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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh gosh! ive missed alot!! Hold on!!!!!
RESS!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Jum-RulzZ-

Oh gosh! ive missed alot!! Hold on!!!!!
RESS!!


EDIT soon Jum.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi ananya 😊
first of all,really sorry for being so late. 😕
As usual very nice update and loved the comic element in it 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

SwaRon SS|One Way| part-10



"YOU ATE MY SCHEZWAAN NOODLES.?"ASKED Sharon confirming. "yeah!" said Swayam in a casual manner as if nothing happened. "WHAT AM I SUPPOSE TO EAT NOW?"ASKED Sharon pointing at the oblivion behavior of Swayam's. "eat my 2-minute noodles. They are in the refrigerator." Said Swayam running a hand through his hair.

"2 minutes noodles hmm?" she gritted her teeth hard. " Yeah,I got them cooked and then when I saw your noodles, I thought of eating those rather than mines,so kept them in the refrigerator half-cooed. Just steam it for now." Swayam narrated the whole incident while in shower. Sharon thought of an evil plan as she smiled to herself. She took the noodles from the refrigerator advanced towards Swayam's bathroom. He had his shower curtains on,so was probably neither he was visible to her nor she was. The translucent curtain formed a blurry image of Swayam's half naked body. "you wear boxers while bathing." Chuckled Sharon as she spotted Swayam wearing boxers while bathing. "what haww..!" said Swayam confused and worried because of Sharon's sudden observation of him bathing. "what are you doing her,don't you have any manners Doomna!" Swayam stammered for the initial while laid stress on the last. "Manners,hmm? Well,look who is talking about manners here. The one who ate my SCHEZWAAN NOODLES without even notifying me." Said Sharon agitated of the accusation. "huh?" Swayam said as he turned off the shower as in to hear a more audible voice of hers and to spilt out his. "exactly! How dare you eat mine SCHEZWAAN NOODLES? And also,you want me to eat your 2-minute noodles." Shouted Sharon at the top of her voice. "what? Are you here for this?" Swayam gritted his teeth in annoyance. He was surely annoyed of Sharon's reason of sudden appearance in his bathroom while he was bathing and was half-naked thank god to the boxer which he wore of a habit since his childhood days. "So..?what you did is much more than this." Said Sharon trying to get her mental-state clear as she know herself doubted was her noodles issue this lame that she blasted into Swayam's bathroom straightway without thinking twice. "Oh! Really?" Swayam turned around making his 6-packs visible to her though blurry. He was about to part the curtains and step out of his bathing portion when Sharon closed her eyes in fear making the noodles bowl fall on the ground. Sharon parted her fingers in synch with her eyelashes as they opened up slowly as in forming the visual of Swayam's half-naked body. She didn't bother about the noodles spread on the floor in a gawky way with one of her feet in it, she mentally shrieked at seeing the vision underneath herself, her fluffy pink slippers got dirted with the red saucy noodles and cursed Swayam for putting in Sauce in the 2-minute noodles. Swayam at first, chuckled when he realized that this was his own bathroom which just got dirty of the noodles shouted at Sharon as he stepped out of the bathing area irrespective of her reaction or any such thing. "YOU!" he screamed to his might while looking at her, who was busy examining her slippers at the angles and the puppy on the slipper which just got spoiled. Sharon shook her head of the mess. "are you crazy,Doomna1" said Swayam which looked more of stating fact rather than a question. "What? Crazy hmm? See what you did?" Sharon shouted at Swayam. "What did I do? It was your mistake. Nevertheless these are just slippers which got dirty with noodles not your face." Swayam said sarcastically. "Face..hmm?interesting." Sharon mumbled to herself, she bent down to have some noodles in her hand and smash them into Swayam's face. Swayam's conjecture went right as she took his statement the wrong way. He stepped backward as she advanced towards him. This was what they both could memorize as the rest of the incident was dominated by the noodles,2-minute noodles. They had noodles in Swayam's bath-tub, lingering on the shower-head as a shot hit by the lanky Swayam. They fought to the fullest until Sharon ran out of the house slamming the door behind and seek closure in a near-by friend's house for the night.

Remembering the moment brought a smile to Sharon's face as she memorized the former noodles war. She took a sigh as she didn't have enough energy to fight right now. She waited for Swayam to react, while Swayam mentally set his race-track for the advancing war. He was about to gear up his feet when Sharon interrupted, "I really ain't am in a mood to pull out a fight. Really!" Sharon crept in a reply which he possibly couldn't think she would even in his dreams, but as one says "Everything is possible." Be it the Doomna, the stinging bee to turn into a beautiful butterfly. The expression which she wore on her face was evident of her reluctance towards pulling out a war also, she must be feeling sleepy as it late night now Swayam thought to himself. An absurd silence took over them as Sharon started to walk towards her room, the silence was disturbed an elderly women's voice Swayam and Sharon turned around to look at the door and find out the source of the voice. "You two! Do you remember that you have someone living in the house under yours.!" Taunted the land-lady coughing. "Hello ma'am." Greeted Sharon advancing towards her. "no hellos, please! Do you even remember that I own this house an you both are my renters, I ain't yours." Scowled the landlady. "aunty I was about to give my rent." Stated Swayam. "Yeah, I know how much. It's been 3 month since you both gave me my rent. It is high time you should or I have to kick you two out of here." Said the landlady warning them.

"Mama, wo bist du? a voice echoed in the staircase. Swayam perplexed as he didn't understand the lingual which trailed form the staircase to his house. "German?" murmured Sharon to herself. Swayam read Sharon lips as he saw her mumbling to herself. His brows jointed as he laid stress on his micro-vault sized brain. Sharon saw the perplexed expression on Swayam's face, he looked to cute with this expression on his face, she made a mental note.

The voice grew louder as the its rightful owner proceeded towards the entrance of their house. there stood a girl fair, lean and lanky who looked a twin of Megan Fox without her fair complexion.

"Machst hey Schatz, was du hier?" (Hey sweetheart, what are you doing here?") asked the landlady.

Swayam was left awestruck as he saw the girl proceeding towards him. He mentally prepared himself for his official-first-meet-with-a-hawt-girl. But to his shock, the girl passed by him and went to Sharon. Swayam had his mouth open wide allowing the houseflies to enter his buckle cavity.

"heda!(hey)" Sharon greeted Swayam's Megan Fox.

As Sharon greeted the girl she passed an evil smile to Swayam as in marking her victory.

"Heda! wie geht es dir?(hey,how are you?)" replied the girl.

Swayam gulped a down hard as he was surprised of Sharon's acquaintance with the girl. "do you know her?" asked the landlady to Sharon.

"Ja, waren wir im gleichen Sommer-Schule in Deutschland (yeah,we were in same summer school in Germany.)" replied the girl in place of Sharon.

"oh kay! I think we should be going now. We'll talk tomorrow morning." Said the landlady as a matter of fact.

"gans gewt(okay)" said the girl bidding Sharon a goodbye.

The two,the landlady and her daughter walked out of their house as Sharon too started to move towards her room. "what was this?" asked Swayam confused of the incidents. "what?" answered Sharon rather placing another interrogative term. "exactly? What?" Swayam raised his brows as in to express his confused state of mind. "was it some regional black and white movie without subtitles?" answered Swayam himself. "huh?" Sharon wore a stern expression. She continued as the stern expression loosened," she is Bella! She is from Germany I met here there when I was in summer school ." Sharon cleared swayam's confusion and made it clear how she knew the lanky girl, who now held a name Bella.




So, this was it. I know it was not something one would love to read. It would seem to be more of a filler for everyone out there, I would like to ask for an apology to my acerbic gang of friends. This one was important to make the story proceed ahead. Next is something which every of my read wants to read i.e. POVs. Yeah,I am disclosing the secret that the next update would be for the POVs as we now have reached a crucial point of this SS. Hope you enjoyed reading it and didn't feel like bashing me. Please bear me with this, I promise to bring you the POVs next time for sure. Do tell your opinions regarding this.

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Edited by Ananya.SwaRon - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
RES🤗
UNRES
I liked this update really. The shower part was indeed hilarious with Sharon barging almost inside the bathroom, i mean almost, and in a way ogling Swayam who thankfully was in his boxers while having a bath😆 And I really pity the bathroom who had to suffer the madness of Swayam and Sharon and their 2 minutes noodle mixed with sauce. And they both didn't pay the rent of that land lady, oh they are so doomed🐷 and Je ne parle pas allemand(I don't speak german) neither do I understand it, so could fathom Swayam's state, indeed it was like a movie without subtitles. I hope Bella isn't a new entry here and yeah I am waiting for their POV's. Will be waiting for the next update. Had a fun time reading the update😳
Edited by Rutu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey ananya...awesome update dear...the bathroom fiasco was funny...loved it...fight over noodles ...hilarious...her entry to his bathroom...🤣🤣🤣🤣...i actually started imagining the sequesnce...

The translucent curtain formed a blurry image of Swayam's half naked body. "you wear boxers while bathing." Chuckled Sharon as she spotted Swayam wearing boxers while bathing. "what haww..!" said Swayam confused and worried because of Sharon's sudden observation of him bathing.


liked the land lady part as well...

"Yeah, I know how much. It's been 3 month since you both gave me my rent. It is high time you should or I have to kick you two out of here."😆😆😆

new character bella looks like megan fox...hehe..hopefully she will get Swaron closer and make them realize their feelings for each other(through jealousy) 😉...update soon dear ...waiting for the next part ..😊

Edited by dips098 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
^^ u guys are fast!

RES :)

not a regular commentor here but we follow ur Ff, its really good!...

Coming to the update.
Ughh i pity Swayam's bathroom,total mess with the 2mins noodles n sauce :D..
The bathroom scene decrbd well, thank God Swayam weras boxers while bathing :P :D

N dis Bella?!..i hoep +ve charcter ho :)..
Loving the story, update ASAP! :D
eagerly waiting for the POVs.

-shreya and kanishtha
Edited by muzzy_sk - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey..amazing update..!!The bathroom fiasco was amazing and hilarious..!!The new character Bella looks like Megan Fox??Wow!!Looking forward to the next update!! 😊
Edited by swaron29 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey, thanks for the update. It was great!
The 2 minute noodles fight was amusing. And the Sharon, who is not in a mood to drag a fight is so new to me ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
hahaha nice work yaar, well done. Noodles wala part was jus hilarious. Do i detect some jealousy track in the future 😉 plz continue fast

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