MAANEET FF JAANE TU YA JAANE NA #6 link #7 pg135 - Page 18

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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing yet painful part fr both maan geet...
cant wait fr the next update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
OH DEAR a very heart wrenching update ...but very nicely written ..Maan's pain Geet's hurting ...brilliant ..
In Maaneet case destiny shld give them a sec chance ..coz their love is eternal and pure ..yes Maan's realisation is belated but never!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey piya kaisi he oh yaar me toda late hogayee comment dene me wo me kuch din se di ki bacho ke saath busy thi lekin tera FF padne se door nahi well nice one so geet realises maan pain maan at last understand his devilness towards geet angel he want to finish his life lekin waha ek angel iski salamati ki duwa kar rahi precap nice well ur words osum

"TRUE LOVE ALWAYS FINDS A WAY"

it means alot jaroor hogi
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Posted: 13 years ago
zbardst...finally MAAN ko aqal ayee
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update piya
all the emotions were potrayed perfectly
maan realizing what he has done with geet
and getting a own taste of his medicine
see piya whatever u have planned fro maaneet in thsi FF
pzl just want to aks u something that plz dont let maaneet to meet soon
even if geet tries to meet him he should try to avoid her
but if u have abetter thing in mind then it will be more interesting

loved teh selection of song
contiu esoon
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Posted: 13 years ago

waiting dear
what about ur FF which u changed to SS would u update it today
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Posted: 13 years ago

waiting
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for your love and support dear friends.Here is the next update I hope each one of u will enjoy reading it.
love-Piya
PART 35


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Destiny had once again started playing a game with Maaneet's life

Geet was pretending of forgetting him but the truth was that her heart was still affected by his name or else how was it possible for her to understand his pains when they were miles apart'

Maan had finally realized his love for Geet but the main question is will Destiny give him another chance to get back his soul, his Geet or would he lead his life like a living dead?

Only time can answer this question but there is another truth that acts as a silver lining in this situation'the one and only truth

"TRUE LOVE ALWAYS FINDS A WAY"

Meanwhile, Sanju and Brad had informed Prem and Adi about the sudden disappearance of Geet

The foursome were tensed about Geet's whereabouts

Brad knew about the professional attitude of Geet and hence he could figure out that the situation was something serious or else Geet would have never behaved in this manner

He was not angry with Geet infact he was worried for his friend but the problem was none of them knew where Geet would be at this point of time

Sanju was getting nervous and was praying for the safety of Geet

Prem remained calm as he knew Geet would never do any wrong act and if they need to find out about Geet they had to use their brains rather than wasting their time by getting emotional

Prem: Sanju Geet ka mobile chal raha haina? [Sanju is Geet's mobile still working?]

Sanju: Haan par wo call accept nahi kar rahi [Yes, but she is not picking up the call]

Prem: Koi baat nahi humare liye itna hi kafi hai [No problem this clue is enough for us]

Prem: Brad Geet's mobile is working so we can trace her location if we take the help of the police officials. Can u pls use your contacts and complete the necessary formalities quickly?

Brad: Offcourse dude

Brad dials a number from his mobile and makes the necessary arrangements

The official informs them that Geet's mobile was at the church

All 4 of them get into the car and straightaway head for the church

As soon as they enter the church they find Geet kneeling on her knees and praying sincerely for someone

They decided not to disturb her and all 4 of them bowed down in front of the Almighty thus giving Geet their support in her prays

Meanwhile,

In India,

The situation was tensed in the hospital as the doctors were struggling to cure Maan

Maan had lost tremendous amount of blood because of which his body had become weak

Besides this the heavy dose of the sleeping pills and his allergy to honey were acting as a lethal combo in successfully defeating the medical treatments that the doctors were giving to Maan

Since Maan was a superstar, all the best doctors were carrying out his operation but their skills were not bearing any fruit as Maan was not responding to the treatment maybe, because he himself didn't want to survive.

The operation went on for several hours and finally the doctors came out from the OT

The journalists pounced on them to know about Maan's condition

The doctors informed them that they tried their level best and to some extent they were successful however they could not prevent Maan from entering the state of coma

This news was a shocker

The great MSK was now in coma. Was this the end of his superstardom status? Till what time would he remain in coma? Will he ever wake up? Or was this the end?

These were some of the headlines that were flashing on the TV screens

The doctors were hoping for the best but their assurance was too weak to be true

Maan is taken to the ICU on a stretcher; it appeared as if he was dead.

Hollywood,

Geet felt as if someone was snatching her breath away

She could see the messenger of death knocking the doors of her soul and trying to get an entry into it so that it could take her soul, her Maan away from her forever

But, Geet's love was strong enough to face this storm she knew she had to reach Maan and her love had the power to get him back

India,

Maan's condition was deteriorating

He couldn't feel the cool breeze of the wind neither could he hear the dreadful sound of destiny

He had accepted defeat; his eyes were closed and were lost in the mysterious tunnel of darkness where there was no entry for any source of light to disperse its radiance

His neck was aligned to one side of his shoulder as if waiting for the moment when the Lord of Death would cut his head with his sword thus punishing him for his sins

His face was pale and it seemed every drop of blood was slowly getting removed from his body

His lips were dry thus giving signals that his life was like a desert wherein the shower of rain can never make an entry

His hands and legs were paralyzed making it evident that he was all alone and this was his fate, to die a lone death

The darkness intensified and he could see fire clad arms inviting him in his embrace

His body was already dead and now it was time for him to submit his soul to the folds of death

His soul started to take the first step towards his closing stages when all of a sudden a powerful light started dominating the darkness as if trying to compete with it in a battle

Maan's soul could not move any further it seemed it recognized this light, yes the angelic light which was fighting with the terror of dead and was ensuring his survival

There was a strange strength in this light, it was pure and full of love and slowly Maan sould visualize the outline figure of this angel

Her innocence gave a new life to Maan's eyes

The touch of her divinity gave a new strength to his shattered self

Her fragrance took the form of blood and started running in his body

Her unconditional love and care gave Maan the pleasure to be wet in the most magical rain of his life

The darkness had vanished completely and now he could see brightness dispersed around him which allowed him to see the most beautiful face of this world

The face of his angel, his Geet, yes she was here to save him, she was here to make him realize that his life was her possession and he had no right to destroy it without her permission

Their love was way beyond the imagination of this universe, today they might be physically away but this did not prevent them to meet each other

Maan wanted to hug her, to kiss her, to go down on his knees and plead for forgiveness but he was unable to gather the courage, the only word that he could utter was'

Maan's soul: Geet'

Geet closed her eyes as if trying to live this moment

She had forgotten the way her name appeared from Maan's lips'Oh it still seemed magical

Maan's soul: Geet'

The breeze touched her soul lovingly and requested her to talk to Maan

Geet's soul: Mera naam ab tak aapko yaad hai? [U still remember my name?]

Maan's soul was set ablaze by this question of Geet

Geet's soul: Kya hua? Mere sawal ka jawab nahi denge? [What happened? Won't u give an answer to my question?]

Maan's soul: Tumhara naam toh humesha se hi meri dhadkano mein samaya hua tha par afsoos ye hai ke main apni dhadkano ki sachayi samaj nahi paaya aur tumhe sada k liye kho baita [Your name was imprinted on my heartbeats right from the beginning but alas I was a fool as I failed to understand this truth and I lost u forever]

Geet's soul winced in pain

Geet's soul: Aapko sach mein lagta hai k aapne mujhe kho diya? Kya itna hi bharosa karte hai aap apni Geet par? Shayad ab bhi aapko lagta hai ke mera pyar ek dhikhawa hai [Do u really think that u have lost me? Is this the trust u have on your Geet? It seems u still think that my love is fake]

Maan's soul: Mujhe aur sharminda mat karo Geet, main janta hoon maine gunha kiya hai par ho sake toh mujhpar bharosa karo [Don't increase my guilt Geet. I am aware that I have commited a sin but if possible pls trust me]

Geet's soul: Bharosa? Kaise karlu main aappar bharosa jab ke aaj phir se aapne mere vishwas ka katal kiya hai [Trust? How am I supposed to trust u Maan when once again u have murdered my faith with your own hands today]

Maan's soul: Nahi Geet ye galat hai maine tumhare vishwaas ko nahi toda balki aaj maine khud ko saza di hai taaki apni zindagi apni Geet ko thes pauchane ke gunah ka bhoj kuch hadh tak main kum kar saku [No Geet this is wrong I have not destroyed your trust infact today I tried to punish myself for accusing my life, my Geet, so that I could reduce some portion of my guilt]

Geet's soul: Bhoj kum hua Maan? [So did ur guilt reduce?]

Maan's soul: Nahi [No]

Geet's soul: Hoga bhi kaise aaj jo harkat aapne ki hai uss harkat se toh aapki galtiyaan gunha mein tabdeel ho chuki hai [This had to happen as today your stupid act has converted your mistakes into an unforgivable sin]

Maan's soul: Geet maine toh khud ko saza deni ki koshish ki hai iss aas mein k shayad mujhe tumhari maafi mil jaaye [Geet I tried to torture my self in the hope that u might just forgive me]

Geet's soul: Jhooth keh rahe hai aap, agar aapko meri maafi chahiye thi toh aap mujhpar, APNI GEET par apna haq jatate [U r a liar, if u wanted my forgiveness then u would have claimed UR GEET by showing your authority on her]

Maan looked at her unbelievably

Geet's soul: Agar aap mujhe apni baho mein sach mein sametna chahte toh iss maksad ko pura karne k liye aap mujhe, APNI GEET ko duniya ke har ek kone mein jaakar dhundthe aur badi hi shaan se mujhe apne aaghosh mein lekar humare pyar k ghar mein mera ghrahpravesh karwate [If u really wanted to take me in your embrace then u would have searched for me in every corner of this world to accomplish this mission, and after we met u would have scooped me in your arms and would have taken me to our love nest where the arrangements of my ghrahpravesh would be welcoming me]

Geet's soul: Agar aap wakai mere zakhmo par apne pyar ka malham lagana chahte toh aap bade hi pyar se mera sar apne godh mein rakh apne hotho se mere hotho ko chumkar mujhe ek nayi zindagi ka taufa de dethe [If u really wanted to heal my wounds then u would have placed my head on your lap and would have sealed my lips with your loving lips thus giving me the boon of a new life]

Geet's soul: Agar aap APNI GEET ko wakai mein apni zindagi mein shamil karna chahte toh aap usse maafi maangne k bayage usse ye kehthe ke Geet main tumhse pyar karta hoon aur meri zindagi tumhare bagair adhuri hai [If u really wanted UR GEET to enter ur life again then instead of asking for forgiveness u would have confessed, Geet I love u and my life is incomplete without u]

Maan could see an unsaid pain in her eyes'Oh he wanted to wipe her tears there and then

Geet's soul: Aapki kasam Maan aapki Geet momm ki tarah aapki baho mein simat jaati par afsoos aapne aisa nahi kiya [I swear by your name Maan I would have melted in your arms with this confession of yours but alas u did not do this]

Geet's soul: Aapne khud ko thes pauchayi ye jaante hue bhi k aapki takleef mujhe saido maut de jaati hai [U tortured yourself inspite of knowing the fact that ur pain gives me thousands of death]

Maan's soul: Nahi Geet aisa nahi hai main tumhe takleef nahi pauchana chahta tha [No Geet this is not the case I did not wish to give u any pain]

Geet's soul: Par aapne aisa kiya Maan aapne khud ko saza di ye jaante hue k apko saza dene ka haq sirf AAPKI GEET ka hai. Kya ye haq bhi aapne cheen liya mujhse ? [But u did this Maan, u knew only YOUR GEET had the right to give u a punishment but it looks like u have snatched this right from me]

Maan's soul: Nahi Geet main tumhe dubara kho nahi sakta [No Geet I can't afford to lose u all over again]

Geet's soul: Aapne mujhe pehle toh nahi khoya tha par ab lagta hai aap mujhe kho doge kyunki aaj aapki iss harkat se mere pyar ko thes pauchi hai aur shayad iske liye main aapko maaf na kar saku'main jaa rahi hoon Maan par shayad aapko isse koi fark nahi padega kyunki aapko toh apni shahi neend pyari hai'Geet ka pyar nahi [U had not lost me before but I guess u have lost me forever with the stupid act that u committed today. I cannot forgive u as today u have wounded my love . I am going Maan and I sure my absence won't affect u as u are happy with your royal sleep'Geet's love is not important to u]

The intensity of the light started to reduce

Geet's soul was slowly walking away from Maan with the movement of the wind

Maan could not let this happen. He had to stop her. He had to find his life back, his Geet, she was his possession and he will not allow her to go away from him.

Geet was almost gone by now the last traces of her duppata was flying in the air

A sudden fear of losing Geet again became dominant in Maan's mind and all of a sudden he got a strange strength, the strength of Geet's love which gave him a new life

He opened his eyes and extended his hand to hold the duppatta as the 3 magical words made way through his mouth thus bringing him to reality

Maan: Geet I love u'.

Hollywood,

Geet opened her eyes and a lone tear escaped her eyes as she knew her Maan was safe and sound

India,

The doctors were surprised to see a new life in Maan, they termed it as a miracle but Maan knew it was the magic of Geet's unconditional love'a love which could never be explained in terms of words but which belonged only to him'

PRECAP: Maan tries to find information about Geet

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Part 36: Page 58

Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
update geet soul gave man life the way you explain geet feelings of pain even she was far away from maan



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