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lovespell

@lovespell

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#131

Just loved it. But I have too many questions - what did khushi do to arnav? why is she living like that when she is rich?

Khushi's dad is whacko.

Arnav loves her and hates her at the same time. But he cares too. Can't wait for next update

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angeldust44

@angeldust44

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#132

wow! just amazing.👏 i read it in one go. loved how you portrayed their emotions. waiting fr the next update. 😍

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Lena

@.Lina.

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: Tyro
u updated here first...so i have to comment here now...😆

the agony that u put ur heart through leaves u in shambles...

n the choices u make...it is true they make u who u r...

Lols thank you for reminding me! I completely forgot to update.
Choices do make you who you are, but it doesn't mean you won't have another chance or another set of choices to change.

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Lena

@.Lina.

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: Rozy77
Hey hun
wow, this was brilliant👏
lovedd it😃
flashbacks were scary...khushi's dad was so cruel
even tho it was painful🥺, i liked those few moments with arnav n khushi in the washroom...esp when she bravely promised to bear his revenge😭
take care n plz continue soon

I'm so sorry about that. I tend to get gruesome sometimes. 😳
she promised to bear it because she believes that she deserves it.

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Lena

@.Lina.

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: multifaceted
Hey so I just read all your OS and SS in one go...can't believe I haven't read your work earlier...and this SS is absolutely amazing..loved the story line and the way you bring out their raw intensity and emotions..
Could you please PM me when you update this SS? Thanks

Aw, thanks and welcome. 🤗
And I have no idea how you could do that 😲 Read everything in one go. I'd get sleepy 😆