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Posted: 13 years ago
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LOL love this Arnav! Great update!
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Episode 10


Arnav changed the dressing. All the while, Khushi kept looking at him. But he didnt look at her even once. When he is about to leave, Khushi held his hand and asked, Why are you doing all these?

Arnav: Doing what?

Khushi: Why are you caring for me so much? If anything is important for you in your life, its your business and money. But you stopped going to office, not attending meetings. Why are you giving me so much attention?

Arnav: You know why I am doing this.

Khushi: No, I dont. I really dont because I stopped expecting things from you. The moment I expected anything from you, all you have given me is pain, an unbearable pain.

Her words pinned his heart to bleed. He looked at her eyes filled with pain. He lowered his eyes and left the room without answering her. He sat by the poolside and thought to himself I am sorry Khushi, I cant share my feelings with you, not until you trust me. If my actions were the reason for your pain, then my actions will be the reason for your happiness too in the future.

Late in the evening, everyone in the family is busy with pooja preparations while Khushi is taking nap. Arnav closed all curtains so that she wouldnt see him what he is doing by the pool side. He watered his plants, eagerly waiting for his family members to leave for pooja. He noticed everyone leaving. He ran to the living room and gave money to HP to go and watch movie. He locked the main door as everyone left. Its just him and Khushi, he thought. While Khushi is still sleeping, Arnav lighted the candles by the poolside, arranged 2 chairs and small table with red roses on top of it. He laid out rose petals as trail from bedroom to the pool area. He filled the pool with rose petals. He hung small lights in shape of stars around the plants and trees. He ran to the kitchen, brought food and placed on the serving cart by the poolside. He heard Khushi waking up. He ran inside closing the pool doors and curtains after him.

He stood by the bed side watching her wake up. As she opened her eyes to find him by her side, she remembered their morning fight. She looked away and started calling JiJi.

Arnav: No one is at home. Everyone left to the temple for pooja.

Khushi: (murmured) Hey Devimaiyya, what do I do now? I need to use bathroom, upar se I am very hungry.

Arnav: (hearing her extended his hand to help her) Let me take you to bathroom.

Khushi: Nope, not you. I dont need your help. Call someone else.

Arnav: (smirked at her angry face) Well, Laxmi is here. She can help you if you want. Aren't you fond of her? I heard you even kissed her in your dreams.

Khushi, who is totally pissed off at his comment, threw pillow at him. Arnav caught pillow and walked seriously towards her. Seeing this, Khushi leaned back. Arnav tucked pillow behind her back and whispered in her ears There is a surprise waiting for you by the pool. If you dont wanna miss it, you better hurry up. Saying this, he offered his hand once again to help her. She reluctantly held his hand. He helped her get to the bathroom. As she stepped out of the bathroom, she saw the room complete dark. She cried out ArnavJi.

Arnav: Shhh, its ok. I am here. Dont be scared.

He took her left hand in his and wrapped her waist with his right arm. They both walked towards the glass doors that connected to the pool area. He opened the curtains. Khushi gasped in disbelief, looking at the beautiful arrangement he made. They both stepped out to the pool area. She is delighted to see lights, stars, roses, everything she loved, including the man himself. He made her sit on one of the chairs. He tucked napkin into her robe and took seat opposite to her.

Khushi: ArnavJi, did you do all these?

Arnav raised his eyebrows in approval.

Khushi: (eager to hear his answer) But why..He interrupted her by keeping his finger on her lips.

Arnav: Shhh. no more questions, not at least today. Please.

Khushi: But ArnavJi..

Arnav: Khushi, please.

She remained silent. Arnav leaned forward to feed her. Both couldnt take their eyes off of each other. Half way through she realized that Arnav is not eating. She stopped him as he is about to feed her. She took small slice of paratha with her left hand and raised it to feed him. He leaned forward to take it into his hands. She nodded no and took her hand away from him. She made another attempt to feed him. This time he opened his mouth, looking at her passionately. As she brought paratha slice to his mouth, his lips grabbed her fingers and took the slice in. Each time she fed him, she received passionate kiss on her fingers. Her cheeks became red as she blushed and looked away each time he kissed her. She never experienced this sensuous feeling before, nor seen him like that. Both are living beautiful moment in eachother's presence.

After some time, the plate is empty but she didnt realize that. She kept feeding him. Arnav, who noticed the empty plate, smiled and grabbed her hand in his. Khushi realized what she's been doing all this while and lowered her eyes shyly. Arnav got up from his chair and knelt down by her side, still holding her hand. He started kissing her fingers softly, followed by back of her palm, hand, arm, elbow, and shoulder. As he kissed her shoulder, he pulled himself back to read her face. She closed her eyes, looked nervous but seems to enjoy his touch.

He leaned forward and whispered in her ears teasingly, Are these kisses enough or do you want me to bring more parathas so that I can kiss you each time you feed me? His question jolted her awake and she pushed him hard shyly.
He fell on the floor. He came back to her and grabbed her. She resisted this time angrily.

Arnav: Hmm, are you angry because of my comment or because I stopped kissing you? he teased her again.

Khushi: Both...she closed her mouth as she realized what she just said.

Arnav raised his eyebrows in surprise and smiled at her. Khushi quickly regrouped herself and said, I meant your comment, Why do you always...He interrupted her as he approached her.

Arnav: Why do you always... what, Khushi? Khushi closed her eyes as he approached her.

Arnav: Khushi, open your eyes, look at me. Khushi slowly opened her eyes to find him much more closer than she expected.

Khushi: ArnavJi Woh, Woh...

Arnav: (looking at her intensely) Woh, Kya hain Khushi?

Khushi: ArnavJi...looked at his lips moving closer to hers.

As she was about to say something, he sealed her lips with his. She closed her eyes as he kissed her passionately yet gentle. He brushed her hair with his left hand and wrapped her waist with right hand and grabbed her closer to him. Khushi, who is nervous yet happy, is liking what he is doing with her for the first time. Gush of wind blew all the candles leaving them alone under the moonlight. They expressed their love for the first time and realized that they needed no words to convey the message. After long kiss, Arnav cupped her face and broke the kiss. He looked into her eyes and she shyly leaned forward and hugged him tightly.
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Edited by deepthiya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow its so nice

i like this side of arnav...romantic arnav...😳
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omg loved it! update soon! and please do pm me 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
Loved the update. Please update next part soon.
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Thank You everyone who made effort to Like and comment on my FF.

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Episode 11


Gush of wind blew all the candles leaving them alone under the moonlight. They expressed their love for the first time and realized that they needed no words to convey the message. After long kiss, Arnav cupped her face and broke the kiss. He looked into her eyes and she shyly leaned forward and hugged him tightly.

Arnav: Khushi, I have something else to give you. Saying this he pulled out a gift packet from the side table.

Arnav: Hope you like it.

Khushi is very excited to see gift from him and tried to open immediately. He stopped her saying...

Arnav: Khushi, this is something special exclusively made for you. I would like you to open this the day you think you are ready to take our relationship to the next level. Until then, please dont open it.

Hearing this, she didnt open the packet. Arnav slightly disappointed that she didnt open it right away as somewhere deep down his heart, he wanted her to open it immediately to convey that she is all ready for him. But he understood her this time and he decided to give her all the time she needed.

Arnav: Shall we go inside now? You need to rest.

Khushi: ArnavJi, if you dont mind, shall we spend some time looking at the stars?

Arnav: (nodded yes) Give me 2 mins.

Arnav returned with thin mattress, pillow and a comforter. He spread it by the poolside and helped Khushi sit down. Both sat next to each other, leaning their backs towards the wall.

Khushi: You know ArnavJi, ever since my parents death, these stars became my best friends. I share everything with them; problems, happy moments, everything. You know, I even talk about our moments to them.

Arnav: Our moments? Like?

Khushi: I used to complain to these stars whenever we fought. (she lowered her eyes and continued) I used to tell them how much I missed you in your absence.

Arnav, who is delighted to hear that she missed him, turned to his right and asked...

Arnav: Did you really miss me?

Khushi: (lost in his eyes for brief period of time, came back to senses and replied teasingly) Nahi Nahi, I meant I missed our fights. It was boring for me without fighting with anyone.

He knew that, she is not saying the truth.

Khushi: (lowering her eyes) Kya kabhi aapne hume yaad kiya?

Arnav: I didnt forget you to remember you. You were always with me. But I did miss one thing, tera pagalpan.

Khushi: Kya, what do you mean? hum paagal hain?

Arnav: (nodded yes) just little bit. saying this, he smiled at her.

Khushi reacted to his comment by hitting him hard with her elbow in his hip.

Arnav: Ouch, mom dad, look how your daughter-in-law is beating me.

Khushi: (shocked to hear him) What did you just say?

Arnav: I know. You made me believe that they do exist as stars.

Khushi with teary eyes, smiled at him. They both remained silent for sometime. Suddenly, Khushi cried out in pain.

Arnav: Khushi, are you alright. Is your shoulder hurting.

Khushi nodded yes.

Arnav: Lets go in now, You need to rest.

Arnav helped her lie down on the bed. As he was about to take position in his couch, she called out his name.

Khushi: ArnavJi, If you want you can sleep in the bed by my side.

Arnav: (looked at her in surprise) Its Ok Khushi. I am fine here. Anyway I dont think I will have enough place by the middle of the night as you tend to push me out by then...He said mockingly.

Khushi angrily pouted. Seeing this, Arnav came closer to her, kissed her forehead, and cupped her face with one hand and said...

Arnav: I was just teasing. You need more space since you are injured. I will be fine on the couch.

Khushi: (held his hand tight as he tried to move away) But I want you to sleep on the bed by my side.

Arnav happily nodded Yes and took position next to her. They wished each other goodnight and slept on either side of the bed.
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Edited by deepthiya - 13 years ago
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Thank You everyone who made effort to Like and comment on my FF.

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Episode 12


Its 9:00am, Anjali wondered why Arnav didnt show up for breakfast. She inquired with HP but he doesnt to know. She thought she would check in his room. But before that she thought she would call her husband to know his return and dialed his number.

Shyam phone rang. Shyam who is all beaten up badly and hiding in his house, wondered why Anjali is calling after knowing all his truth. He assumed Arnav told everything to his sister. He picked up the phone and received the call. Shyam said Hello and paused for moment...

Anjali: Ji, where are you and when are you coming?

Shyam, in confused state, didnt know how to react. He understood that Arnav didnt tell her anything. He smirked and thought of using the opportunity to his benefit.

Shyam: Ji Rani Saheba.

Anjali: Ji, when are you coming? you know that your baby is missing you alot.

Shyam: (smirked and thought of her as Bechari) I am coming soon. I am almost done with my work. I will be there very soon.

Anjali happily hung up the phone and walked towards Arnav's room. She knocked on his door and heard no reply. She tried again. Thats when Arnav realized in his sleep that someone is at his door. He faintly answered...Who is that?

Anjali: Chote, its me Di.

Arnav: Di, one min. I am coming.

As he got up to open the door. Something held his pant tightly. He looked down to notice that one of Khushi's anklet got stuck into one of the stitches in his pant. He tried very hard to release the anklet hook from the stitch, carefully trying not to damage the pant. He shouted once again at his sister that he is coming. Anjali on the other side thought gutter on what they must be doing and she smiled to herself waiting for her brother patiently. Inside the room, his voice woke up Khushi. Khushi with irritated face asked Why are you shouting early morning?

Arnav: Khushi, please help me. Di is waiting at the door and your anklet got stuck in my pant.

Khushi: (who was half-sleep until now, woke up completely in shock, misunderstanding his words) What, how? How did my anklet get inside your pants?

Arnav: (with his typical frustrated look) not inside my pant. It got stuck in one of the stitches. First look properly and then talk.

Khushi: Ohhh, OK. ArnavJi, you always make mountain out of mole. Just unhook the anklet. You will be all set.

Arnav: Oh really and what am I doing till now Ms. Gupta?

Khushi: Singh Raizada.

On the other end, Anjali thought she is disturbing the couple and left the place mockingly saying Chote, I think you guys are busy, no rush. Take your time. I will be in my room.

Arnav: Di, wait, I am coming. Khushi, help me.

Khushi: Are you sure? He nodded yes.
Khushi thought its payback time. With her left hand, she got hold of her anklet and pulled it hard enough that it tore his pant stitches making a hole in the cloth.

Arnav: What the?

Khushi: ArnavJi, say What the, What the how many ever times you want. You tore my dupattas so many times and I just tore only one pant of yours until now and I have many more to go in the list. Saying this, she pouted.

Arnav laughed out loud hearing her remark and seeing her facial expression. He got up to open the door and didnt find Anjali. He went to bathroom and got ready. He informed Khushi that he will be back in few mins and left to his Di's room.

Arnav: (in Anjali's room) Di, whats the matter? Is your health OK?

Di: I am fine chotey. I didnt see you at breakfast, thats why I came to meet you. Anyway, I came to tell you that your Jijaji is done with his work and he is coming in few days.

Arnav fumed hearing Shyam's name and got up to leave.

Di: What happened Chotey?

Arnav: Nothing Di, I think Khushi needs help. I will see you later. Saying this, he stormed out of the room.
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Hope you liked this episode. I know its short update. I will make sure I give lot more in my next few episodes.

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Edited by deepthiya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome update looovvvee it 👏
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its really awesome.. hope to read more arshi moments... :)
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awesome buddy. I just read chapter 11. I will complete others also in no time.

Keep going.
Your story telling is apt for Khushi and arnav characters. 😊

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