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twinstar46

@twinstar46

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#901

That was a beautiful story. I am glad you finished it. I just read it all in one go, and I don't think I was able to submit my like for each chapter. But, I am mostly a silent reader and rarely post comments unless I really, truly loved the story.

I admired the way you built the relationships in the plot and how even though it was a light fanfic, it had so many emotions. It was also refreshing to have a story set way in the future rather than trailing the current show storyline. You are a great writer.

Thanks so much for sharing your story with us.

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meenaluma

@meenaluma

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#902

fabulous ending

loved it a lot

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JerryTheMouse

@JerryTheMouse

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#903

Finally!

That was beautiful! I cherished how you went back no forth between their togetherness and their wedding rasams. It was all so symbolic! And the love between my believed Khushi and Arnav was too cute to read about.

Thank you thank you for finally!

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#904

Wonderful ending! Loved it to the core. Especially the little pep talk Khushi gave as a concerned mother in law.!!

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bushrayou

@bushrayou

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#905

the smile on my face is insane!!! WOW!! what a perfect way to end one of the most endearing and beautiful stories I have read!

Once again you have written something that has left me feeling so happy, content, and completely fulfilled. I feel like there could not have been a better way to end this story, or a better way to start this one!

I fell in love with characters that you completely made up and cultivated and created into these images that I feel like I have been watching on screen forever.

You wrote something that I only hope the actual writers would be able to glimpse into their writing.

The way this part came together is beautiful. The flashbacks of the cermony, the feelings that poured through your writing, the emotions that you illustrated, the love that was evident is beautiful!!

thank you for inculding us on this once in a life time journey with these characters and individuals.

thank you for writing for us always and for always giving us something memorable.

THank you.

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appy

@appy_12

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#906

Before I say anything else.. EPILOGUE! :P :D

Like Meera said, this could go on forever. Show us a snapshot of a granny Khushi and a Dada ASR, na? ;)

Ok, so the wedding , the wedding night *wink*, the family, the ArHi.. Oh My God! I missed "Finally!" :D :D

But Finally! I did make it! :P

I love this family.. Any chance they might do a cameo in your upcoming OSes or anything like that?? Somehow, I'm not ready to leave them yet!

Wow, Rae.. The things you do with just words!

Can't believe this is ending. But all good things have to end, that is what they say, right? Finally is one of my favorite stories, and I'll keep revisiting this space! :P

Thank you for giving us Aynu, Sama, Amu, Karan, Akshay, Priyanka and this huuuge amazing family with "Finally!", Rae! :)

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Varsha

@Psychedelic

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#907

Mera Ayaan! *sigh* This one was so beautifully penned Rae! Interweaving the flashbacks of the wedding and the ceremonies with the present *ahem* lovemaking for Ayaan and Sama. Loved it! Thank you for giving us a peek into the wedding! :) Arnav Khushi ki tarah they dont get to do it twice na! :p

I want to pick out so many things here and quote but then I would practically be quoting the whole update. But it was an epic update. The sweet and teasing moments with the family and Arnav's impatience to get Khushi alone! LOL Somethings never change. They aren't meant to! :D

And Sama got the talk from Khushi that Khushi herself never did. She only got a letter from her MIL.

A perfect culmination to a perfect wedding! And the afterglow for the newly weds. Kudos on the choice of songs again! :) You have used both of these songs for other updates na? But it fit well here! :)

Thank you so much Rae for giving life to these characters through your story! I never want it to end!

P.S. Epilogue kab milega? :) I cant wait!! :D

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Shobhana

@-Shobhu21-

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#908

I know Im hell late !! But I hope you forgive, and Im sorry !!

And that too for commenting on something I love like hell !!
FInally !! !! Im crying and Im just so damn happpy !!!

Crying cause Finally's ended !! But no not exactly !!
can we please please please get an epilogue ??? I want one so damn badly !! plll !!

And as for this !!
*blushes*
Thanks like hell for the totally amazing love making scene out here !!
*blushes more* Ayaan and Sama now one forever !! Haiii !! Im still swooning !!

And I wont say a word about Sama and Ayaan's union !! Cause its totally wonderful and exceptionally well written Rae !! And I love you so much more for writing this !!

And then their rasams intermixed in between !! haiii !! I absolutely loved thos flashbacks out there !! And I love Arnav and Khushi so much more now !! Especially Arnav !! haiii !! The way he asks Sama to call them Mama - Papa !! That was just over sweet of him !! And Khushi !!She;s just a sweeto pie man !!

And the part where Arnav calls Khushi !! 🤣 ! I went mad laughing over here !!
And the cousin teasing brigade somehow never stops anywhere now does it ?? These people are just a damn good family !! And I love them alll !!*muahhh*

Haiii !! And with this its the end !! Happily ever after !! Mummaa !! I'll miss my Aynu and Sama !! And his parents !! haiii !! Thank you so much for writing this one Rae !

A big kissy and huggy to my Aynu and Sama !! And a big jhappi pappi to Arnav Khushi tooo !! Love love love you !!!

And rae !! Sorry once again for being extremely late !!