FF: Indecent Proposal #2 [Thread 3 - Page 158]

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Parneet

@ParneetS

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Posted: 13 years ago

#891

hey...loved this part...:) <3

Khushi's outburst was awesome..i wud wanna watch something similar in the show but oh well..u did an amazing job..:)

aww i do feel bad for Arnav as well and cant blame him for the way he is... excluding some things he do upsets me...but he is right regarding Payal's matter... she is far better than marrying a greedy dog...!
end was cute..<3

cont soon..:)

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sur91

@sur91

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Posted: 13 years ago

#892

Great update. I especially liked khushi's outburst. Arnav deserved it. Though u have made it clear that arnav won't change and he has not started falling for khushi yet but there must be something that's changing between the two or this arrangement will remain like this only?

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norolim

@norolim

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Posted: 13 years ago

#893

Res*

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YESS! Updatee!

I liked it Yuks. Outburst was completely necessary. Understandable too.

I hope Arnav realizes that he's killed Khushi's dreams of a perfect marriage as well. That she wont be the bride she always wanted to be.

He needs to accept that yes-the way he treats her; she is nothign but is mistress.

Dont change anything you dont want to change Yuks. This is YOUR story; YOU decide what happens. We just read and give our opinions. :)

Continue soon.

Cheers, Avi.

Edited by ArShifan1997 - 13 years ago

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Krishika

@KaShArHi_Krishi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#894

Heyy

Great Part. Loved the way Khushi stood up to ASR!! Can't wait to read more!! Please continue soon. Thanks for the PM!!

Krishi

Edited by KaSh_Krishika - 13 years ago

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vidya.sanjay

@vidya.sanjay

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Posted: 13 years ago

#895

Fantastic update.It was quite a natural reaction from Khushi.As you said people don't change easily in reality.They only tone down.
Thanks for the update.

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bewakoofLadki

@bewakoofLadki

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Posted: 13 years ago

#896

amanzing update. .d frustation khushi vent out was awsum. . .thankx 4 d pm. .plz update d parts soon. .i love ths n i get to hardly read ths. .

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YuksPM

@YuksPM

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Posted: 13 years ago

#897

Originally posted by: chillygirl
Great update. I especially liked khushi's outburst. Arnav deserved it. Though u have made it clear that arnav won't change and he has not started falling for khushi yet but there must be something that's changing between the two or this arrangement will remain like this only?

I never said he hasn't started to fall for Khushi. I just said he won't change. And that his feeling, and hers, will be revealed in time

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CravingKhana

@CravingKhana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#898

That was very good story telling there...i like the ch alot and i cannot pinpoint one single thing, sentance or event or style that stood out...it all blended in really well to present a pleasant desert...just like his and her experieces of marriage and the dissapointment and thier parts and how they react...

Nice going YUKs

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Jia

@TinkJia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#899

i am glad khushi finally let out her pent up anger. Mostly i side khushi in IP but today i think wat arnav said was right payal is better without that not for good groom.

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--Nargis--

@--Nargis--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#900

Great update...i love how this Khushi socks it to him...he deserved it! Poor Khushi...thinking about Payal's dreams of a happy married life down the drain, yet she realizes she is in even worse conditions...and all because of Arnav!

Gotta give it to him...very perceptive he is, how he was watching her, the ring on her hand, the lost and whimsical look on her face...and he figured it all out...she wants marriage!! Now, were it any other woman, would Arnav have been as observant? Or is it just Khushi that tickles his fancy??😛