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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#881

Aha! Sona and Alanki! :D

Hello people!! Ready for Part B of Chapter 17, guys?

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#882

*EDITED - The rest is on a restricted blog due to blatant plagiarism of my work.

Edited by AngelTeen - 12 years ago

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#883

Res

Now I believe in luck stars. First for final chapter of finally. My stupid mobile doesn't support the center justified stuff in one screen. So I'm going to read and edit tomorrow. 😳

--Edited--

I'm sorry. Very late. I was away for the weekend.

Finally my wait for the final chapter of Finally! and me first for it. *Pinches harder to acknowledge that it actually happened :P*

Blush!

Sigh!

Blush!

Sigh!

Blush!

Sigh!☺️ --> That redness in cheeks are real for me now :)

Amazing ending.

Spectacular love.

heart stopping romance.

over whelming family happiness.

perfect vibrant marriage ceremony twined with love!

I so so so so so loved it.

How you traveled back and forth from the SR scene to marriage and back.

"I love you and will love you ever!" - Tears! bubbling inside my eyes.

The touch at ending - "You'll be always mine and I yours, finally" - EPIC touch!

Amazing, Rae.

Love u!

And we should get an epilogue for this, isn't it? Please?

Edited by --Siva-- - 13 years ago

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...Doctor...

@...Doctor...

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#884

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Edit:

Finally! Yay! I'll miss you *wipes tear*

First & foremost I loved the transition from the flashback to the present. All of them were so perfect. Gave a good feel to the chapter.

*Blushes*

*Blushes some more*

I started blushing as soon as I read the first word. Don't ask me why :P

And Ayaan is so good. I'm not gonna comment in detail about the love making scene, again don't ask me why ☺️ I'd just say that I loved it & it was beautiful. Perfectly described. Damn I'm suddenly feeling so hot! *blushes*

Loved that you wrote about all the rasams, I thought we won't get to read anything except the wedding night in this chapter but I was in for a surprise. Loved the varmala, pheras and those little games.

Loved Ayaan's gesture of holding Sama's hand while taking pheras. So cute!

And no one won the ring game? Why? I wanted Aynu to win *whines*

Yay! The teasing brigade willnever stop teasing them. I love you all. Karan's joke was quite hilarious. Ayaan's reaction to a Bengali marriage has to be Kodak moment :D

The vidaai scene was emotional but I loved the bonding b/w the Mehras & the Raizadas. They really are one big family now. A big happy family :)

Awww Arnav-khushi are the best in laws. Sama is really lucky. Loved the way Arnav asked her to call them Mumma-papa & called her their daughter. Khushi's advice about the wedding night was beautifully done. I love this sweet mother-daughter convo. Very touching! And khushi winked...aye haaye she's a naughty saas *winks*

Did I mention that I love Arnav? I didn't ryt? I love Arnav! Suhaag raat bete ki hai but khud chance maar raha hai. I can't believe that he asked khushi to come to their room, I mean sabke saamne. They're quite romantic & I thought romance b/w couples died after 40. Silly me! 😆

Finally they are one. Soulmates! Perfect ending!

And yeah I love the way you refer Ayaan as Ayaan Arnav Singh Raizada, gives me a good feeling.

And I'll miss Finally!. I want to keep typing & never stop. I think I should stop now.

P.S.- Epilogue? I'm waiting! Maybe this will help you in updating soon:

*Evil laugh*

Edited by ...Doctor... - 13 years ago

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Sona

@mistyrains

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#885

Res.

You know exactly how to make a person insanely happy and then cry like one hell of a romantic fool. *Wipes away a tear*

The way the chapter started with Sama's hug ( too beautiful!) and then the kiss on her hand where his name was written, these lines gives away how wonderful your imagination his ( not to mention toe-curlingly romantic, sigh!).

I really liked this style of dissecting the whole chapter with the marriage ceremony instances, it was pleasantly unique.

Bete ki shaadi ho gayyee ho par phir bhi Arnav Singh Raizada couldn't wait to get his wife alone - the dulhe ki maa!

HAHAHAHAHAHA! E-P-I-C.😆

And the love-making was so beautifully written. So sensual, in fact I don't think even a word in the whole scene was anything remotely close to vulgar. Felt like reading an exquisite poem. Sama's emotions, Ayaan's , everything was just so perfect.

Rulaa diya mujhe Rae.

P.S. I think you know how to make all of us Finally! readers happy.

P.P.S Epilogue

Please?

Edited by mistyrains - 13 years ago

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Shruti

@...shruti...

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#886

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EDIT***

m editing this post with a real broad smile on my face and my dad sitting infront is thinking m a real lost cause so just ghoorofying at me😆

coming to the update

it was so beautiful Rae i really have no words to say

starting from the hug to the way aryan trying to make sama comfortable was just awesome

this teeny weeny scene shows that he is so caring that his first priority is to make her comfortable and not abt his pleasure 😳

then the love making part u write first i want to gush on that it was written so beautifully and emotionally

not only showing the joining of bodies but the oneness of the souls

and i am already following so many SS/ FF here on IF plus i am a great fan of reading so follow many copyrighted author books and i can literally vouch on it that the way u wrote the love making part coupled with the snatchets of wedding is really a new area and i haven't read anywhere which makes it unique and i really really adored this unique style of writing

from the snatchets the two scene really impacted me was arnav warning his son to keep sama happy and the other part was khushi's where she pacify's the fear of sama regarding her first night

those things really touched my heart if and when i get married i would really love to hv a mother-in-law and father-in-law like that and aynu too such a loving hubby he will be😳

Bete ki shaadi ho gayyee ho par phir bhi Arnav Singh Raizada couldn't wait to get his wife alone - the dulhe ki maa!

i couldnot help myself but this above line^^^ 😆 was totally epic😛

and lastly epilogue i would say neki aur pooch pooch jaldi se dedo

m waiting for it

PS if you dont mind Rae can you please give me the document version of this story of yours m gonna keep it with me and i vouch on it i wont pass it to anyone but i want to read this story time n time again 😊

Edited by Shruti_P - 13 years ago

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lively-piia

@lively-piia

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#887

wat an end?????????????

perfect ...

lvd it

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#888

Res. Thank God, I saw it before I finished for the day.

You've become quite the pro at the mature parts, haven't you? Well done! I don't read detailed love making scenes but whatever little I did read here, was beautifully written

But the part that stood out for me was the actual wedding. Thank you for giving us a little peek into their final feelings as the journey came to its natural destination. As always, your words did complete justice to the emotions a couple feels at Finally! being married to each other. And the little teasing and nok-jhok - Big Fat Punjabi Wedding - Delhi style - very warm and a lot of fun.

PS: Khushi's little talk with Sama - very sweet but believe me if it happened to you, you'd be dying of embarrassment (wink!) :P

Epilogue! Of course, epilogue. Remember, this can be a never ending story :D

Edited by meera30 - 13 years ago

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samiachy

@samiachy

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#889

This should actually be made into a movie! I loved it :D

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farheen75

@farheen75

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#890

It was a lovely update...I am sad that it's finished but happy at the same time that it ended so beautifully...I wish that if every mother in law and father in law would be like arnav and Khushi then life would be an amazing journey for every daughter in law...the way Khushi spoke to Sama was so touching and this was coming from a woman who didn't have an easy going either with her husband or in laws and who wasn't got the warm welcome like Sama got but still it didn't make her bitter or vindictive,she deserves all the happiness that she gets and more.

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