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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
Oh I really hope taani has found kriyas diary
Everything will get normal btwn kriyaansh
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
awesome update...👏 loved it...swaron's so cute...so sharon want to keep their relationship a secret...😳 that's good...she is really naughty...😉 but she is too cute...both of them r cute...😃 thanx for the pm...update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: dazzlingmanavi

UR WELCOME. THANK GOD U LIKED IT. I WAS WONDERING IF U GUYS GONNA LIKE IT OR NOT .
I AM NOT THAT GOOD AT SWARON'S PART. GLAD U LIKED IT.

why u r saying u r not good at swaron's part...u r really good...n i loved all those parts, all those writing which u wrote...they r really very cute...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: Anindita91

why u r saying u r not good at swaron's part...u r really good...n i loved all those parts, all those writing which u wrote...they r really very cute...😊

THANK YOU 😃
PLEASE CAN U TELL ME HOW TO INSERT IMAGES...WHENEVER I TRYNA PUT IMAGES AND IT COMES AN ERROR. AND IF THE ERROR MESSAGE IS NOT DISPLAYED THEN THE IMAGE IS NOT DISPLAYED.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks for a an absolutely fantastic update. Wow kya baat swayam and sharon in rehersal hall. Good going😆 Ye taani be na. I loved each and every moment of it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
amazing update thanks for hte pm it was so cool and hoping that diary turns out to be kriya's or something
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: Himaniahir

Awesome I'm sure she found kriya's diary I'm here without a pm anyway update soon

THANX 4 LIKING IT...WELL U HAVE TO WAIT AND READ IF UR SURITY TURNS TO BE RIGHT OR NOT. I THINK WHEN U WERE TYPING THIS COMMENT I WAS SENDING PM TO U ONLY.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: crazysky

its super awesome
lost n found department...
wish kash aisa d3 mein ho jaye...

THANK YOU
LOST N FOUND DEPARTMENT WAS JUST IMAGINARY...AGEY KE UPDATES KE LIYE ISKI ZAROORAT THI
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: Assika

Nic one nd glad 2 see swaron 2gether!!!!! hope d mission starts soon... Update d nxt soon nd thanx fr d pm...

PRIYA THE MISSION HAS ALREADY STARTED...TAANI IS THINKING IN THE FIRST PART THAT HOW DID KRIYAANSH BROKE UP...THIS IS HOW EVERY MISSION STARTS BY FINDING OUT THE TRUTH HENA?
BTW THANX 4 LIKING IT
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70

PART-4

Guys I think this ff is not so good that's why you all cant complete my demand. If this ff have been good then u all must have completed my demand. If you don't like this ff then I will not continue this ff. I am really very hurt because of this. But still I am updating this ff.

So let's start with the update'

Tanni saw something and her eyes widened. She was hell shocked. She saw two diaries on their cover a name was written. The name was "KRIYA". (many of u guessed it right)

Tanni took the diaries and with the shock shouted out the name. She spoke quite loud that's why the man heard it.

M- tumhe tumhari diary mill gyi na'ab jao

T- main chali jaati hun par yeh diaries yha kya kar rhi he ' yeh to kriya ki diaries hai and she has left the colledge'phir yeh yha'

M- ha yeh usi ki diaries hai ' wo jab colledge se chali gyi thi na tab uske locker me kuch saman rhe gya tha. Usi saman me yeh diaries thi

T- mujhe yeh diaries chahiye

M- nhi' main yeh tumhe nhi de sakta'tum jayo

T- sir aap please meri baat samajhiye ' please mujhe yeh diaries de dijiye ' please

M- sorry but I cant give u ' yeh colledge ke rules ke against hai' I can't give u ' u leave please

T- sir please ' please

Bubble tanni appears'

BT- tanni chodh inhe ' inse behes karne ka koi fayeda nhi

T- to main kya kar sakti hu' yeh diaries mujhe chahiye

BT- to sochte hai na kuch apne tareeke se'kuch na kuch zaroor karenge.

T- ha

Tanni leaves from there and goes to the projection room. She looks here and there finds nobody there and sits on a seat.

T- ab bolo kya kroon main'un diaries se kuch na kuch to zaroor pta chalega

BT- ha to sochte hena kuch

T- kabse khe rhi ho ki kuch sochte hai par kya'wo sir to diaries lene nhi denge

BT- ha to jab wo sir nhi honge tab diaries lenge na

T- matlab

BT- colledge 6 pm khatam ho jata hai and sab 8 baje tak chale jate hai

T- to

BT- to yeh ki tum sab ke jane ke baad chupke se diaries le aana

T- par yeh to chori hogi

BT- Krishna ji bhi to makhan churate the na ' to bas hum diaries chura lenge aur wese bhi kehte he na everything is fair in love and war aur yha to baat tere prince charming ke true love ki hai' tu unhe hurt dekh sakti hai kya

T- nhi main unhe hurt to nhi dekh sakti ' to dheekh hai main sabke jane ke baad kuch karti hun

BT- very gud

Bubble tanni disappears'

8.30 pm'

Tanni was walking in the corridor of college with a torch.

T- kabhi socha nhi tha ki apne hi college me aese choro ki tarha ghoomna pdhega'

She arrives at the lost and found department and saw a lock

T- hai Krishna ji ' ab main kya karun yha to tala hai'khidki'ha khidki se jati hun'ab isi ki kami rhe gyi thi'chal tanni chad ja

She climbs the window and gets in'

T- chal tanni dhund ab

She searched for the diaries then found them in a box and took them. She left from there and reached her house.

Ting ting ting ting'the door bell rings

Swayam opens the door. Tanni was standing there'

S- tanni ' thank god u r back 'kha thi tum' tumne time dekha hai'

T- bhai I m fine ' aap chinta mat karo'

S- chalo andar aao aur khana khalo

T-nhi bhai mujhe bhookh nhi lgi'aap khalo

S- tum bahar se khana kha ke aayi ho kya ya tabyat to kharab nhi hena tumhari?

T- bhai main deekh hun

T(in her mind)-agar mene khana nhi khaya to bhai aur pareshan ho jayenge'main khana kha leti hu aur baad me raat ko diaries padh lungi

T- chalo bhai khana khate hai'main khana lgati hun

S- maine khana lga diya hai

T- deekh hai bhai'chalo khate hai

She quickly ate the food and went to her room and changed clothes.

Tanni in her room alone'

T- chalo ab diaries pdhti hun

On the front page of 1st diary 2011 was written and on the front page of 2nd 2012. (guys remember there were 2 diaries)

T- yeh to kriya ki personal diaries lagti hai'inse to mujhe kriya aur rey ke beech exactly kya hua wo pta chal jayega

(Guys the first diary started from when kriyaansh met first time in the club and the second diary ended with the mere bina dance sequence of kriyaansh.)

Taani read both the diaries. The last lines of the 2nd diary was-

Rey ke saath yeh dance meri zindigi ka sabse magical dance tha. Jab wo mujhe touch karte hai to I feel shivers down my spine. Aesa lag rha tha ki wo moment kabhi khatam hi na ho ' wahi freeze ho jaye'par ma ka phone aa gya. Ma ki aawaj me ek ajeeb si tension lag rhi thi' pta nhi kya hua hoga ki ma ne itni jaldi me bula liya. Aaj main apni tum dono diaries ko college locker me hi chod ke ja rhi hu...kal aake le lungi'kal meri aur rey ki team ek doosre ke khilaf khadi hogi'universe ji kal kuch aesa karo ki hum dono ki teams jeet jaye. All the best rey and to me.

Tanni had tears in her eyes after reading the diaries. She kept both the diaries aside and wiped her tears.

T- kriya to rey se bahut pyaar karti hai. In diaries se to aesa lagta hai ki rey aur kriya ek doosre ke liye hi bane hai'phir kriya ne rey ko yeh kyu kha ki she used him. Unki diary ke last me likha tha ki unki mom ko unse koi baat karni thi isliye unhe ghar par jaldi bula liya ' I m sure unke ghar par hi kuch hua hoga'par kya'??? Ab woh bhi pta lgana pdega. Koi baat nhi woh bhi karungi. Main rey se pyaar karti hu na aur ab khud unki love story ko pura kar rhi hu'tanni abhi yeh sab nhi sochna'sirf terko pta hai ki kriya rey se utna hi pyaar karti hai jitna rey kriya se'isliye tujhe hi kuch karna pdhega'pta lagana pdhega ki kriya ne rey se jhooth kyu bola.

Whole night tanni kept on thinking how to find out the truth but nothing stuck her mind.

In the morning'

Taani was walking in the corridor.

T- hey Krishna ji help karo meri. Kya karun main. Kese pta lgau truth kya hai. Kisi se puch bhi nhi sakti. Kisi ko pta to hoga nhi, aur agar kriya ka naam bhi lu to sab mujhpe hi chilaenge. I cant believe ki sab itne anti kriya kese hoge.

Taani was all into her thoughts when she noticed that she is standing outside computer room and there was nobody. Suddenly she heard something or I say someone in the computer room. She looked from the window and saw'.

Guys I would make a demand but I think it will not be completed. But still let it be pg no.18. if the demand gets completed then I will continue the ff or else I will discontinue it. I know its rude but I don't have any choise. pms later.

Edited by dazzlingmanavi - 13 years ago

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