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piccola1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#111

Beautiful and Aww so satisfying ! Loved it Smita ! You really are a superb writer!

Can I request for a lil OS every few days? Or another long SS !

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madforipk

@madforipk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#112

that was so beautiful... Loved it thoroughly... Loved arms. Going to devi maiyYa.. And mami arnav confrontation...

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Niki234

@Niki234

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Posted: 13 years ago

#113

OMG!!!!!!!

SO EMOTIONAL AND PERFECT!!!!!!!!

tooo good!!😊

great udpat

hope you update soon 😃

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namedx

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Posted: 13 years ago

#114

You're the best!!!! Thank you for writing such BRILLIANT OS's!!! I swear you need to get em all compiled, lol a kindle version would be good! 😃

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arooshi

@arooshee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#115

hey thats so nice..

Welcome back !!!!!!

u always bang with ur os..!!!

thnks for pm me ..!!!

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Stapleton

@Stapleton

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Posted: 13 years ago

#116

nice os...

thanks 4 d pm

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nature-lover

@nature-lover

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Posted: 13 years ago

#117

Brilliant OS just loved it!!!

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arnavluva

@arnavluva

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Posted: 13 years ago

#118

Smita that was absolutely beautiful !!!!!

His pain, sorrow & love for Khushi shining through & the way he went to the temple to ask DM for Khushi's recovery & sindoor was an awesome touch!!!!

Brilliant concept loving it plz update soon & thanks for PM 😊 😊 😊 X x

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..Kritz..

@..Kritz..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#119

Superb!
Loved the way the revelations played out in front of the others and Arnav's convo with devi maiyya was apt and in ASR style!

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Msserialfan123

@Msserialfan123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#120

I think the kidnapping track took care of the Road to Redemption of ASR.

The guilt, the realization, the admission to himself, his declaration of love,( I presume he made it during the rescue act) and his surrender to the power of DM, everything was taken care of in the beautifully written OS. Love you Smita and your work! Keep it up Girl!

Looking forward to more gems from you...

Sumathi

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