SWARON FF ADDICTED TO LOVE!!(part 13 updated) - Page 76

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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update...
thanks for the pm...
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

update will be up tonightpakka!
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Posted: 13 years ago
i guess so , i m writing it right now!!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
This part was specially to show the pain they are going through.. hope i did justice to this😊

Chapter 13

Avoiding contact with everyone , she ran straight towards her room and locked her up!!

Naina who had witnessed it , knew the depth of the situation..

They still love each other madly...

Maybe it's time for swayam to know the truth...

Yes!! Tomorrow morning i will talk to him...

It was late night and everyone had already slept..

Swayam dragged himself to the room ... and dogged himself on bed

The lights coming from the adjacent room disturbed him...

He lifts his face to see where the lights were coming from.

The lights came from her room indicating that she was awake..

There rooms were separated by a sliding glass door only..

For others it was a mirror , only they knew about it... it was their little secret...

Flashback

Sharon was walking through the corridor..when he pulled her in..

Sharon : what are you doing swayam??

Swayam : *pulling her closer* loving you..

Sharon : swayam not here plz.. see the whole family is here anyone can see us..

Swayam : so let them see..

Sharon : are you mad?? You know na its not the right time for them to know..

Swayam : okay!! But on one condition ..

Sharon : what??

Swayam : kiss me first ( indicating towards his lips)

Sharon : now .. here in the corridor!!

Swayam : ya...now here !!

Sharon : no no swayam not here please.. later i promise..

Swayam : umm..okay! but with penalty..

Sharon : you have all liberty ...

Swayam : okay! By the way i won't wish you first today!!

Sharon : do you even know how a boyfriend behaves...

Other BF dies to wish there girl first.. huh! And look at you..

Swayam : i am like this only...

Sharon : argh!! Swayam you should be planning something for my birthday and here you are arguing...

Swayam : what will i plan ..my family has already planned many things for you!!

Sharon : so...

Swayam : what so.. i have many important things to do!!

He walked off leaving behind a fuming Sharon..

Rest of the day he dint even show up ..and later that night he had slept at 10 itself as he was very tired.

At exact 12 every one wished her birthday, gave her presents and blessings

Rey : we all should go sleep now... We have a party to attend tomorrow...

All went out to their respective rooms...

Sharon entered her room, she felt something soft under her legs she switched on the lights to find whole room decorated with Pink roses...

The floor, the bed, the dressing area there wasn't a inch left uncovered..

A smile crept on her face...

Two hands encircled her waist, hugging her from behind..

Happy birthday!!

Sharon : you are awake!! You did all this..

Swayam : yes!! It's just the trailer... the real suprise is yet to come..

Sharon turned around..

Sharon : really!! Sam what is it.plzz tell me now.. i cant wait for it any more...

Swayam : * placing his finger on her lips*

You talk too much!!

He started to rub his finger over her lips..

Sharon closed her eyes in response...

He slowly rubbed his hands over her shoulders, then arms and reached her waist...

With a single pull he untied the knot , and allowed the silky coat to fall on the ground..

Sharon placed her hands on his chest and clutched his shirt..

Slowly he moved her hair from her shoulder and bend down to kiss her bare shoulders...

He rubbed his lips all over her shoulders, neck and jaw line..

He kissed every finger of her hands...

He firmly placed his lips on her and started kissing her...

He banged his hand hard on the floor.. . which increased the bleeding *a tear escaped his eyes*

He got up n walked in her room ... he found her staring at the stars..

She was so lost she dint even notice him...

He ran upto her and hugged her tightly..placing one hand on her waist and other around her neck...

He pulled her so hard..her back banged on his chest...

Both dint utter a word..they needed each other..

They were like drugs to each others...

He ran his bleeding hands all over her body leaving his blood stains on her...

He kissed her hungrily all over back and neck...

She turned around with a jerk and buried herself deep in arms..

they held each other so tightly.. That they bodies were covered their hand prints...

He again started kissing this time he was beyond the limits of the limits...

They both had lost their senses...even a drunken would be more in sense...

He picked her up in his arms... and laid her on bed..

He on top of her...he ran his hand under her shirt feeling every inch of her stomach..

She closed her eyes and clutched the bed covers tightly...

He started unbuttoning her shirt, she turned around facing her back towards him...

He raised her shirt and kissed her exposing skin...

He intertwined his fingers with her..and pressed them hard...

He made her face him and move in to take over her...

The window doors banged hard because of the wind, causing a huge sound...

They both opened there eyes and starred deep into each other...

He got up...she turned around digging herself in the covers..

He stood there for a while and then moved out ...

He laid flat on his bed starring at the ceiling...

Thinking of what could have happened just a few moments ago..

They both closed their eyes,allowing the tears to flow down..

Soon sleep took over them ...their hearts heavy as iron blocks...

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next update in a new thread!!😉

guys i send pms to nearly 100 ppl and only 30 likes..its not fair na.. so who ever has liked the post will receive the pm...

and not able to reply u all personally..so sorry for it..

but for all thankx for your support guyz..🤗

Edited by Nehal92 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow Nehal, awesome update.
Loved how you shown the difference in Kiss SwaRon share in the present and in the past.
Before it was pure love and happiness and this time around, longing for each other and pain for being away. Swayam did so much just for her B'day that was very sweet of him. But why are they giving each other so much pain..when they are passionately in love with each other..the best thing is i think Swayam's mom is going to tell him everything the next morning..and by which even we will get to know what actually happened between swaron.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Sudha-SK

Wow Nehal, awesome update.

Loved how you shown the difference in Kiss SwaRon share in the present and in the past.
Before it was pure love and happiness and this time around, longing for each other and pain for being away. Swayam did so much just for her B'day that was very sweet of him. But why are they giving each other so much pain..when they are passionately in love with each other..the best thing is i think Swayam's mom is going to tell him everything the next morning..and by which even we will get to know what actually happened between swaron.


Thankx yaar😉 glad u could catch the pain sensation.. huh i did it 😛

next morning the raaz will be up... ahaan i dont think so 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Passion and Romance at its best. Just loved the way you showed the difference between the past and present just by the help of two kisses. While the sweetness of romance and love was quite evident in the first then the intensity, longing and passion was quite obvious in second. To see the difference between two times; when one is blissful and other painful makes this FF even more intriguing. Waiting for the next update. Looking forward to know what was the reason for their heart break.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: marauder

Passion and Romance at its best. Just loved the way you showed the difference between the past and present just by the help of two kisses. While the sweetness of romance and love was quite evident in the first then the intensity, longing and passion was quite obvious in second. To see the difference between two times; when one is blissful and other painful makes this FF even more intriguing. Waiting for the next update. Looking forward to know what was the reason for their heart break.

thanks yaaR!!
your comments are always motivating!! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
I read it 😃
but RES
UNRES
Ah nehal this one was really touchy, and the best part about not only this update but the entire FF is how you blend the past and the present. This update had two different set of emotions, the initial one being sweet where Swayam gave Sharon a birthday surprise and the kissed followed by it. Thinking of the same Swayam really couldn't stay away from Sharon, remembering their moments together at the farmhouse and that brought him to her room. They both couldn't resist each other and got so lost in each other making them forget that things weren't the same as before. The passion that oozed out of the kiss, the intensity makes me wonder what could have been the reason for their break up?
Update soon nehal.
Edited by Rutu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
ok ! Now dis was a BANG ON update!!
AWWW!!
LOVED EVERY BIT OF IT!!
THE KISS... THE URGES...
THE *AHEM* !

-Just joking- :P 😆

btw.. coming to the update!
Now dat was AMAZING !!
i loved it like Hell!
Awww! :)
Update soon...
Or shall i spammmy??? :)

after Every1 commenting !?
i think the thread will be over by the comments!

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