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nina

@DeePiku

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Posted: 13 years ago

#321

YIPEEE! Arnu caught her as usual!!!!! update soonnn! They are gonna meet!

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Omoraboti

@Omoraboti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#322

Girl! I hope you decide to write professionally someday .. This is going too good! Will be Waiting for the next update ...

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dingle

@dingle

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Posted: 13 years ago

#323

This update was witchcraft. You painted the scene really well. I love the fact that Khushi is such a romantic and fan of literature. Everytime i visit these old homes it does leave you with a sense of the old world and that feeling was envoked here too 😊

Plus with Arnav-Khushi theres a epic feeling of star crossed lovers seeping throughout the scenes. I abos**tely cant wait to read more!

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Avani

@highonshows

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#324

awww the mansion is truly a mansion...and finally La again here too...

N she falls...but he catches wow here too...

Amazing...

cant wait yaar chander i love ur writing...n i m sooo glad ur made Akash a bit different here...n manorama mami too...

Wonder if Shyam would somehow turn up somewhere??? and NK too...

But these 2 will certainly have chemistry burning holes in the mansion rooms... i bet Anjali defntly has her room next to Arnav...and Khushi ehehehehe

cant wait...for teh enxt chapter...this is getting sooo interesting...

k i'll stop...

But pls...update soon...i m soo nervous and ancious...for the next update...my finger are having hard time typing...

Avni😆😆😆

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Manju

@Drwho

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#325

Oh so they finally come face to face! Excellent!

Eager to see how Khushi handles this encounter!

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Joti

@winnie7500

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Posted: 13 years ago

#326

Not sure what to say since your update pretty much says it all.

You've just proved-again-that your writing is phenomenal and.. just simply divine. The words leapt off the page and the pictures/visuals/the story all danced in front of my eyes.

The descriptions of the house did justice to the picture, mammiji is as amusing as ever and touch of art ("Pyramus and Thisbe") and Sinatra's song both add a more romantic appeal to the wedding-house. Of course you left us hanging-again just as soon as Khushi's knight in (rusted armour?) came to her rescue. You are evil, in that regard..

Update soon! I'm waiting to read all about the wedding rituals etc and more importantly we've been Arnav-less for too long and him and Khushi have yet to have a proper conversation!

Edited by winnie7500 - 13 years ago

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 13 years ago

#327

Loved it beautiful update ...cant wait to see arnavs reaction too kushi...continue soon

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

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Posted: 13 years ago

#328

Brilliant update yay they have finally met really felt for Khushi and all of her emotions. Love Khushi's relationship with the family

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undercoverhappy

@undercoverhappy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#329

beautifully written👏

love how u have thoughtfully written this update (start updating regularly)

so much you fit into this chapter

they finally meet 😍

ur very mean with ending this chapter like this

loved Frank S. lyrics poor Kushi looks like she's shocked 😃

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@inkinscription

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Posted: 13 years ago

#330

Thank you for the comments, i am trying to write the next one down. I am fumbling a bit with it. Meanwhile, keep commenting.. The likes have gone to 40 something... i would expect the comments to do so as well.

To those to reg and religiously comment, you all are so high up on my books and i write only for u!😊

Take Care

Edited by chander992 - 13 years ago