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Posted: 13 years ago
#71
Married already???
His mom will come around
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wooow! Just read all 3 parts in one go! Awesome storyline, really want to read more so have added u to my buddy list so wen u update pleaase accept! 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Manorama is arnav's mom😛
m glad naniji n arnav's dad accptd khushi😊
m so eager to knw wat khushi wud do to please manorama..hello hi bye bye!😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice update ... Manorama is always weird ... Thx for PM ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow...they are both married.
Both of them are feeling bad about hurting Manorama and Arnav's family
please continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
loved it very interesting continue soon please
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing update👏...tanx 4 d pm update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78

Rhythm Part 4

Khushi:Jalebi!Jalebi has to be made.
Arnav:What?How can i make jalebi for you now?First of all the situation is bad and i don't know cooking.
K:I will cook jalebi for mummiji to impress her.
He smiled:You know how to make Jalebi?
K:Yes.When i used to get scoldings from my parents i used to make jalebi for them to make them smile.I used to be successful in that.I hope i will be successful this time alo.
He smiled:Hopefully.Because mom loves sweets.

Khushi made jalebi.She tasted it and smiled.
K:Wow Khushi Kumari Gupta Raizada...you have done it.You will win mummiji's heart through these jalebies.
Arnav entered the kitchen.
A:Jalebi is ready?
K:Yes,taste it.
He tasted it.
A:Wow!So tasty Khushi...sweet like you.
She blushed.

She served Jalabies to everyone.
Nani:Wow Khushi.You won our heart through this.Very tasty.
Khushi smiled:Thank you naniji.
Arnav's dad:I have not tasted such a tasty jalebi in my life.After a long time i am eating home made sweets.
Manorama stared at him:You are always on business tour.So where is the time to eat home made sweets?
K:Mummiji...please taste and see how my jalebies are.
She took a bite.Khushi waited eagerly to know her reaction.
Manorama smiled and ate more jalebies.Everybody was happy.
Arnav's dad:So Manorama...you liked Khushi's cooking.
Manorama's face became dull.
Manorama said in an unpleasant tone:Jalebi was nice.

Khushi was relieved.
M:But that does'nt mean that i accepted you as my daughter in law Khushi.
Khushi's heart was pricked.Arnav was shattered.
Arnav's dad:Manorama...at least appreciate her for making tasty jalebi with a smile.

M:Smiling at her?Never!
Khushi became upset and ran away.
Arnav followed her.
A:Khushi!
She burst into tears:I failed Arnavji...
A:No Khushi...no...it's just the first day.You will be able o win mom's heart.Because you are sweet like jalebi.
Khushi got a small hope.
A:You did'nt eat jalebi while everyone else enjoyed your jalebi.
Arnav fed her jalebi.

K:Arnavji,your support is my strength.That's what gives rhythm to our love story.
A:Our love gives rhythm to our love story.
She smiled.He caressed her hair.

Khushi entered Manorama's room.
M:How dare you enter my room?I told you i have not accepted you as my daughter in law.
K:But i am the daughter in law of Raizada house and i have the right to enter your room.
M:No...never...you can't enter my room.
Khushi made a baby face:I am your darling Khushi no Manorama aunty?You won't allow me to enter your room?
Manorama stared at Khushi.Khushi was smiling.
Slowly a smile appeared on Manorama's face.Khushi hugged her.
K:How was my acting aunty?
M:Superb!I never thought you were such a wonderful actress Khushi.What a mindblowing performance!
K:Thank you my sweet aunty...I really struggled hard to cry.So difficult to enact sentimental scenes as i am not used to crying.
M:Because of your wonderful acting Arnav is madly in love wth you.
Khushi smiled:Yes,now Arnav Singh Raizada is in Khushi's pocket.
M:But dn't protect him inside the pocket.Tear the pocket.So that he will fall down.
Khushi's face became dull.

M:To celebrate this occasion i am conducting a party in your duplicate house.So that Arnav and others won't be there to see our true colour.Let us celebrate with he people who helped us in this drama.Your duplicate parents Urmila and Vinay,your duplicate sister Payal and your duplicate enemy Shyam.
They both smiled.

Party...
Urmila,Khushi,Manorama,Payal and Shyam danced.
'Hey hey..
Hey Baaje Re Baaje Re Baaje Re
Dholi Taro Dhol Baaje Dhol Baaje Dhol Baaje Dhol
Ki Dham Dham Baaje Dhol
Ki Dholi Taro Dhol Baaje Dhol Baaje Dhol Baaje Dhol
To Dham Dham Baaje Dhol...'(Hum Dil De Chuke Sanam).




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Posted: 13 years ago
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What the heck!!!!!!
Totally did not see that coming
I have to know why they are doing it
You have to update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update.. wen r u updating next part??

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