OS: I Can't Do Without Her!

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Manju

@Drwho

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#101

Beautiful Story, moving, tender, and poignant.

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laddoo598

@laddoo598

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#102

Aww that was beautiful. As always, love your writing Smita :)

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Harshnee Vora

@harshnee

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#103

luved it

wonderful os

especially the way arnav went to the temple to pray for her, arnav worried for khushi, khushi worried for him and arnav putting sindoor on khushi's forhead.

thx a lot for the pm

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Ann

@ipkkndank

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#104

OMGGG i wish this to happen in the show too ...

Well we'll c about it that =) =)

Anyways awesome updates dear =)

You have written the emotions very very well =) =) and its awesome coz you also managed to include some humor into the situation , where kushi's saying about how she feels =) =) really fabulous =)

well must say that these two updates have everything - Love, Anger, fear, Humor, Sadness, Confession etc everything =) =) awesomeee =) Keep it up =) =)

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Onlooker

@Onlooker

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#105

This is absolutely what i want in the show..

Loved it...Your narration was brilliant and hit the spot...Like a puzzle game, everyone had something to reveal in bits to make the whole picture clear. Arnav finally came to her Devi Maiyya to beg for kushi's life.

Thanks for the pm.

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applesauce.

@applesauce.

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#106

Beautiful OS smita!⭐️

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asrksr

@asrksr

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#107

beautiful👍🏼!! i really missed your one shots,but plz plz plz dont resume your one os per week pattern. we got one part of living without you everyday, so now it is really difficult to spend a day without reading your work. plz dont ask me to re-read, because i already do that😃. waiting for next...