SWARON FF ADDICTED TO LOVE!!(part 13 updated)

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Jum

@-Jum-RulzZ-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#761

NEHAL !!
IM desperate to read further now!!
Pleasee Update!
im sorry if i'd DIRECTLY spamm it off to pg 150! :P

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Gayatri Jethani

@GayatriJethani

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#762

Awesome update...

Loved the way u had protrayed it...

Passion nd love for each other is easily visible by there action..

U had beautifully explained there past nd present by kiss...

Update soon

thnx for pm

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#763

The birthday surprise that Swayam gave her was beautiful and I love the way how from that romantic moment you brought them back to present day !! I could totally feel their pain and even though, the cause of the pain may be each other, the only way to make the pain go away was also to be with each other !! That was truly beautiful !!

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muskan

@LoveShantannu

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#764

Grt update
Luved d way u merged d past n present
D update easily showed their pain n deep desires
Tottaly amazing luved it

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swa-ron

@swa-ron

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#765

i just wanna say it was
AWESOME , fantastically written

whn are we gonna get our new thread

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Roger

@HPHolic-3

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#766

Amazing update
I really loved the way u connected their past,n present...
Their longiness,passion,pain n all they wanted to be together just to be with each other
Swayam's mom gonna tell swayam everything
Waiting for next part n whats the matter that they have to go away from each other
Hope u end the suspense soon

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mrunmayi

@mrun_29

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Posted: 13 years ago

#767

Awesome update .. I could really understand what pain they wer goin thru .. U've written it vry well re .. I liked d post dat means u have to pm me :D waiting! Update soon .. :)

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Nirjana

@Nirju99

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#768

awesm update, revel d truth soon

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Amrita Sengupta

@idiot_box

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#769

I sooo loved this update..extremely beautifully written..I just loved Swayam's birthday surprise for Sharon..and the way you expressed their love and passion for each other through their moments of intimacy was phenomenal!looking forward to the next update very eagery now!

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ananya randhawa

@Ananya.SwaRon

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#770

admiring the update!
contrast between the kiss which they shared in their past and present was penned down beautifully..
the bliss of love could be judged from the first whereas the second reflected the pain,their desire of being together...each of them have been going through the same since they parted.
coming to the lighter note,he surely was a playful boyfriend who asked for a penalty!
hope his mother reveals the secret soon!
looking forward to the next update!

p.s:congratulations for the coming thread.