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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
Awesome update... !!!!!!!

u left me wid no wrds by showing the trio frndshp in such a g8 n expressive way..

wat a g8 frndshp the trio share...

really kreyam r the bst of the frnds

rey is sooo understndin..

jst luv him a lot

do update soonnn

w8ing 2 knw kria's step
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
Amazing update:):)

Luvd it to d core:):)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
loved the way in which you have expressed swayam, rey and kria's feelingsšŸ‘...please update soon!šŸ‘šŸ¼
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
Awesome...I loved it. Looking forward for the next update 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
awesome ff
plz update soon
and pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
wow awesome update
swayam was really hurt, his emotions was nicely written
kria consoling him, true frnds
waiting 4 nxt update , the truth to b revealed
thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
Fab update...
Loved it ...
Y is sharon doin so???
N swayam...OMG...cant see him in so much pain...
N sharon hurt herrself for ditching swayam...
N rey saw kria...gud...
N shivam in dust bin...shi hai...he deserves it...
Waiting for next part...
Update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
Omg swayam was in such a bad condition...
I wonder why Sharon did that..
nice start..
continue soon..
loved it..
pm me also
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89

Hey Guys today is my Birthday so here's a treat for you. An update. And guys thanks a lot and loads guys. It was really awesome and nice experience in this forum too and to know that you all loved my FF so much. All the comments and appreciations were really UNEXPECTED! ! ! ! If you all guys wouldn't have commented then I would have not updated this. Thanks a lot for showing your interest. And special thanks to Maggie my sister for sending out PMs for my posts and giving me nice friends in D3 forum. Love you all guys. Now enough of my talks here's an update.

POV (point of view).

Guys when I write POV then it means the para is from that person's point of view or going in that person's mind.

Shivam was rotting in the garbage bin. He got up all angrily and went to his home for a bath. The all people who were in that area saw Shivam getting up from the garbage bin and started laughing. The principal of St. Louis was changed three days back and still no one knew about the new principal except Sharon.

Two days before:

Smiti Ghai's POV:

(all the things going in Smiti Ghai's mind).

I am the new principal of St. Louis College. I immediately went to footloose authority. From there I got the information that on the day of eliminations Dazzlers' performance was stolen by someone. I took out the information about the group that stole dazzlers performance and from there I got to know that it was someone called Shivam. And then from there I walked up to Shivam's old collage.

The college people said that Shivam has left college and has joined St. Louis college. I again walked up there to the collage and took out Shivam's information. I had his every detail in hand. Didn't know why this was some where related. I reversed my mind's CD with all the incidents. That night Shivam came to my home for some bank work. He also met Kria. And then only I got a call.

I still had that song mixing shop number with me. But before that I have to call to Shivam and talk to him. The information I got from college had Shivam's number I dailed the number and before the call got connected the name on the screen shocked me like hell. My body froze like ice. My veins were dead and my blood stopped to flow in my dead veins for a second. The name flashing on the screen was of the song mixing shop. It was Shivam who called me. . . It was him. . .

I drove immediately to St. Louis college and showed the proofs and details and all his misdeeds. And now his TC (transfer certificate) was in my hands. He was so dead. He messed with my daughter. He doesn't know me. I am Smiti Ghai the new principal of St. Louis.

It was me who saw that day Kria and Swayam hugging. And I came to know even Sharon was there. I knew that she would misunderstand Swayam. I walked up to her and hugged her. She busted out in cry and I consoled and explained her. She immediately went back to college and did as I said her. She trapped Shivam. And brought him to her home. She mixed "date drug" in his champagne. And that's the reason Shivam doesn't remember anything. That night Sharon cursed herself for cheating and not trusting on Swayam and she hurted herself. She was all along my partner in crime.

Two days later:

Smiti's POV:

I called Kria and asked her to come to college. It was now revealing time. Now I will take the revenge. I said her everything that Sharon has not broke up with Swayam and she still loves him. It was all fake and drama for a necessary cause.

Rey's POV:

It has been two days and she was back in town but still she didn't called me nor she came to meet me. It was 8:00 and I came early to college as I was not liking to stay at home. I sat in atrium. And now it was 8:25. students started to rush in. everyone were laughing and giggling around like mad. Soon my whole team reached and they too were laughing. What was going on. I asked Vicky. He showed me a pic and I had a smile too. It was of Shivam in the garbage bin. How did this happen. Even Swayam was sitting next to me but we both didn't speak a word to each other but still we were mentally with each other sharing each other's pain. Sharon walked in the atrium. Her hand was hurt. Swayam saw this and was worried but he couldn't ask her as she broke up with him. My eyes were still searching for kria. Where is she. . .? A few moments later she too walked in. I was all shocked to see her. And happy at the same time. I even had questions in mind. She was wearing those boxers which she wore on that day when she first time danced on the floor and took the decision of making her team weakling. There was a white t-shirt inside and a blue jacket on top.

She stood there next to Sharon. Kria's next step shocked me. She kept her arms around Sharon and hugged her sidewards. It was like she was supporting Sharon. Ya and why wouldn't she after all they both have done the same mistake. And the next moment I heard someone walking down the steps. Its was Kria's mom. Now what she is hear again to insult me or what?

Kria's POV:

I know that Rey would misunderstand me as I am standing next to Sharon. I know he have so many questions and I know I have to give so many answers to his so many questions. But today I will prove him my love. I don't know why Maa called me here but all I knew was that Sharon was innocent. And I was happy about it. As I cannot see my best friend Swayam in this condition.

My POV:

Kria's mom walked down into the atrium. Everyone were standing. Shivam reached in the college just the exact time. He was all furious. She stood there in the center and announced.

Smiti: "Hello everyone I am Smiti Ghai. Your new principal." she said with attitude. Everyone were surprised. Some were shocked. Rey and Shivam were among those who were shocked.

Smiti: "Well now my first duty as a principal is to wipr away filthy people from my college." she said and walked up to Shivam. Her next step was horrific.

She landed a huge and hard slap on his cheeks. He was trying to recover his lost senses but before that there was another slap on his another cheek too. Before he could understand anything there landed another slap. Hatrick.!!!!

He was shocked.

Smiti: "How dare you? How dare you played this cheap tactics and games with my daughter? How dare you play with her life." she screamed in rage.

Rey was shocked to see this side of Kria's mom. She exposed him in front of everyone. She said that it was all along him who was playing games around. She also said that it was Sharon who helped her all along. Swayam was shocked to listen this. He was on cloud nine after listening this.

Shivam was trying to speak up to justify himself but before that another slap landed on him. It was Swayam.

Swayam: "How dare you? Just because of you I was misunderstanding Sharon. Just because of you my both the friends got separated. Their love couldn't get complete because of your wrecked antics." he was so angry cursing himself.

Kria walked away from there to the audition hall where every year auditions got conducted.

Kria smashed on the ground hearing this. She was so heart broken that she could do anything. She was soon in tears.

Smiti on the other hand called police and handed him. She gestured to Swayam to handle Rey. She walked away in her cabin. Rey was crying so damn badly that it was now uncontrollable for him. He was about to collapse on the ground but Swayam held and hugged him tighly. He saw Sharon. She ignored his look. Rey was feeling so much pain. Soon he came back to his senses and realized that Kria is no where. Where did she go? The class started and all the students were in class except the dazzlers and weaklings. Swayam was trying to pacify his pain.

The whole gang started to search for Kria. Finally Rey saw her in the audition hall. Everyone were now in the hall. They saw Kria fallen on the ground. Rey was tensed to see her like this. But he still somewhere had the doubt in his mind about her but not in his heart. He desperately wanted to hug her to remove her pain. But before he could walk up to her he heard music going on.

It was a painful song.

Kria got up and began dancing. She was in deep pain and her pain was visible in her dance. Her broken, bleeding and smashed heart was visible in her dance. She was taking swirls and turns. Her feet seemed unstoppable. Her breath became heavier. Her swirls fastened up. She was unaware of the gang in the hall. She was sweating because of the heat of continuous dancing. She removed her jacket facing her back towards them. Now her bare back was visible to everyone. Her backless top was exposing her back until her waist. She kept dancing facing her back towards them.

But what stunned everyone was not her act of removing jacket but her back. The tattoo. The tattoo on her back. It was Rey's name inscribed on her back in the form of a fashionable tattoo. The tattoo covered up her back totally. From her neck to shoulders to trunk to waist. It was really big. No one, no girl has ever done this for her love. Rey was in more tears after seeing this. Now he was dead sure that he misunderstood her. He was so much in pain by seeing her in pain. He couldn't take it anymore.

He walked up to the stage and unbuttoned his shirt but didn't remove it. Kria was about to fall on ground but suddenly Rey held her in his arms in hugging position. He covered her bare back with his shirt still on him. They both were in one shirt now.

It did not take even a second for Kria to realize that it was him.

Her Rey. For whom she has been waiting for so long time. Kria, Rey and God only these three know how they spent every minute without each other. He hugged her suddenly with all passion, pain, heeartbroken, happiness, sorrow and almost everything. She suddenly let out a loud cry of pain in his arms with a loud shriek of cry. He was also sobbing and moaning loud.

If they hadn't united today it was sure they would have passed their life without doing anything just in each other's memories. They would have literally died without each other. She was crying in his arms. Her head was deep dug in his chest. He held her tight not letting her go even for a second. The whole gang left them alone and walked away from there. Their hug was so long that they lived all those moments which they lost and lived all alone without each other. It was a powerful hug. They wept silently for minutes and those minutes turned into hours. They didn't said a word to each other. Just their hug and the whole situation said everything.

The whole gang was in rehearsal hall.

On the other hand Swayam was trying to make up with Sharon by continuously apologizing her by texting her for God knows how many times. Sharon shouted on Swayam in front of everyone.

Sharon: "What the hell Swayam. . . ." she had so much anger on face. It broke Swayam's heart.

Sharon: "Why are you sending me these damn and sick apology texts?" she revealed. Everyone were shocked to know that Swayam was texting apologies to Sharon but why? Sharon continued and screamed on top of her voice.

Sharon: "I don't want your stupid apology, I don't want any of your sorry, I don't want your texts." she screamed. Swayam was about to walk away until she said again aloud.

Sharon: "I just want you back." she said loud enough trying to fake an anger.

Sharon: "I just want your hug back, I just want those feelings in your heart for me back." she said as she walked up to him. She was happy with joy. Everyone were surprised to hear this.

Even they cried. But Swayam . . . .

Swayam: "How can I give you those things back? How can I get back those feelings. How can I give you

back that hug? How can I give you my heart back?" he said with a stern voice.

Sharon thought that she had lost him this time. And this time forever and ever. Until he said.

Swayam: "How can I give you back all those things when they are with you." he teased her in the most romantic way without letting anyone know. But our gang is super smart and super guttery. They all understood. Sharon made their relationship official in front of the whole college. And Swayam was dancing in joy.

They were happy to know that Sharon and Swayam are together. They all started to tease them. It was literally day of confession. The whole gang confessed their love. All were in rehearsal hall except the two. Our great love birds. They were still crying in the audition hall. Nobody wanted to disturb them as they have met after a very long time. Rey moved her back and brought her jacket. He made her wear it and picked her up in his arms.

She was blushing but her face was badly stained with tears. He passed from the back gate of the college and took away Kria from there.

Precap:

Well its no big story or update but just an epilogue.

Kriyansh go to. . . .ahem ahem no guttery mind guys.

Rey's confrontation with Kria's mom.

Rey get slapped from her mom.

The final decision still yet to come up.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
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First happy birthday ā­ļø


Awesome update 😊


Finally Rey & Kriya are kriyaansh 😃


Shivam garbage can nicešŸ˜†
Edited by Himaniahir - 13 years ago

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