FF: Indecent Proposal #2 [Thread 3 - Page 158]

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Arathy-V

@Arathy-V

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#751

oh god..this is not nice..lavanaya will be trying 2 know about khushi n now nani too?? like u said, the ASR will know everything about everyone he is involved with..so him knowing about shyam should not be a surprise..khushi dreaming about her perfect married life was quite touching..its sad that she cant such a life when everyone around her is having one..i seriously wish ASR is around when nani is asking for khushi's parents' number..tanx 4 the update..didnt quite expect it to be so early, not tat im complaining😊

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bewakoofLadki

@bewakoofLadki

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#752

every emotion,feelings r so wel justified.as usual i loved dis update too..thanku4updatn it sooner.i literaly pinched myslf to c if it was tru.thankx 4 d pm.would kv 2 read more soon..

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Coffee

@coffee_beans

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#753

Wow! this update was indeed perfect.. so well described emotion and view points and obserations.. All so apt! loved it <3
Update soon.. cant wait to read ahead :)

xoxo

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FlamingsOfLove

@FlamingsOfLove

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#754

Res

Nice update

Waiting thnk u for pm😛

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N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#755

I loved the fact that arnav knew how sleazy Shyam was.. Arnav watching khushi watch the display of affection was cute..

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Jenni

@prettyasjen

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#756

This is amazing, I can't wait to read more.
Arnav is developing feelings for Khushi without realising.

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meera06

@meera06

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#757

I loved the fact that Arnav is aware about Shyam's creepy nature..Hope the snake won't eye Khushi..poor girl has enough problems..

Nani seems to know Arnav pretty well not like poojali..

Nice update!

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Preity

@pepples_joy

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#758

So ASR knows about Shyam here...😲😲

Great.. Atleast someone is clever in the fiction stories..😉

Superb update.. Amazing...😛 😛And Khushi.. Poor gal..

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smile1412

@smile1412

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#759

Oh ... Now what will Arnav do !!!! n poor khushi!!! Totally stuck!!! This is going to be fun!!!

But wait, the Shyam angle is creeping up in the story!!! Hope not Yuks !!

Great update!!!! Wd be better if we can hv the updates sooner!!!! Hehe... Pretty pls!!!!!

Thnx for the pm!!!!!

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segad

@segad

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#760

thank you for the update. this makes up for the dismal week on the show. I agree with your comment about ASR and Shyam. What gets me is why no one in the family seems to notice his smirks, sneers etc.

Coming to the update, I am glad Nani is getting suspicious. I love the way in which you keep the story real. The characters behave like real people would. Khushi resenting Arnav, Nani getting suspicious, ASR wary of Shyam etc.