KR FF- Stewing Temptations; # 1; Ch 1 to 8

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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#121

Wonderful update tish.

It was wonderful start.

the way Krisha friendship was protrayed was full.

Sharon working under Rey hmm.

SO Kriya is gonna see Rey Soon.

Waiting for the next part.

Thanks for the pm.

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medha

@SavageMissMe

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#122

awesome, srry couldnt comment earlier cuz i was really busy, but sorry for that

as for this chapter it was awesome, you really seem to have come up with a completely different concept as compared to the ones ive read

loved the part where kriya wonders why its so hard to get a cab, couldnt stop rofl on that one.

looks like taani uis still clinging to rey, really hate her so much.

loved sharons introduction, and neha for the first time sounded way cool.

waiting for a proper swayam intro and ofcourse the much awaited by all kriyaansh meeting.

im sure you are going to really rock this one! for me it has already become one of my favourites on the forum.

do update soon, just cant wait to read on.

ps- so sorry couldnt like it, somehow my like button has a way of not working when i really need it to

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Shivs

@The007Shivani

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#123

wow amazing part one cant wait for the next update

plz update soon cant wait i m so excited

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Ankita

@_SenbonZakura_

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#124

First of all, a heartfelt thank you for giving me KriSha!! I seriously would have loved to see dere relationship evolve on d actual serial.. never mind dat.. Its just dat at tyms i think d two really strong leading ladies should have had a bonding!! and dat track should have been worked upon.. Coz KriSha together are unbeatable!!

So I love all ur characters!! simply love dem.. I really dont care if KR meet a lil later on, as long as I am getting a good story.. Which definitely is going to be d case if U are writing!!

somehow, I dont like Neha here.. dunno y.. cant bring myself to like her.. maybe when u show some deeper shades into her.. den maybe..

An awesome read!! and update faster!!! I m already head over heels in love wid dis FF!!

Love Ya Tish!! Ur my Rockstar!! ⭐️⭐️⭐️

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Jeeya_Angel

@Jeeya_Angel

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#125

Nice first chapter tish. I like each and every character in ur new FF.

So Kria is a "changed" person now and has come back to mumbai. Thank god u made Sharon and Kria friends in this one. I am gonna love this KriSha bonding which we missed out in D3.

Rey is the boss of an Ad Agency. Zats really gonna be interesting to see him in this character and Kria is coming for an interview for his assistant unknowingly. I am eager to know what will be their reaction when they see each other after so many years.

The part where Neha was looking for Vicky was really funny. 'He gonna be a dead meat today' LOL.

I am all excited to read the next updates.

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Anyaa_012

@Anyaa_012

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#126

simply AwESoME!!!:D(like always;))
aaaww first am reallly sorry i'm commenting sooo latee!!!
an reallyy i sooo can't wait fo them to meet!!
n i luvv concept...:D
it's ahmazinggg!!!!:D
update soon n thanxxx for PM!!!:)

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Sheetal Rajput

@sheetal_arsha

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#127

loved this awesome..! please update soon thnxx for the pm..!

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ekiholo

@ekiholo

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#128

update!!

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plz ab update kar bhi do na!!

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BedOfRoses

@AwesomeSauce.

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#129

Hi di!

Sorry for being late! 😳

Coming to the updates . . .

O.M.G!!

Prologues:

Gosh, that was awesome. Great!
You write very well,especially the romance/comedy scenes.
Love how the story is going and how you are portraying Rey and Kria's growing attraction.

I just love the way you portray the characters.
The small details you write- It's really fab di.
Thanq soo much for sharing!

Chapter One:

Enjoyed the flow of words and the story progressing . . . Very well written . . . Could visualise the whole concept . . . What a wonderful plan . . . They are going to work together . . . Great!

You're a great writer and I absolutely love reading your updates.

Please add me to your PM list. Have sent you a buddy request too.

Eagerly waiting for the next chapter.

Update soon or else . . .

. . . We'll have to beg for another update :P

Rofl, lots of love

Aditi