ArShi:Destiny With TRAILER Thread I - Page 34

for a minute there i was folled that u had updated the next chapter wen i saw ur post...

loved it!
really liked akash, payal, and mami's characters.

Okay first of all, good idea to include the definitions of destiny in the beginning!

I feel like I'm reading a diary now… The way Anjali broke the news of her status was funny yet awkward.. I love the easy and realistic way in which you portray reactions and emotions… The in-flight experience, airport scene, the drive back, the way Khushi reacted on seeing the house, all spot on dear…

Oh boy, your description of the mansion had me wanting to live there myself… WOW, now that is LUXURY man!!! Each and every detail you described painted a very vivid image of the house in my mind… Simply loved reading those paras… Awww then comes the meet-the-family time! Loved Mamiji here and everyone is just so accommodating and loving… A great family and an even more awesome ambience… Akash was just adorable and so was Payal… Fell in love with them yaar… I'm so glad Akash is the groom, there was a small doubt in my mind whether Arnav was getting married, though highly impossible, you never know what twist the writer has in store for you!!

Coming to Arnav & La's relationship… No emotions, just superficial… Atleast it's like that for him, the poor girl though is gonna have her heart broken… It was good to read about him, his thoughts and beliefs.. He has a premonition man! Let's see what turns Life brings into the lives of two people who were destined to be with each other!!

Amazing update, continue soon! Thnx for the pm dear. Sorry couldn't comment earlier, moved to a new city as I got a job! Take care

Its awesome...I read it jus today night...plz do pm me wen u update...

when r u updating...i m hooked on to this ff!

Gosh i looove ur story!!!

I know, i am horribly late but i swear, i wrote and re wrote this update. It wasn't panning up to what i had thought. Finally, i have caught the reins on this bad boy and i am in the process of finishing it off. Till then, to all those who are eagerly waiting, i would say, your wait maybe just for a few more hours and till then, enjoy this slight preview 😊

"Khushi, are you okay?" Anjali then rushed forward and held onto the girl's right arm.

His eyes switched back onto the girl. She was squirming away; she tried to pry her left shoulder away from his grip. She looked visibly petrified and uncomfortable. He seemed to notice her stare. Her eyes were laced with an emotion so foreign; he felt his fingers recoil away from her instantly.

As Arnav focused back onto the situation, he saw that Akash hurriedly held her by her left arm and he noticed that her lips were quivering. It must be her foot that she injured, he thought. She gritted her teeth and held onto Akash, who picked her up and walked into the mansion followed by a worried looking Payal, Anjali and rest of his family. He raised his eye brow at Payal who just motioned him to walk into the house. "What is going on here," he said quietly to Payal.

When he walked further into the house, he saw that his entire family was fussing over the girl. He scrunched up his forehead and felt Lavanya slip her hand into his. She was nervous as well. She was meeting his family second time but this time it would be for a prolonged period. He squeezed her hand but took his hand back from her grip.

"Khushi, are you okay, child?" his uncle questioned the petite girl sitting on the sofa. By the amount of people firing questions at the girl, she should have felt harassed. But, she seemed fazed and confused. He felt the sudden need to tell everyone to shut up and let her speak. "Why don't you all let her speak," he growled. Suddenly, everyone noticed his presence in the room.

gosh i m an official stalker of ur ff now...ur ff is soo intriguing!