Shyam's character. Dont like the way ASR is treating Khushi. I hope Nani finds out why Khushi has agreed to be his mistress and help Khushi.
Thanks for PM. Please update soon.

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yongshin

@yongshin

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#873

The things I hate: Arnav's behaviour towards Khushi. He doesnt want his family to think that she is characterless girl.. Then what the heck are you doing ASR..

Things I love: Arnav giving ring, ASR knows about Shyam and yayyy Nani knew something is up..

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spongebobchick

@spongebobchick

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Posted: 13 years ago

#874

Loved the last two updates... it seems as though Arnav's getting used to the idea of having a happy, lively Khushi around and I wonder if he'll start to feel some sort of remorse when he sees what he's doing to her. They blatantly have an attraction between both of them I just hope Khushi doesn't take all the shit from him because she 'loves' him, I hope she gives him some KKG-Kick Ass back too! 😆

I seriously love the way you've maintained the original 'ASR' here I have to admit even when I found out that Arnav had no idea about Shyam I was like 'What the...?', but atleast in here he's not that blind to what's going on around him. Nani as well seems to be on a roll, and I wonder how Arnav and Khushi are gonna get outta that?!!!! Great updates 👏

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magss24

@magss24

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#875

amazing update...its good to see tat arnav knows about shyam...

aha ..just love arnav's nani she is so clever...afterall she is the great ASR;'s nani right...pls update the next part soon...

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bhumi16

@bhumi16

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Posted: 13 years ago

#876

Aww man my heart goes out to khushi I totally get what she's going through! Ahhh man hopefully arnav falls in love with her soon!

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niania13

@niania13

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#877

I'm sad for Khushi longing for a real married life! You're right about Arnav knowing about Shyam, but maybe the Shyam in th show was more talented in hiding his personnality...
I wonder what Lavanya is upto and what Will happen when she meets Khushi!

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arhi10

@arhi10

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Posted: 13 years ago

#878

awsum track..

keep up de gud work!!

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mak3mesmile

@mak3mesmile

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Posted: 13 years ago

#879

What the hell!! How did I miss this update?

Anyways, it was great. Khushi, despite having all her dreams within her grasps, she still can't reach them.

I like this ASR.