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Ananya this was one awesome update.
Let me start with the first para, it was simply beautiful, its not often we find ourselves thinking about a relationship which is not defined by any pre set rules but only gives us warm pleasure which fills our heart with a content feeling which can only come from pure love. Sharon swinging from being soft and gaining back her diva self was nicely done and her talk with her conscience made a pleasure read. I liked how you use some metaphors, the chocolate part was just yummy i mean what better way to convey that even a fight with him only gave her pleasure which lingered along for long after. The last part is making me restless, i want to know what is Swayam up to this time..looking forward to the next update
P.S - Thanks for the dedication.
Ye Hai Mohabbatein
Arjun
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