The Mirage and Oasis...New FF: Chapter 13 updated

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Omoraboti

@Omoraboti

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#301

First of all, thanks a lot for the PM. I read rhe first 3 chspters but could not catch up the latter parts. I have read the last 3 now & yearning for more .. This is really refereshing & light :)

Loving this version of Arnav & Khushi.

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winniepooh

@winniepooh

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#302

short and sweet update...loved it...

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desisweetheart9

@desisweetheart9

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#303

Thanks for the PM. Nice update. Poor Khushi. Good that Arnav is trying to comfort her.

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xmaangeetx

@xmaangeetx

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Posted: 13 years ago

#304

great

but left us on a cliff hanger

pm soon

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irene

@rennie

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#305

good one...i hope no one finds them in such a position and add 2 and 2 and come up with 10...

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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#306

just read all 6 parts and loved it

Please PM me with updates

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kriti_atharv

@kriti_atharv

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#307

wow awsuuum update dear...really loved it n thnx 4da pm dear...

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Archu

@cocoatree

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#308

Wonderful update !!😊

sorry for late reply😳

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SaJanLuv14

@SaJanLuv14

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#309

This comment isn't going to be as long as the other one as I also want to quickly write a reply for your other post as well

but Khushi is a teenager O.O that shocked18the end O_O like younger than 18

and Arnav is getting his FIRST HUG? O__O LOL he almost stated as if Khushi stole his first kiss 😆 our ASR for the first time isn't a cassanova!!! That's awesome 😛

the elevator scene is sooo cute though, I've always wanted to see a scene like that and it seems like them ignoring each other hasn't gotten too well as this moment made up for it all

my biggest worry in this ff is Khushi's parents and how she will deal with them and of course Arnav's past/how he came about to be like this (his nature) and how Khushi will work around him

I'm so excited to see them fall in love 😃

can't wait until the next chapter!