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Posted: 13 years ago
#51
nice one
i hope ajay's dream comes true soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
Amazing update,hopefully Violin will also confess her love for Ajay soon,loved the song,just trying to hum it in my head.Thanks for the pm and will be eagerly waiting for the next.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
great update
thanks for pm
cont. soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
part 3
nice part...
cont soon dear...

PS - update ur title...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55

Violin from Goa Part 4

Even though Gurti r not named as Maaneet u ppl r reading my SS.Thanks a lot 4 that.plz cont reading it.This part is the mix of Gurti & Prateek-Amy.Hop u won't hav any prob with that.


Violin went towards Grace.

V:Grace,can I wear your saree?

Grace was surprised:I just can'T believe this.You want to wear saree?I will give you my saree.

Grace took out a saree.

G:It will suit you.

V:But I don't know how to drap saree.

G:I will help you to wear the saree.

Grace draped the saree for Violin.

V:How do I look now?Do I look like a keralite?

G:Ya.But suddenly why do you want to look like a keralite?

Violin was embarrassed:Simply.Do look nice?Tell me Grace.
G:Wonderful.
She became happy.



She ran to the terrace and looked at Ajay's balcony.She did'nt find him there.She walked off with disappointment. But she turned back to see whether he has come there or not.Ajay was standing and smiling there.He showed actions with his hands to say ht she looks pretty in saree.She ran away blushing.



Prateek met Grace at a neighbour's party.
Grace as surpried o see him there.
G:Prateek...you made friends with he neighbours so soon.
P:No.Actually they made friends with me since they came know hat i'm into movies.They re als movie buffs like me.When they invited me for the rty could'nt refuse as i knew that you will be present at the party.
She smiled.

G:How is your script writing going on?

P:Grace,since I found you how can it not go well?It's going well.I have huge expectations about this movie.

G:I will pray for you.All the best for your movie.Let it be a super hit.

P:It's not only my movie,but your movie also.Because this movie is about us.

She raised her eye brows and looked at him deeply.She was blushing.

P:Grace,actually there Is one more reason for which I searched for you.I wanted to tell you something before leaving the college.But I could'nt tell you that.I felt that I will get peace of mind only if I tell that to you. Now I will tell that to you.
He held her hand.


She blushed when he looked at her eyes.

Suddenly her saree's pallu blew touching his face.Finally she caught it ad put her saree properly.Both of them were shy to face each other.She turned back and started walking off.

P:Grace!

She turned back and looked at him with a smile.

G:No need to say anything.I understood everything from your facial expressions.Since college days I was waiting to hear it from you.But now without uttering those magical words I felt it's magic from your expressions.

He smiled with surprise.

She walked away.

Their heart beat musically.

"Main ek lehar hoon jo
Samay ki nadi se
Bas tumse milne kinaare thi aayi
Magar jo bhi ho
Har ik lehar ko mit jaana hai
Nadi mein hi jaa ke
Hmm... oo hmm...
Hmm... oo hmm...

Tumko maine chaha bhi hai
Tumhi ko maine gham bhi diye
Sharminda hoon
Sharminda hoon
Sharminda hoon…"{Ek deewana tha}.



After 2 months….

Prateek went to Grace'S house with proposal surprising everyone.

Golsavio shouted at him:How dare you…?What do you have to marry my daughter?You say that you are going to direct a movie.But ho knows whether it will happen or not.

P:The script wriing is over.The shoot will definitely start next month uncle.We got a producer who is willing to take risk with new comers.

Gol:But wht if that film becomes a flop?Your career is over.Then how will you run a family?I am a violinist who struggled hard to run the family.I struggled hard to teach my daughters.Idon't ant my daughters to suffer in their married life.

P:I promise..if my film becomes a flop I will start working again.Since I have an engineering degree I can give a comfortable life to Grace.

Gol:Still there is one more problem.You are not an Anglo Indian.

P:Who told you that I am not an Anglo Indian?

Everybody looked at him with surprise.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
hey, great update
very well written
thanks for pm
cont. soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
WOW. great update dear
thanks a ton for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi Jas,loved the update!So Violin decided on wearing a saree just because Ajay said she will look nice in a saree...awww...that was so sweet.She really does love Ajay too and Ajay knows this too.It's only a matter of her confessing her love now.My request to you is please make the confession as dreamy romantic as possible!😊I am a sucker for romance you see and love a good love story.I really liked the Prateek and Grace close moment too...hope we get a rapchik wedding with some mast Ajay/Violin romancing with some nakhre's from Violin...you know with the usual fun nok jhoks just like we had in Geet between Maneet.Also, love song!Keep up the good work and do keep me updated for the next chapter.Please try make the next uodate a longer one!🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59

beautiful update...

loved it...

pratik an anglo-indian...yeh kab hua...aur violin shying seein ajay...hiii...pyar hone laa hai...

thank u very much fr such lovely update n also fr d pm...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

eagerly waiting...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
Sweet SS.
Liking it a lot.
Something quite different.
Nice part 3 also.
Thanx for pm dear.

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