ArHi FF: Jaane Doh Naa Updated 150 [Feb 4, '13]

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Devilways

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Posted: 12 years ago

#581

Can't arnav in all his glory do away with nayan??? A tenny tiny revenge is always sweet and he can get Ayesha on his side!!! 😉

Great update nicely written!! Arnav supporting Ayesha is nice.

Thanks for the pm

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princess84

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Posted: 12 years ago

#582

an amazing part continue soon

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jakhushi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#583

Hey ...just found this FF and read all parts in one go. This very interesting and different take.

The pain that all three of them are going through is very well etched by you. Look forward to your next update.

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mannat27

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Posted: 12 years ago

#584

Lovely update!

AWESOME!!!!!!

Loved how Ayesha finally let go of everything from within her. Loved how Arnav saw a glimpse of his own sister in Ayesha. And loved how Arnav seems to have finally touched Khushi's heart in a hidden form.

Loved the update!

Update soon dear!

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kriti_atharv

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Posted: 12 years ago

#585

oh wow amazing update dear...words cannot cover ayesha's misery but wi=onderfully done...though arnav's last dialogue stole the show...loved it very much n thnx 4da pm dear...

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1likeNoOther

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Posted: 12 years ago

#586

i read this story for the first time and it is AWESOME!

i love how u r showing khushi's complicated state of mind on whether or not she should forgive arnav - i mean whatever he did was just pure mean and for god's sake she loved the guy!

but then again i guess we have to look at arnav's point of view - he always had trust and betrayal issues

and ayesha- i cannot even start to say how sorry i feel for this girl - than nayan is a seriously f**** up guy if after all that he still expects ayesh to listen to him.

and in the latest chapter - finally we get an arnavji i just went awww when she said that

anyways awesome story with awesome characters

to be honest i dont give a damn wat happened to poojali or snakewa or the rest of them - from your hints it looks like as if anjali has gone into shock cuz if i remember correctly u said something like 'she would eventually crack one day' - i seriously want khushis dad to come and visit her there in pune - maybe arnav can arrange it - and we can have an emotional reunion b/w father and daughter and maybe arhi can take a step forward to a forgiveness

wow! i wrote a lot - anyways LOVE your story - keep writing and i will be waiting for an update 😃😊👍🏼

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#587

yeah that was horrible what she went through and that nayan if he tries this crap that he was innocent then thats just pathetic
what a pathetic excuse of a human being he is man
how could he do this to that girl why
i cant imagine what ayesha went through but she was lucky she got out before she was completely ruined
glad she found all about that rat bag who needs to be taught a lesson and soon
wonder what the guptas and raizadas are doing
hope she can be okay soon ayesh i mean
loved it