FF: D for Desire Th# 1 (Ch 1 - 14) - Page 90

iam a new reader of this FF - just started with this story - great start - will read until completed and will comment - already loving this one

Originally posted by: Prakal

Hi Omoraboti, (Would love to know your real name),

Let me start my saying "I AM TOTALLY HOOKED TO D FOR DESIRE AND LIMES AND LEMONS"!!.

I caught up on all the chapters in one go for both the FFs. And since I read them I want to reach out to and tell you how beautiful these FFs are👏👏. They are so contrasting from the Titles to the story line. Since I am posting this in Limes and Lemons FF, I want you to know I fell in love with this FF right after reading the title ' So refreshing 😃 I can literally smell limes and lemons when I am reading the chapters and I wonder this is exactly how probably Khushi also smelled☺️!! I would love for you to do a description of "HOW ASR SMELLED"'..Ufffhhh I thought itself gives me Goosebumps😉!! (Okay my gutter mind please control yourself😡)'..

and I love how well you have inserted Devi Maiyya into the story '. (even IPK ignored her as the story progressed'of course the makers ignored lot of things)'.. I feel like I am re-living IPK again!!! Though the characters are same because of the story line we are seeing them in different situations and circumstances and you doing a brilliant job of giving words to their emotions, feelings!!!

KUDOS!!! And THANK YOU FOR GIVING US THESE FFs!!👏

AWESUM STORY...
READ ALL THE CHAPTERS IN 1 GO...
LOVED IT VERY MUCH

Chap 7 poor arnav how does he know what a dramebaz kushi is u loved this one

Finished this thread in one go!
Nice story.
It was little hilarious first when Khushi went and told Arnav about her feelings, I was like Arnav, what the! But then I thought that khushi must be stupid to ask him that because it cant be good right. And it turn out that I was right, I mean it was good, maybe even too good 😳 but he did hurt her feelings. I dont blame him.Khushi knew that I was never in to marriage or serious relationship.
But wat is Arnav trying to to know? Jealousy usually works wonder with Arnav but here its does that to Khushi 😆

Originally posted by: opsyellow

Finished this thread in one go!
Nice story.
It was little hilarious first when Khushi went and told Arnav about her feelings, I was like Arnav, what the! But then I thought that khushi must be stupid to ask him that because it cant be good right. And it turn out that I was right, I mean it was good, maybe even too good 😳 but he did hurt her feelings. I dont blame him.Khushi knew that I was never in to marriage or serious relationship.
But wat is Arnav trying to to know? Jealousy usually works wonder with Arnav but here its does that to Khushi 😆

Welcome on board! 😊

I am trying to build a story where ASR meets Khushi under a more normal circumstance. Thats why the characters behave little differently and the reactions vary too. But the basics are the same! Hoping to see you in the next threads!

Wow read all the chap of this thread in a go...

Farha apu I have just started reading it. The first chapter is awesome. Fire crackling already 😆

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Chapter 3: