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hodan1987

@hodan1987

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Posted: 13 years ago

#731

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Awsome...I have been waiting for a new chapter and this update caught my attention. I am never comment first but let me say that was a great chapter and progress to the story. There was so much happening simultaneous that I am fearing for our couple. Trouble is headed in their direction big time. Can't wait for the next update.

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smarty94

@smarty94

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Posted: 13 years ago

#732

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oye hoye!!!!! so ASR knows SHYAM is a jerk😆 i am very very happy that u potrayed him lyk this in ur FF😃 in the serial they potrayed him as if his brain went on vacation to Bahamas, when all the marriage fiasco was going on

poor girl, i feel bad for her. like evry other person she also had the right to spend a bliss-ful life, but alas destiny had other plans😕 i hope arnav turns a little softer to her, she deserves atleast that much😊 although i absolutely loathe cliff-hangers, i luved this one for some reason😆 have no idea why😕

well ASR is one in a million kinda guy, so wanting him is nothign new😆

take care and update soOn😃

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ayushma

@aycma98

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#733

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i'm surprised with arnav still holding back about shyam, i mean sometimes you gotta hurt the family to protect them right??! but i'm glad you made arnav well aware about shyam's business, this was lacking in the show... uh-oh dadi!!!!! well she IS his grandma, he gotta give credit to her! i wonder how khushi will respond to that!!! very interesting update! i absolutely loved it!! it was a really smooth piece! great job!

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#734

Woah!

So many things happening at once! Arnav knows that his Jijaji is sleazy, Lavanya would like to assess Khushi, Nani suspects something is amiss and Khushi's plight is so heartbreaking! Sigh.

Great job!

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-memorable-

@-memorable-

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#735

i like the way you are progressing this story

each persons monologue gave some insight about them

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oceanssea

@oceanssea

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#736

Loved the update.

Its nice that Arnav has a suspicous inkling about Shyam.Hope that will save

a lot of MU between Arhi in the future

And nani thinks something is amiss too.Nice.

Liked the moody Khushi of this update.

continue soon.

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challo

@ekdoteenchar

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#737

Lovely chapter!!

I totally agree, ASR should have known..

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--Nargis--

@--Nargis--

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#738

Agar woh ASR hai, toh woh uski NANI hai...observant, perceptive, and sharp as a tack. 😛 Wonder how Arnav and Khushi will get themselves out of this jam? Looking forward to it.

P.S. the update was terribly short...this is coming from someone who read all 13 chapters in one go...so i am greedy to say the least.😛

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vidya.sanjay

@vidya.sanjay

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#739

Fabulous one.
It is getting more interesting now with the entry of Shyam, Lavanya's restlessness and naniji's doubts.
Thanks for the update

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sur91

@sur91

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#740

Arnav knows about Shyam here. Really good but why is he not telling anjali and is letting her romance that sleaze bag?
Lavanya is currently looking like danger to khushi but might as well turn out unknowingly a Cupid for ArHi.
I'm really curious to know what happens next