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snehashetty34

@snehashetty34

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Posted: 13 years ago

#561

oh my god!!!!!!!

that was something which is hard to describe !!

amazing piece of work and i think this is best chapter so far well written...👏

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zeedia

@zeedia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#562

You are an amazing writer
The update was fab
I dont know what to say more..I m speechless.

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Siona

@.m.a.r.y.s.i.o.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#563

superb update dear...and pls don't say to delete ur account coze i luv ur updates to read😎

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Piyali

@love.piyali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#564

Wow yaar...you've shown it so well...I mean ASR losing his b'ss due to all that mental pressure...him going into depression and then finally coming back...everythin was just wow!!...thanks for the pm..

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laksh65

@laksh65

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Posted: 13 years ago

#565

expressions of arnav, guilt, passion, haunting of his past, were portrayed beautifully, ending with dramatic arshi meeting was superb, thoroughly enjoyed this update. please cont soon.

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meera06

@meera06

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Posted: 13 years ago

#566

I loved this chapter!

The way you have described Arnav's feelings was remarkable...n at the end the unexpected meeting with Khushi was just fab..

Great work!

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Sharna aka Salena

@xMidnightStarx

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Posted: 13 years ago

#567

So I have just read all the chapters in one go!

Wow, one of the best FF's I have ever read!! You are such a fantastic writer, every chapter is brilliantly written!

I especially loved the recent chapter, Chapter 14!

Haha, 14 is my lucky number!

The way you described Arnav's painful journey through his guilt and then he finally meets Khushi! Saved her just like a hero and the dialogue he said!! Wow, wow, wow!

No words to describe!!

Will send you a friends request, please accept and PM me updates! :)

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sakadafi

@sakadafi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#568

One word...wow!!! Okay, more than a word actually. That was amazing. The flow of emotions through Arnav and all the feelings he was going through was depicted beautifully. His rise, his fall, and him rebuilding himself again...so much happened here. A full circle indeed. This was a beautiful update! Can't wait for the next one!!

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Ayesha

@stunning.ayesha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#569

It was very emotional I thought throughout the update I won't cry but at last u made me cry...he met her again after 1 year it was so painful to read this update...i just loved it...u bring the real pain of arnav nd make us feel that too just awesome

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asdfjkl

@asdfjkl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#570

I think this might be the best chapter yet. It was such an emotional chapter reading through Arnav's journey of self-loathing and how he hit rock-bottom. The way you wrote about it and "jumped" through the year was amazing. It just emphasized his pain and the path he had taken. The reader could actually feel what Arnav was going through

I'm glad he is getting better and that his relationship with his Mami is so much stronger. When you wrote that he had her as "mom" in his phone, my heart just melted. Arnav has always been kind of a kid at heart that craves parental love, and now he has realized he has been getting it from his aunt

Oh, so Khushi and Arnav finally meet again. Except this time he doesn't really cause her to fall, but catches her from falling. I'm curious to know how this meeting will go, and why Khushi was trapped in the alley with those guys

As always, your writing style has been amazing. The way you write enhances the story you are telling and adds to the story's charm