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stating the obvious, u r an awesum writr
love the whole story and the thought put into every part of the story from arnav khushi to aman parianjali yash story has its own charm. its nt love at first sight or feel sory for poor betrayd anjali kinda love. its geting to knw luv and thn finaly reaching a point where one wants it. beautifl
wat can i say abt arnav khushi. its lyk ther life dances around eachothr from their games to gain the upr hand to their need to keep the othr happy. arnavs decision to avoid desire to b a bter husband to realization that its nt requird. his insecurity that one day khushi wil realize she fell in luv with a monstr to his atempt to shw her he trusts her bt thn again not being able to fully let go. wow jst wow
khushis ways with him and her absolute vow that arnav must nevr suffer is so amazingly ritn
and ofcourse the nurse is completly adorable
everyday updates and that too of ths standard, hats off bt sadly i cldnt enjoy that period
finaly i m sory abt wat hapnd to ur wrk. i guess ppl find it easier to steal thn apreciate
plz do let me knw whn and where u continue ths story.
Udne Ki Aasha
Jaane Anjaane Hum Mile
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