SwaRon SS|One Way [part-12 1/12]

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Neha_Sr

@Neha_Sr

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#311

nice update..👏

n thanks for the film

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#312

I am really sorry ananya coz i didn't commented here for the 8,9 and 10 part!

Now i am finally here!! 🤗
I am just lovingg the current story and plot! ❤️
Swayam's anger over sharon's stupidity where he scolds her lyk a father!! 😳
typical lecture he gave!! 😆
Then sharon ka chori chori chupke swayam ka shampoo use krna! 😆
And the way she described his hair...was...just perfectt! ⭐️
And the amazingg part was inki noodles pe fight!! 😆
lol they are too adorablee here!! 😳
The way sharon was just gawking him in the shower 😆
lucky gal!!!
And the hawt german chick!! 😲
Dudee...now sumthing exciting comess!! 😉
Update soon!! 😊

Thanx for the pm's tanuka! 😃

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#313

That was such a cute fight with the noodles and LOL on Swayam's reaction when the girl passed by him and went straight to Sharon !! Looks like Swayam really likes the girl, so I'm guessing the next few updates are going to be real interesting !! Can't wait !!

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Roger

@HPHolic-3

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#314

Awesome update
Bathroom part was hilarious,they fight with noodles...:p
Waiting for next part

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Neeraj

@nature2

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#315

Bathroom part was hilarious,they fight with noodles😆😆😆

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Neeraj

@nature2

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#316

the hawt german chick!! 😲
Dudee...now sumthing exciting comess!! 😉
Update soon!! 😊

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Amrita Sengupta

@idiot_box

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#317

That was a funny update...the noodle fight was hilarious!! And this Bella gurl was kaafi interesting!!looking forward to the next update eagerly...even though I will be late in commenting please do send me the pm!

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Anindita Sengupta

@Anindita91

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#318

awesome update ananya...👏 loved the noodles part...it was hilarious...😆 so bella a new character...hmmm...nice...😉 will be waiting for the next update...plz plz do update soon...can't wait for it coz u have given me a reason to be like this...as u said u r going to give us povs... so plz update soon...😊

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@silver6strings

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#319

awesome update...

thanks for the pm...

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Shishir Darsh

@marauder

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#320

Even though this SS was inspired from Jaat and Juliet I have loved how you had changed the plot but still kept some of the best thing in it. And morever all the additional scene which you have added had been just masterclass. Just like this - noodles sequence. Hillarious. Waise Sharon ne room rent nahi diya samajh mein aata hai, apane dangar ne kyun nahi diya? And now the new entry. I am excited to see what twist you will add from your side in this sequence. Waiting for the next update.

P.S - Sorry for the late comment though. I was busy these last 2-3 days. So couldn't go through all the PM's and somewhere left.

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