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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank You everyone who made effort to Like and comment on my FF.

I would like to give you heads up about my upcoming episodes. Going forward, story will be full of roller coaster ride of romance, passion and lot of fights. According to me and my story, remember that they love each other but they dont understand each other well. Both assume alot about each other. Thats why in my story I am going to make them fight and resolve things with romance and passion. My main goal is to stay true to the Arnav and Khushi character as I dont want to assassin their original character because I always noticed in some other soaps, once guy falls for girl, he will become too mellow and goody goody. I dont like that, I like to portray Arnav as same personality but more sensible and Khushi will teach him just how to be one.
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Episode 13


Arnav furiously entered his room after what he heard about Shyam. He noticed Khushi cleaning up the bed. He rushed to her angrily.

Arnav: How many times should I warn you Khushi not to strain your hand. Why do I have to keep repeating things for you?

Khushi taken back with his behavior and looked at him silently, hoping that he would open and say whats bothering him. After a pause, she quickly remembered that she is dealing with Mr. Arnav Singh Raizada who doesnt believe in sharing matters. Without saying a word, she walked towards bathroom to freshen up. He walked past her and blocked her way. He is still very upset and angry with her.

Arnav: Is that it?

Khushi: (with confused look, she passively spoke) Is that what?

Arnav: Oh so you dont know what I am talking about?

Khushi thought for a sec and nodded No. She looked at him who is burning in anger and looked frustrated with her.

Khushi: Oh I know. I think you are upset that I am not taking care of myself. I am sorry, I will... Arnav interrupted her.

Arnav: Oh shut up. Thats not the issue.

Hearing him, she pouted without her own knowledge. She has no idea that she is slowly being pampered with his care and love.

Arnav: I mean thats one of the reason but didnt you notice me leaving the room happily and entering the room angrily. You didnt even ask me why I am so upset?

Khushi: (with her eyes widened, surprised that he is expecting her to question him) Ji, I noticed that but I thought you will be more angry if I ask you questions. Thats why I kept quiet.

Arnav angrily looked away and walked towards the glass doors. Khushi followed him.

Khushi: Achaan tell me ArnavJi. What happened? What's bothering you?

Arnav: Forget it. Its not important anymore. And you stop thinking Ms. Khushi Kumari Gupta, its doesnt suit you.

Khushi: (pissed with his last statement) And you start sharing things with people. You always yell at me if I ask you and even if I dont ask you anything. So You tell me Mr. Raizada what I should do. Khushi snapped at him.

Arnav rolled his eyes and gave that Not Again look. He took a step forward and he wanted to say sorry but his ego is making it difficult.

Arnav: Listen Khushi. I was angry that you didnt...I mean I shouldnt have yelled at you.... Khushi interrupted him.

Khushi: Good you accepted your mistake. But apology not accepted. And Mr.Raizada, forget it. Its not important anymore. She repeated his own words.

Her remark shot up his anger more and he furiously said...

Arnav: Wait a min, make no mistake Ms. Gupta I didnt even apologize.

Khushi: Whatever. Saying this she left to the bathroom and locked the door.

As she turned around and walked away, he shouted Khushi, I am talking to you. Dont you dare walk away from me. By the time he finished his sentence, she already locked the door behind her.

He banged the glass door hard in anger and left the room furiously. He paced across the pool area and made few phone calls. His last call is to his manager Aman.

Arnav: Hello Aman, I am assigning you a high prority task. Make sure you dont tell anyone, else you know what the consequences are, right?

Aman: Yes Sir. Have my word.

Arnav: Keep an eye on Shyam Manohar Jha. I need to know where he is, what he is doing, whom he is meeting, everything. Did you get it?

Aman: Sir, if I am not wrong, he is your Jijaji, right?

Arnav: I am not paying you to ask me questions. Do what you are asked to do? Keep me posted. Saying this, he hung up the phone.

Arnav sat by the poolside when he noticed NK by the door.

NK: Nanav, did you hear that Jijaji is coming in next 2 days.

Arnav nodded.

NK: You know and you are sitting calmly. Whats in your mind?

Arnav: Nothing. We will see when he shows up.

NK: What do you mean nothing? Atleast tell us if we are going to reveal his dirty plan to Di.

Arnav: Not yet NK. Lets wait until Di's pregnancy is over. Meanwhile, we will see what he is upto. I have assigned someone to keep an eye on him. Lets wait and watch.

Khushi overheard the conversation and the it made clear to her why Arnav is so upset. She felt guilty for whatever happened between them moments ago. She thought of apologizing to him once NK leaves.

NK saw Khushi standing by the glass door and he approached her. Arnav lifted his head and saw her in golden yellow suit. Her skin is radiating glow. Her hair is still wet with dripping droplets at its end. He noticed that her front layers are bothering her face on the right hand side. She is having trouble tucking those strands behind her ear. She stopped her efforts when NK walked towards her.

NK: KhushiJI, Hows you saath?

Khushi: Saath? Oh NanheJi Saath nahin, Haaath.

NK: Yeah Yeah, same thing.

Khushi: I am feeling lot better NanheJi.

NK: Ofcourse, why shouldnt you? afterall who is taking care of you, my brother Nanav.

As they heard him, Arnav and Khushi looked at each other lovingly. They both forgot their earlier fight. Khushi blushed in approval. NK who noticed them lost into eachother, bid good bye. None of them responded. NK muttered Well, no point saying goodbye, better leave NK and he left the room by closing the doors behind him.
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Hope you liked this episode. I know its short update. I will make sure I give lot more in my next few episodes.

Please Please Please Comment, you have no idea how much your comments motivate me to write. Please Buddy Me if you like to receive PMs.
Edited by deepthiya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely update!!!!! continue soon, thx for the pm!!!!
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thank you for another awesome update !

enjoyed it thoroughly 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely update!!!!! continue soon, thanks for the pm!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank You everyone who made effort to Like and comment on my FF.

Oh guys, after watching todays episode, my brain is not functioning properly. I think the day they consummate their marriage, I will stop doing everything but drool over Arnav's feelings and romance. Hmm, that day is not coming anytime soon. I wanna see more romantic scenes before they consummate :))
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Episode 14


NK left the room and closed the doors behind him. Gush of wind distracted Khushi and her wet hair. Arnav noticed her front layers bothering her. He waited for a moment for Khushi to fix them up. He saw her struggling hard to tuck those strands behind ears. He stepped forward to help her. Khushi noticed him approaching towards her and she felt conscious of herself with his piercing looks.

Khushi: Why are you staring at me like that?

Arnav didnt speak a word nor looked into her eyes. He slowly tucked her hair behind ears. He went around her back, sniffing through her scented hair. He pulled all her hair to one side facing front. He came around to face her and said Now its perfect.

Arnav turned towards his cupboard and started going through some files. Khushi still standing by the glass doors facing pool. Their backs facing each other. Arnav looked at her through mirror and noticed something. She is in her own deep thoughts, phrasing her words to apologize to Arnav.

Arnav with file in his hand, walked upto Khushi and stood infront of her. He sighed her to check her back. Khushi didnt understand what he is trying to say. Her face turned confused. He held her shoulders and made her take few steps backward and pointed her to check her suit in mirror. Her face turned pink as she noticed her dori untied. With one hand, she tried to reach for the dori strings to tie. After several attempts, he noticed that she is getting tired. He handed over the file to her and turned her so that he could face her back. Both could see each other through mirror infront of them. Arnav could see her nervous facial expression through mirror located infront of her and he smirked. She blushed and lowered her eyes.

Arnav reached for both ends of the dori. He touched her bare back with his fingertips. He felt her skin soft, silky and extremely inviting. He moved little bit closer to stamp his breath on her back. His extreme closeness is tickling her back and neck. She closed her eyes in shy as she knew he is watching her every move, expression and emotion. Slowly and sensuously, he made his fingers dance on her back. She arched back with his touch, which created deep slit in her back. Arnav smirked more at her expressions and came more closer to her. With creased forehead, closed eyes, she tightened her lips. She held her dupatta nervously. She liked the fact that he is the winner of this game and for the first time she didnt mind losing to him.

His fingers finally danced their way to the ends of dori. He tied the first knot and secured it between his lips, partly touching her bare back. Her grip on her dupatta tightened as she felt his lips. He then continued to tie the second knot to secure the first knot. He slowly moved away from her, taking off his fingers from dori strings. She still has her eyes closed, unable to come out of the sweet pleasure he created for her.

He walked around and stood infront of her. Without disturbing her, he admired her nervous face for few mins. And slowly he whispered in her ears taking the file from her hands, Khushi you can open your eyes. I was done long back. Saying this he chuckled at her. Khushi opened her eyes in shock, pushed him shyly and paced out of the room.

Arnav smiled at her reaction and got back to work.

In the kitchen, Khushi noticed Payal and Anjali preparing for lunch. Seeing Khushi, Anjali noticed something and sighed Payal. Payal replied with huge smile.

Anjali: Arre wah KhushiJi, your dori knot is beautiful. Whoever tied it, have done beautifully. Looks like you trained HIM (after pause) or her well.

Anjali and Payal bursted out into laughter. Khushi embarrassed and blushed hearing Anjali's comments.

Khushi: Di, Please. Nothing like that. ArnavJi didnt tie it. I tied it by myself.

Anjali & Payal together: Hum ne kab kaha ki ArnavJi ne baandha hain. They laughed at her once again.

Anjali: Waise, how did you tie it with one hand. I am sure you are hiding something.

Khushi: (blushing) you are right Di. ArnavJi helped me tie it.

Anjali: I told you before, my brother is very talented.

Khushi: Your brother, talented??? No way, he took so long to tie it. I dont think one single day would be enough for him to tie this simple dori. She muttered without thinking what she just said.

Anjali & Payal laughed at her remarks uncontrollably.

Anjali: Thats what makes them Husbands KhushiJi. Its just the begininng. You will see more and more romance...(coughed uhoouhoo)...I mean interesting stuff soon.

Saying this both Anjali and Payal gave her mocking smile.
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Hope you liked this episode. I know its short update. I will make sure I give lot more in my next few episodes.

Please Please Please Comment, you have no idea how much your comments motivate me to write. Please Buddy Me if you like to receive PMs.
Edited by deepthiya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
Very nice episode lovely 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely chapter !
It is so elegant, apt and cute.
Please post the next one soon and longer post 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: chatterbug

lovely chapter !

It is so elegant, apt and cute.
Please post the next one soon and longer post 😃

I know it's very short update. I thought I wud write something before 4th July holiday as my daughter will be at home and will not have time to write. Next chapter I promise I will compensate with really long chapter.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Superb update dear!!! Waiting for next part.
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wow wonderful story
read all the parts simply superb
pls pls add me to ur pm list
and pm me when u update nxt part

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