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..-Niru-..

@..-Niru-..

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#131

I want him to feel very guilty !!! his,""Are you blind or something?"...made me feel bad !
And as for Khushi , she is the sunshine in every1's life though there is none in her's .I like her calm nature and the way she retorts to Arnav
Beautiful update !

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Sona

@sparikh

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#132

interesting...A is already attracted to her...

K is so full of life despite all...living upto her name!

waiting for more...

-Sona

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Gunjan Mukherjee

@gunjanmkj

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#133

One beautiful n unxpctd twist, n d dimension of evrythn chngd..his words, his thghts nw hv a dffrnt meaning..i hope u undrstnd wat m tryin to say..bt its nt his fault..he ddnt knw..
bt i must gv u d credit..aftr d last line d first thng dat came to my mind was 'what the..!' n my eyes n mouth became 'O'!
m sure dis one's gonna b an interesting read..lookin forward to it..

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Ritu

@.khanak.

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#134

Oppss...Arnav LOL

But he didn't know that she was blind so won't blame him...he met her for the first time :)

I just love the fact that he is already attracted by her.

Love at first sight,Arnav 😆

I already had a doubt that Khushi might be blind because of the prologue and how Arnav asked her "Are you blind?" and she replied "I could ask you the same"

Ohhh I am hooked to this..You have to continue!!!

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Aarti

@aartipartyy

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#135

Aashifaaa!

Eeeps. That was just perfection. Legit Perfection. The idea of the story is beyond unique. The aspect of her being blind is really interesting

I don't know why but it reminds me of Fanaa. No idea why 😆 Maybe because Sanaya was in it? LOL

ok enough of my randomness. I loved it! Thanks for the PM!

Continue soon 😊

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kritika

@Kritianya

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#136

nice part

thanks for the pm

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SJPattinson

@SJPattinson

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#137

Seems very interesting. Continue soon

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Aashifa

@curledup

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: -JollyJabeen-
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Aashifah, You legend! I LOVED it.

What a beautiful twist, Khushi's blind<3 Aww so cute!

Arnav. Your words cut like ice.. Ice cuts?! LOL snow, hailstones, anything! 😆

Beautiful update, It's adorable<3 Fantastic 🥳

Do update soon and thanks for the PM! (:

Love it, Love it, Love it.

Seriously? How do you write so good.. 😳

Thank you so much! :D thank you thank thank you :D

aahhah! you humble me. 😳

Originally posted by: Just_Love
That was a lovely update! 😃

Thank you! 😃

Originally posted by: Crazy_1001
ohhh!! Oh she is the new one!
The "cant you see" comment was in bad taste on his part though LOL

But this seems like such a interesting read!

Thank you so much! 😃

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Aashifa

@curledup

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: farheen75
A beautiful update.

Thank you! 😃

Originally posted by: nazleef
it's beautiful.

Thanks

Originally posted by: saarah96
amazing
wonder how he found out thats shes blind

Thank you so much! <3

Originally posted by: jahnvi.luvs.ASR
so he had a wife...n she is blind...INTERESTING...ur stories are alwez damn awesome...such an effective storyline
hats off to u...
tthnx for PM :)

ahah! thank you :D thank you so much! <3

Originally posted by: Hot.Pink.Heels
Ohmygawd! Aashifa I never said this to you before but I love you! Sorry if your creeped out ;) ahah! I don't believe I've told you either but I love you too! 😆

The revealing of Khushi's blindness made me gasp! But the funny thing is that I didn't feel sad about it! I too feel that true and pure love happens from the heart! Our vision and body sometimes just happens to hinder it with physical attraction or lust! Thank you so much! that is what I'm trying to get at, thank you!

I am seriously excited about this update because I would love to read of how Arnav and Khushi build up their love and relationship! aha! thank you so so much! <3

Continue soon :) I will!

Originally posted by: yusam
OOOHHH... BLIND... THT WAS SOOO BEAUTIFUL...

Thank you!

Originally posted by: johnangad
fabbb

Thank you! 😃

Originally posted by: meera06
Beautiful update!!

Thank you!

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Aashifa

@curledup

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#140

Originally posted by: thebubblespop12
Yay I'm so glad you update!!
I knew he was goin to crash into her and say "are you blind??"
This is great I can't wait to find out more about Arnav's fort wife and how she died.
Please update soon!!!
P.S. Dont ever get discouraged about your work. Honestly and I mean this from the bottom of my heart-you're a great writer who has a unique writing style and great ideas and anyone who tells you otherwise is a fool.

ahha! thank you :D thank you so much! your words have super encouraged me :D 😃

Originally posted by: Rabzooo
Omg omg omg...
Ashifa...that was amazing... :')
He's already attracted to her...and she's blind...
The way this update was written..."beautiful"!
Nd Im so touched by your nani and nanaabu's story...give my love to them :)

Thank you so much! <3 I shall most certainly :D

Originally posted by: AMAL722
OMG just loved it ;-)

Thanks 😃

Originally posted by: Crinklez.
Great update. It is Khushi😊

Thank you! 😃

Originally posted by: angellovergirl
lovely update!
Nice to know Khushi is not his first wife - cant wait to see what arnav does next being attracted to her and knowing she is blind. Afterall, he did make the 'cant you see' remark. the famous guilt perhaps?

your grandparents story is so sweet!
I hope that in my life I get someone who loves me too despite my shortcomings- sorry for the mush lol its really late at night here and the note abt your grandfather just made me go awww wistfully
i'll shut up now lol

They will, believe me all that yada yada romantic stuff is true and I believe it to an extent because of my grandparents, if they could find it and that too in their generation I am sure we can find it in ours! :D thank you so much 😃

Originally posted by: mollycoddle
terrific update.loved it

Thank you! 😃

Originally posted by: sunshine23
Ok, I really have no words..just because it was soo goood!!

I wonder what happened to Arnav's first wife?!

Anyways that was short, but extremely good. Update soon!! 😊

P.S waiting for 'The Thrill' 😉

Thank you so much! <3 ahah! we shall see about Thrill, thank you! 😃