FF: D for Desire Th# 1 (Ch 1 - 14)

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#911

Originally posted by: RizArshi

😆 Glad that I am not the only passenger of the boat. I can't wait to read more 😃

And I cant wait to know your reaction! 😆

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RizArshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Chapter 9:

This left me speechless. No I am not exaggerating. I loved that it was Khushi who took the 1st step instead of Arnav. Wasn't she the one to admit it to Arnav that she was obsessed with him? This did complete justice to Khushi's character. The first paragraph was the best part of this chapter. The way you have written the very first paragraph was captivating. It sets the reader's mood right. With due respect to the writers I have to mention that all the stories I have read so far always focused on how Khushi reacted. But somewhere we forgot that Khushi's touches had an impact on Arnav too. This chapter focused on both of them and I couldn't have asked for more. Very subtly written and not vulgar at all. Loved the exchange of messages. I love the fact that they both feel the pull and are not afraid to face it.

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RizArshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#913

Chapter 10:

I don't know what to say. Arnav has already made it clear that he is not interested in any life long commitment and for Khushi marriage held great importance. After what Arnav said the heartbreak was expected. But he can't be blamed. Khushi knew it and she willingly took the plunge. What Arnav feel for Khushi is something he still doesn't know. When he will understand his own feelings he will be ready to do anything to keep Khushi with him. I hope Khushi is fine

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RizArshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#914

Chapter 11:

Aha! Looks like he has started to realize her place in his life already. I loved the way he took care of Khushi and didn't disrespect her. He valued her beliefs and didn't want to give her false hopes. This gives me hope. Things are very complicated right now. I am eager to see how you untangle the mess you have created 😊

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RizArshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#915

Chapter 12:

If only he acknowledged his feelings. Sigh! He has to learn things the hard way. Felt bad for Khushi. Its so much harder for her. Arnav's cool attitude making it worse for her. Hope Arnav will understand her better and acknowledge his feelings soon

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RizArshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#916

Chapter 13:

Life is not easy right? Sometimes you have to do things you so wish to avoid. Parties, networks and deals come before the physical well-being and mental peace of a person. Oh I hate the situation Khushi is in now. She can neither forget Arnav nor can she forget her morals. Arnav won't let her avoid him. I can see a desperate Arnav. He is ready to do anything to stop Khushi from living him even if it meant asking her for the favour she once asked from him despite knowing very well what that plan lead them to. Did the boomerang just come back to Khushi?

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RizArshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Chapter 14:

Arnav knows all of Khushi's weaknesses really well and he is making optimum use of this knowledge. He is helplessly flirting with her and he also invited Neha even after knowing how it will make Khushi feel. Oh this man is insensitive alright. He is taking the difficult route while he can simply sort out his feelings and confess it to Khushi Khushi phaisa geche mainka chipay 😆

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#918

Originally posted by: RizArshi
Chapter 9:

This left me speechless. No I am not exaggerating. I loved that it was Khushi who took the 1st step instead of Arnav. Wasn't she the one to admit it to Arnav that she was obsessed with him? This did complete justice to Khushi's character. The first paragraph was the best part of this chapter. The way you have written the very first paragraph was captivating. It sets the reader's mood right. With due respect to the writers I have to mention that all the stories I have read so far always focused on how Khushi reacted. But somewhere we forgot that Khushi's touches had an impact on Arnav too. This chapter focused on both of them and I couldn't have asked for more. Very subtly written and not vulgar at all. Loved the exchange of messages. I love the fact that they both feel the pull and are not afraid to face it.

This is one thing I always try to consciously do .. That is to bring in both their perspectives and feelings. 😊 It feels incomplete to leave one of them aside ... It is a journey of growth for both of them.

You will find more on Arnav's going forward .. Khushi will not let him rest! 😆