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Posted: 13 years ago
WOW...with every line of your where Arnav was suffering...i was dying every second...i was to a silent crying point and I cudn handle it anymore...and thnx to you for the blood-curdling scream tht Arnav gave...tho i read it...i totally felt it...THNX a million to bring back a warmed calmed Arnav back...thnx a million more for finally getting the two meet again...specially after he has recovered...u knw reading ur Update litterally makes me feel like only if u'd do it, without using Arnav and Khushi's name u can make an Awesome future in the writing world...LOVED UR WORK TO INFINITE...hw i wish this was all in a hardcopy...i'd read it like...forever...Awesome!!!...and once agn...o knw i m a begger in this case and u get frustrated...but i cnt stop myslf from saying you to UPDATE SOON!!! :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
that was amazing! beautifully written. the way you described arnav's guilt and pain felt so real that it even made me cry. you are an amazing writer. glad to see that arnav is recovering and i really like his relationship with his aunt. i just couldn't bear to see him in so much pain. i really felt so bad for him. i loved the ending. can't wait to read more. please update soon. thanks for the pm. 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
wonderful update!! the way u portrayed arnav's transition was awwsum...
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Posted: 13 years ago
wonderful. amazing. thnx for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
excellent. loved it. thnx for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh my God this FF is just such a brilliant piece of work, the whole wedding was just described so well! I loved it and this thing between Arnav and Khushi is just so damn good, the way you have portrayed the characters is amazing. I read it all in one go and I have only one word BEAUTIFUL!
Can't wait to know what happens next.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ummm I din't notice there was a Chapter 14 and well I'm speechless after reading it, the way you described how his dark past engulfed him and the grief, remorse and nightmares...WOW that was just so well put, and I loved reading the transformation and how he tried to get back, the changes were described so well and now that he has met Khushi again I just hope that the void completely disappears.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg! That was one fabulous update. Arnav's pain and guilt was put well in words. It brought tears to me. He struggled 11 months and he hit rock bottom. The way he collapssed from top position to nobody and again he rose from dead like pheonix. Loved it. you did complete justice to his inner turmoil. And am glad he tried to cope up on his own but ofcourse with his family's love and support. Loved manorama's concern for him and the words she chose to explain things to him was marvelous.
Ofcourse he has to meet KKG and that was one shocking meet. And I can't wait for next update to see the face off again. He felt warmth and peace when he saw her not anger. 👏👏👏👏👏
Please update soon. I am biting my nails and stalking the post like any thing
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome super awesome update.. you wouldn't believe.. it felt like I was with arnav and feeling the pain through all the days of despair.. beautifully written.. his journey from self loathing and self destruction to.. calling his mami his 'mom'.. moving on from past and walking on the path of future.

Khushi was in trouble again.. what if arnav wasn't there.. or is it Des-tuh-nee.. ;)

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Posted: 13 years ago
SOmething is alike missing! But not too much! This is great! I like guys that have gone through tragedies :) Arnav and his alcohol : beautiful!! :D can't wait til they talk!

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