SWARON FF ADDICTED TO LOVE!!(part 13 updated)

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#771

nehalll Stupendous !!!!!! I just adore your FF,yaar the pain both are going thru is making me so sad. Yaar the whole update had everything in it the intensity of their love. Their love is so pure and emotional. The despair of staying away from eachother coz of some misunderstanding.😭 I hope the whole thing gets sorted out fast for them. Poor sharon and swayam. I love your FF like anything yaar. It is THE BEST!!! thanks so much and jaldi update karna plzzz

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#772

Pyaar yeh jaane kaisa hai...kabhi khushi deta hai kabhi dard deta hai...the contrast between the two birthhdays brought out vividly...the happiness and joy in abandon earlier and the longing to feel each other in their pain & pang of sseperation is brought out brilliantly...I sumhow get the feeling ki raaz abhi nahin khul paayega or at least sumthng more dramatic remains to happen b4 it does...ur going awsum Nehal...just don't keep us on tenderhooks and update soon

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kool kanz

@kool kanz

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#773

excellently expressed d intensity n romance between d two...dey r really cnt stay away from each other...awww...thanks for d pm..update soon

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shaani2209

@shaani2209

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#774

Nehal that was awesomely penned update...

the birthday surprise from swayam was so sweet...

the fact that you showed the difference from the past sweetness and cuteness, which then followed to the present pain and longing was beautifully done...

waiting to know what has actually happened that they are apart in the present...

update soon...

thanks for the pm...

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mahak_28

@mahak_28

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#775

👏👏👏👏👏 awesum nehal...so passionate dey r fr each oder...i just love reading it...evrytym u bring up a new twist😃😃😃..n dere kiss...wowww😳😳😳

waiting fr d update desperately😃😃
fr u-⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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tashu20

@tashu20

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#776

awesome update...beautifully written...loved it...!!!!😊

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Jum

@-Jum-RulzZ-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#777

now can i spm off?? :D

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Nehal92

@Nehal92

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#778

Originally posted by: jumrulzz
now can i spm off?? :D

your wish i m rite now working on the update!! 😉

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Jum

@-Jum-RulzZ-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#779

Den i can spam? :D

i really am pissed regarding sumtin! and im really upset!! :/

can i spam off and Can u please update today? :)

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Nehal92

@Nehal92

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#780

Originally posted by: jumrulzz
Den i can spam? :D

i really am pissed regarding sumtin! and im really upset!! :/

can i spam off and Can u please update today? :)

i can but it will late night is it okay!! :)