FF: D for Desire Th# 1 (Ch 1 - 14) - Page 89

Just found your SS. Love the story and the characters. Especially liked that Arnav's turned it around with the scoring!

Originally posted by: neverbefore

Just found your SS. Love the story and the characters. Especiallyliked that Arnav's turned it around with the scoring!

Thanks!! See u in thread 2. 😊

This is really interesting.. waiting for next update 😉 👏

Oops! Didn't realise I'd already started reading this!😲

awsome ff

Haha i loved khushi's fuss... Thats how my father reacts...oh he is such a drama queen or should i say drama king!!!

Hi Omoraboti, (Would love to know your real name),

Let me start my saying "I AM TOTALLY HOOKED TO D FOR DESIRE AND LIMES AND LEMONS"!!.

I caught up on all the chapters in one go for both the FFs. And since I read them I want to reach out to and tell you how beautiful these FFs are👏👏. They are so contrasting from the Titles to the story line. Since I am posting this in Limes and Lemons FF, I want you to know I fell in love with this FF right after reading the title – So refreshing 😃 I can literally smell limes and lemons when I am reading the chapters and I wonder this is exactly how probably Khushi also smelled☺️!! I would love for you to do a description of "HOW ASR SMELLED"…..Ufffhhh I thought itself gives me Goosebumps😉!! (Okay my gutter mind please control yourself😡)…..

and I love how well you have inserted Devi Maiyya into the story …. (even IPK ignored her as the story progressed…of course the makers ignored lot of things)….. I feel like I am re-living IPK again!!! Though the characters are same because of the story line we are seeing them in different situations and circumstances and you doing a brilliant job of giving words to their emotions, feelings!!!

KUDOS!!! And THANK YOU FOR GIVING US THESE FFs!!👏

good one...light hearted...😊

awsome ff.
send me all ur other work.
loved this one.
waiting for next update.

@Omoraoboti: Nyc story!!!!😊