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undercoverhappy

@undercoverhappy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#121

Kushi had to make a choice money or love she decided money but was she duped by her father?

Arnav loves to hate but all I can see right now r 2 people in love with each & in pain

fab update the flashbacks were interesting & i look forward to more

Lena 👏 for the update & the pm

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@.1.1.1.1

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#122

beautifully written update soon, loved it😊

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nicole11

@nicole11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#123

Amazing!! Thanks! now waiting on what did she do marry someone else

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Aysha

@matwamango

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#124

Write more. This SS is such a revelating READ. The emoting, the angst, the turmoil, the love, its so evident yet Arnav is still hurting himself and Khushi.

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Crinklez.

@Crinklez.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#125

I've just read this story and i LOVE it.

Please pm me with the next update.

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Lena

@.Lina.

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: gunjanmkj
Yay! I'm first!
The FBs were so bone-chilling n intriguing..so m gttn a vague idea y arnav wants revenge..bt hw come khushi is in dis financial situation at present..wat hppnd to her??..wat hppnd to arnav??..i knw i shud hv patience n wait for u to reveal evrythn..bt m so damn curious..
d closet convo btwn arnav n khushi was so heart wrenching..he loves her,she loves him..he wants to hurt her, she's ready to gt hurt..love works in mysterious ways..he hurts her to c her in pain..n wen he gts to c dat pain he's nt able to bear it..god knws wat wud hppn to them..

Yeah, it was pretty intense. I had to listen to intense music to get into the mood 😆All will be revealed in the nick of time. 😉
I felt the closet scene was a little dull, but the bathroom...