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Amit

@Swaronvrushan

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#181

Finally u updated...thnx for such a luvly update...it was a very nicely written down

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tanuka

@Tanuka_TanHa

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#182

Finally after so many days , u decided to update .

thanks god

Awesome update ananya !!

very nicely written .

its good to see swayam slowly falling for sharon.😃

the katy thing was funny 😆

loved how they both were learning to cook .

swayams concern for sharon was amazing .

will be waiting for the next part , update jaldi iss time ...

thanks for the PM.

P.S - ananya i am serious update ASAP... no delays 😊

Edited by tanukaswaron - 13 years ago

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Phantasm

@Phantasm

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#183

EDITED my comment

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beeny

@beeny

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#184

are kya!!! itna late
Thank God aapne update kiya to😉
bt simply it's nice update & hw dey both care for each other amazing..& sharon khana bana rahi he 👏..Diva sekuch bhi karva rahe ho!!😛😉 love d update..
waiting for next part update soon 😊

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#185

At last and it is about time too. yaar well the wait was worth, hayeee the kitchen scene was just out of the world. I loved it. now we want an update fast just to know sharons reaction, plz jaldi karna. Thanks for a wonderful update .

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Roger

@HPHolic-3

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#186

Awesome update
That katy part was hilarious poor swayam
N then sharon ordering swayam to do the work was adorable
Last part was amazing swayam kisses sharon'e eyes ❤️
Waiting for next part

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Snowey

@Snowey

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#187

Ananya finally you updated 🤗

What a super fun update dear, loved it and enjoyed reading it.

It was amusing how Sharon could decipher each of Swayam's thought and how he called her an alien with antenna who reads minds 😆 The teasing session with Katty was super cool 😆 The start with Swayam mentioning how he valued inner beauty to physical had the essence of real Swayam to it. He sure is falling for Sharon. Sharon's little effort to cook something and the lil kitchen accident which disturbed Swayam's beauty sleep was hilarious. The best part was their joint effort to cook something which led to pain in Sharon's eye and some red hot moments. Loved how u described Swayam kissing the pain away from both her eyes.

Edited by Sudha-SK - 13 years ago

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swayamsharon

@swayamsharon

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#188

nice update!!!
katy part was hilarious!!
swaron r cooking, or something else is cooking, i loved it..
hayee.. swayam kissed sharon eyes was lovely!!
thanks 4 pm