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Posted: 13 years ago
#91
small but nice update
luved that part sharon was admiring swayam 😳
swayam's arrangements 4 kriya's bday wil make sharon
but love when sharon gets jelous 😃
hope in jelousy she will say something about her feeling 😉
thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#92
awesome update..
buh swayam throwing bday party for kriya..it means jealous sharon n more misunderstandings...😆

update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#93
Awww... Only Swayam can do all this for sharon... Sacrificing his sleep n credits... He is n always will be the most adorable boy I ever saw...^_^ N Sharon really feels sooo much him...:) She kissed him on his forehead... Awww... I wish us time Swayam jaga hota... Dhany ho jata bechara.. Abhi pata nai Sharon kaise react karegi knowing dat Swayam will give a bash for kriya...:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#94
amazing update...👏 sharon admiring swayam...☺️ well it seems like sharon is going to be super jealous during kria's bday bash...update soon...n thanx for d pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#95

6th part...


NOBODY REMEMBERS KRIYA'S BIRTHDAY'WHICH MAKES KRIYA UPSET!

She is low and was expecting everyone to wish her but no one does!

In girls locker room''.

Kriya to herself:what universeji! kisi ko bhi mera b'day yaad nhi! Rey toh vaise hee yahan nhi hain aur baaki kisi ne bhi abhi tak mujhe wish nhi kiya!

While swayam enters the girls locker room secretly and starts whispering kriya's name "kriya'kriya...what the heck man! Sun hee nhi rhi"

As Sharon sees him she thinks that he must have come there for her and as she proceeds forward to insult him once more she hears that he is calling kriya's name.she puts her step back and after taking a deep breath tell kriya:smone is caaling you outside!

Swayam gets on his knees and presents a bouquet of beautiful orchids to her singing happy b'day'.kriya realizes that even if nobody remembers her b'day her bff swayam does remember it. She hugs him tight and gives a peck on his cheeks'Sharon is fuming inside,she gets red with anger while rinni breaks her chain of thoughts:how sweet is that! Swayam is such a sweetheart he had brought Kriya so beautiful flowers...

Simmi:you are ryt'rinni!what say Sharon?

Sharon:yeah! very sweet (full of arrogance)

Vishakha and neha step forward to wish kriya b'day:happy b'day Kriya!

Kriya:thnkkss guys!

As everyone praises the flowers Sharon leaves the locker room in disapproval!

Everyone receives a msg from swayam saying "KRIYA'S B'DAY BASH AT HARD ROCK CAFe AT 7 AND GUYS,THIS IS A SURPRISE FOR KRIYA SO NOT TO TELL HER ANYTHING"

VICKY & NIL: YR..KUCH TOH HAI SWAYAM AUR KRIYA KE BEECH'swayam ne kriya ke liye surprise party organize ki hai!

Neha:jo bhi hai'.neha wish swayam jaisa koi uska boyfriend hota!

Vicky:kaagu?

Neha:neha joking baabu'.!

Rinni:what r u gng to wear'simmi?

Simmi:I dn't know'btw what r u wearing Sharon? U r cmng to the party rt..?

Sharon doesn't reply

Simmi waves her hand in front of Sharon''"Sharon'sharon"

Sharon:ummm'.ah'yeah yeah!

At the party:

Sharon comes in a white short dress ..with silver stilettos. She was looking absolutely stunning with open hair and few strands of hair lingering on her face''but there was one thing missing!

HER SMILE" she was waiting for swayam to come and was a bit frustrated because of the fact that swayam had arranged a party for kriya'the behenji!

Swayam came in wearing a dashing plain black shirt unlike his double tees tucked in his metallic grey pants and a grey cloth tucked in his upper pocket.He was looking so damn hot and even Sharon couldn't take her eyes off him but for everyone's surprise he came in hand in hand with the birthday girl who was wearing a baby pink gown with a bow tied around her waist'.as they both crossed the entrance the lights went off and a spotlight flashed upon Kriya who when saw around came to know that Swayam is not with her!

Everyone started talking about how cute they looked with each other" and complimented each others' style.

As everyone looked around for swayam-- --happy b'day song started to play in the background and swayam came in with a mike in his hand and a spotlight being flashed on him'..swayam:FOR THE MOST BEAUTIFUL GIRL IN THE WORLD! A SMALL GIFT FROM US! HAVE A GREAT LIFE AHEAD MAY GOD BLESS YOU WITH EVERY HAPPINESS ANYONE COULD JUST DREAM OFF"

Kriya had tears in her eyes 'while vishakha came to her and said: hey dude! Why are you crying swayam has arranged such a wonderful party for you and you are crying..?thats not fair!

Swayam comes and stands right in front of Kriya bends down on his knees and puts his hand forward (asking for a dance of course) She places her hand on Swayam's hand. He pulls her closer and they perform on the song PYAAR KI EK KAHAANI SUNO.(THEY PERFORMED A SIZZLING HOT SALSA)

Pyaar Ki Yeh Kahani Suno

Ek Ladka Tha
Ek Ladki Thi

Hoti Kya Hai Jawaani Suno

Ek Ladka Tha
Ek Ladki Thi

Woh Bhi Ek Daur Tha
Waqt Hi Aur Tha
Jab Woh The Ajnaabi

Dono Tanah Se The
Per Woh Kehte Kise
Baat Jo Dil Mein thi

swayam lifted kriya in his arms and then they both did a leap of faith!

Yo,Yo Yo Yo Yo

Pyaar Ki Yeh Kahani Suno
Ek Ladka Tha
Ek Ladki Thi
Hoti Kya Hai Jawaani Suno
Ek Ladka Tha
Ek Ladki Thi
Woh Bhi Ek Daur Tha
Waqt Hi Aur Tha
Jab Woh The Ajnaabi
Dono Tanah Se The
Per Woh Kehte Kisi

Baat Jo Dil Mein Thi


seeing this Sharon was the one who was most affected she remembered her dance with swayam'she got lost in her thoughts where there were just SWARON all alone'just the two of them was sharon's only requirement..


Pyaar Ki Yeh Kahani Suno
Ek Ladka Tha
Ek Ladki Thi
Hoti Kya Hai Jawaani Suno
Ek Ladka Tha
Ek Ladki Thi


in sharon's thoughts:"swayam and Sharon holding each other tightly and lost into each others' eyes,'''.


Gumsum Gumsum Rehte The Dono
Phir Bhi Dil Mein Kehte Dono
Koi Sapna Hum Bhi To Paaye
Ek Din Tute Gum Ke Woh Ghere
Jhilmil Jhilmil Aaye Savere
Masum Badla Jaagi Fizaaye
Woh Mil Gaye

Woh Khil Gaye
Aur Pyaar Ho Hi Gaya
Jo Chaha Tha Woh Paya To
Hosh Kho Hi Gaya


Sharon can't help it but just kept smiling and smiling. Sharon fell in Swayam's arms. Both of them lost in each other's eyes. Swayam looked into her eyes and she suddenly looked away. His eyes looked as if wanting to say something. Both of them wanted the song to never end and were scared of the outcome yet their hearts wanting to spill it over.

Pyaar Ki Yeh Kahani Suno
Ek Ladka Tha
Ek Ladki Thi
Hoti Kya Hai Jawaani Suno
Ek Ladka Tha
Ek Ladki Thi


Holle Holle Ab Woh Deewane

Gungun Gaaye Dil Ke Tarane
Sunsun Jhoome Saari Hawaaien


He turned, his back facing Sharon while he lifted her backwards.Each thing they did together was etched in their hearts like inscribed onto a rock was coming in front of their eyes. Swayam said to her we would be together in the future also. Sharing all the happiness as well as the sorrows like we have done in the past. His eyes had welled up like sharon's had. They both tried to speak but couldn't manage nothing. Sharon thought I never knew I would affect someone so much.

Dhadkan Dhadkan Hai Bhehki Bheki
Tanmaan 2 Chahat Hai Mehki
Sapne Apne Jaddoo Jagaye

Inhe Dekhoge Jo Jaanoge

Kya Hai Nasha Pyaar Ka


nil:yr...they both are looking damn hawt..

VICKY:HAAN YR'JUST SEE THEIR CHEMISTRY'THEIR CONNECTION ..

Vicky & nil's conversation broke her chain of thoughts!!!!

Yehi Sochoge Yehi Chahoge
Sang Rahe Yeh Sada

Pyaar Ki Yeh Kahani Suno
Ek Ladka Tha
Ek Ladki Thi
Hoti Kya Hai Jawaani Kya Hai Suno
Ek Ladka Tha
Ek Ladki Thi

Woh Bhi Ek Daur Tha
Waqt Hi Aur Tha
Jab Woh The Ajnaabi

Dono Tanah Se The
Per Woh Kehte Kise
Baat Jo Dil Mein Thi

Everyone applauded as their song came to an end while Sharon had tears in her eyes'she herself wondered why were they escaping form her eyes but had no idea!everyone started giving kriya gifts' sharon collected the courage to walk upto her and wish her b'day.she went to kriya and handed her a gift while kriya and neha were busy guessing what was in the box...sharon glared at swayam which was well observed by swayam and a thought surrounded his mind:"WHAT HAPPENED NOW...WHAT DID I DO WRONG NOW?"

the party was back on track...everyone enjoying themselves...but in 1 corner of the room smthing was happening which irritated sharon

swayam gave kriya a gift and as she opened it she found a pink watch matching with her dress.she thanked him for the gift by hugging him and kissing him on his cheek...AS sharon saw this moment she dropped the glass held in her hand and ran away from there...leaving the party!


hope you liked it! i tried my best this time to give a LONNNGGG update...do tell me ur opinion about it and dn't forget to hit the like button..!



Edited by swaron_d3 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#96
You are super fast.Aren;t you?? super update and yeah please PM me when u upate
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Posted: 13 years ago
#97
wow! d dance was oh GOd! phew! i cant believe that it was just my imagination! luved it! tnku for d pm! d update was freaking cool! i luved it! waiting for d next one! 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98
Awesome... Yaar please thoda SwaRon romance bhi dikhado itna tadpaomat...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#99
awesome update !!
now thats an extremely jealous sharon that we saw , breaking glass and running away from the party 😛
i second mannu plzz show some swaron romance in the next part 😃
update soon...
Edited by tanukaswaron - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awwhh, I love jealous Sharon and at the same time feel bad for her when she remembered her dance with Swayam...Hopefully, Swayam will go after her in the next update !!!

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