FF: Love or Hate??? Updated Chp 28

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Hello friends,

After reading alot of FFs and OSs in IPKKND forum, only one writer impressed me and that was princesssunaraand her work on ArnavJis Guide to get a baby. She expressed every detail in such a beautiful manner that I couldnt stop blushing as I read through each line (sometimes multiple times to feel the effect 😉). Way to go girl!!

This is my first post in India-forums after 5 long years. I used to write FFs on Prem and Mukthi from Kasautii Zindagi Kii and was much appreciated back then and I hope to create the similar magic with Arnav and Khushi.

I named my FF Love or Hate??? to stay true to the original story and Arnav & Khushi characters. I am writing this based on current track. Hope you like it.

List of Episodes:
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Episode 1


Khushi: Di, Could you lend me 2 Lakhs. I would like to donate to orphanage near Amma's house. I could have asked Arnavji but since he is not...

Di interrupted her saying...

Di: Khushiji, did I ask you any explanation. You are part of our family. Please dont embarrass us by being formal.

Saying this, Di handed over check for 2 laks to Khushi. Shyam while observing all these, decided to find out what Khushi is upto and left the area. On the other end, NK noted Shyam's reaction and thought to himself that everything is going perfect.

Khushi met NK in the corridor...

Khushi: NanheJi, What was his reaction?

NK: Jijaji is totally confused and I am sure he is going to keep an eye on you. KhushiJi, Jijaji is going towards your room, are you ready for more action?

Khushi nodded and ran to her room leaving NK behind. Shyam hid outside Khushi's room and tried to spy on Khushi. Khushi seeing this with corner of her eye, started speaking to herself...

Khushi: Good that Di believed me. Before ArnavJi comes, I have to fool all family members and take all their money, property and everything. I have to drag Arnav Singh Raizada onto road for separating me and ShyamJi.

Shyam was totally shocked to hear this and wasn't expecting Khushi to say this even in his dreams.

Khushi: (contd) Then, I and ShyamJi together happily ever after. But before that I have to explain ShyamJi that I was acting all this while for the same goal as his and to take revenge on ArnavJi for spoiling her family's reputation in Lucknow. I have to talk to ShyamJi and plead for forgiveness. I cant lose ShyamJi.

Hearing this, ShyamJi couldnt believe his ears. He felt very happy and tried to barge into her room to hug her. Seeing this, NK stormed into the room, bumping ShyamJi against the wall and asked...

NK: Jijaji, what are you doing here?

Shyam: (didnt know what to say, but angrily said) NanheJi, what are YOU doing here?

NK: I am here to save KhushiJi. I mean to save KhushiJi from PayalJi. Because PayalJi is very angry that KhushiJi didnt give medicines to NaniJi. (NK turned to KhushiJi and winked) KhushiJi let's go, else PayalJi is going to kill you and me for not bringing you along with me.

Khushi while leaving the room, gave Shyam a very pleasant look. Shyam looked at her with smile and frowned at NK for intruding.

Khushi: NanheJi, So, what do you think?

NK: Perfect! Bullseye.

Khushi: NanheJi, thank you so much for coming on time. Else...even to think of touching him is disgusting. But I will go to any extent to save ArnavJi.

NK: KhushiJi, dont worry. Nanav will soon be with you. You love him alot, dont you? He is lucky guy.

Khushi in her own thoughts...Hum Pyaar ArnavJise...I dont know NanheJi if this is called love. But one thing is for sure, ArnavJi hume bahuth pyaar karthe hain (ArnavJi loves me a lot).

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PRECAP: Kushi's fake confession to Shyam. Shyam on cloud Nine.

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I hope you guys enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it. Please do leave your comments if possible 😉.
Edited by deepthiya - 12 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Update soon
Hope Arnav comes back soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oooh I like it! 😛

Interesting plan Khushi and NK! WOO

Do update soon and please PM me!

HAHA Shyaamu's getting happs! :P
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Thank You everyone who made effort to Like and comment on my FF.

List of Episodes:
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I am on the writing spree and so here goes the next episode....

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Episode 2


All family members assembled at dining table for breakfast.

Di: KhushiJi, how was your trip to orphanage yesterday?

Khushi: (she totally forgot the excuse she used to get the money from Di) Ji, Orphanage???

Shyam: (trying to cover her up) Wahi, near your Amma's house. You wanted to donate 2 laks.

Khushi then remembered and gave NK a faint smile conveying that Shyam is falling in their trap.

Khushi: Yes Di. They were very happy and asked me to convey big thanks to you. Thank You so much Di and also I am very sorry (she conveyed sorry for telling Di lie).

Di: Sorry? But why?

Khushi: I mean sorry for asking money at the last minute. I should have given you sometime.

Di: No problem KhushiJi. And Di smiled at Khushi lovingly.

Everyone were done with their breakfast and started to leave. Shyam smiled at Khushi and Khushi too smiled at him. She turned to NK and sighed him to come to upstairs. NK nodded.

Seeing Khushi going upstairs, Shyam too followed her. Just then, Di caught him and asked him to take her to shopping for baby clothes.

Shyam: (smartly replied) Rani Saheba, you know that we should not shop for any baby related items before babies arrival.

Di: Ji, I know. We will not buy anything. We will just do window shopping, please ShyamJi.

He had no excuse to say no to her. He reluctantly agreed and left together.

Back in Khushi's room...

NK: KhushiJi, so whats out next plan? Have you thought anything?

Khushi: Yes NanheJi, we have to make him believe that I totally fell for him without saying it explicitly.

NK got confused. He thought Jijaji kidnapped Nanav to steal property but what has he got to do anything with KhushiJi's feelings.

NK: KhushiJi, what are you saying? How does it matter what you feel for Jijaji? You are hiding something. I want to know complete truth, else I am not going to help you completely.

Khushi cursed herself for blurting it out and told everything about Shyam and how he betrayed her family but she didnt say anything about the reason behind her forceful marriage with Arnav.

NK: OMG KhushiJi, Maine kabhi nahi socha tha ki Jijaji itna satiya insaan hain.

KhushiJi: NanheJi, satiya nahi ghatiya.

NK: Haan, wahi same to same. Okay, coming back to our plan, I have an idea and he whispered his idea in her ear.

Khushi asked Nani where Di left. Khushi took her purse and left with NK. They both arrived at the same shopping mall as that of ShyamJi and Di. They looked for them in all baby stores. Finally, they found ShyamJi and Di.

NK said Khushi that he will hide somewhere behind to watch and asked KhushiJi to proceed.

Khushi without Di's knowledge started fooling around Shyam by showing up and hiding away from Shyam. Shyam noticed this and liked the fact that Khushi is giving him attention. He too wanted to play with her.

Shyam: Rani Saheba, I will come in few mins.

Di: Ji, where r you going now?

Shyam: Arre, why will I leave you. I am going to Men's room. Any objection?(asked his wife naughtily).

She giggled and let him go. Shyam disappeared right away and Khushi wasnt able to find him anywhere. Suddenly, he came behind her and caught her shoulders. His touch felt like touch of a roaches all over her body. She quickly moved away. She regrouped herself and thought she has to sacrifice her feelings to save ArnavJi. She came near Shyam.

Shyam: KhushiJi, what are you doing here?

Khushi: I wanted to talk to you at home. I was mis...miss..(she couldnt complete the sentence..though its just drama, her heart is not allowing her to say those words...it kept saying Kushi's can only miss ArnavJi and noone else)

Khushi rephrased her words and said...

Khushi: ShyamJi, I am very sorry for hurting you so much. I should have shown my true feelings long before. I am just tired of acting as ideal daughter-in-law and wife. I am done with all these stupid emotions and feelings. I wanna share all my happiness, my feelings and my life only...(gave a pause and said to herself...one and only with ArnavJi and no one else) only with you. Please take me away from all these people forever.

NK heard all these from round the corner and understood how painful it is for Khushi to act like this.

Shyam elated hearing this but still little doubtful about this sudden change in Khushi's behavior. Shyam thought to himself: Stupid, dont think too much and act right before she changes her decision.

Shyam: KhushiJi, I am so happy that you realized my love. Just wait for few more days, I will set everything right. (He didnt wanna blurt out his plan about Arnav)

Khushi: No ShyamJi, I cant wait any longer.

Shyam: KhushiJi, we cant go anywhere without taking over all the property from Raizadas.

Khushi: ShyamJi, you already kidnapped him, you have all the papers. Whats stopping you now?

Shyam thought if he need to explain to her everything in detail. He had his second thoughts.

ShyamJi: Yes KhushiJi, but there is small problem. If he dies unexpectedly, all money goes to charity.

Khushi shocked to hear this and every puzzle fell into place. She didnt understand how to react. Just then, luckily Di was coming towards their side. Khushi noticed it and said she will talk with him later and left the place.

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PRECAP: Khushi meets Arnav.
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Edited by deepthiya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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tht is soo nice i like it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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What will she says to Arnav
Update soon
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This was really good!
Awesome job! I can't wait for the meeting of Arnav and Khushi.
Do PM me.
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Thank You everyone who made effort to Like and comment on my FF.

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Here goes the next episode....

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Episode 3


Payal: (phone rings) Hello Amma, How are you and Hows BabuJi and BuaJi.

Amma: We are fine Payal bitiya. How are you and Hows DamadJi and Khushi bitiya?

Payal: Amma, these days Khushi is not doing well. I mean she is not eating well, sleeping well. She is not doing any of her crazy things.

Amma: But why is she not eating well. Is her health OK?

Payal: Amma, I think she is missing ArnavJi. All the time she is worried about him and lost in her thoughts. I was thinking if you could come over here and spend some time, it will be a good change for her.

Amma: Sure bitiya, we will come in the evening. I will bring BabuJi as well (saying this Amma hung up the phone).

Khushi and NK on the way back to ShantiBhavan...

Khushi: NanheJi, I made a big mistake.

NK: Big Mistake? What?

Khushi: NanheJi, in my conversation with ShyamJi, accidentally I blurted out that he kidnapped ArnavJi. Now he might suspect me instead of trusting me. What will I say if he asks me how I know for sure that ShyamJi is the kidnapper?

NK: KhushiJi, in that case, he must already be suspecting you. You have to very careful with your choice of words and actions, going forward. But dont worry, I am with you. We will sort it out and face it.

In Shyam's room...

Shyam: (thinking loud to himself) Good that KhushiJi started trusting my love. I need to get rid of him and make her my own soon.

Just then something struck his mind...

Shyam: BTW, how come KhushiJi knows that I am the kidnapper. I never told her and she never saw me in that place where Saalle Saheb is kept. Something is going on...First I have to figure out how she knows before I really trust her. I hope you are not playing games with me KhushiJi, else you need to face the consequences, real bad consequences. He grinned and left to check on Khushi.

NK noticed ShyamJi coming towards KhushiJi room and dragged KhushiJi out of her room as he thought KhushiJi is not in position to answer any of Jijaji's questions.

Seeing Khushi not in her room, ShyamJi turned to go back but just then an evil idea struck his mind and he thought of searching the room to find any clues.

Downstairs, in living room, Amma, BuaJi and BabuJi showed up to visit Khushi. Khushi is now worried what Shyam is upto. He sighed NK to check on ShyamJi. As he got up to check on him, BuaJi called NK to sit next to her as she missed his silly Hindi language. NK sat helplessly. Both NK and Khushi are really worried.

Di: BuaJi, We are very lucky to have your daughter Khushi as Arnav's wife. Though their life style is different they follow the same ideology.

BuaJi didnt understand what AnjaliJi is saying and gave a puzzled look.

Di: I mean yesterday, she did great job by donating 2 laks to orphange near your house.

NK and Khushi shocked to hear this and didnt understand how to cover it up. By the time she opened her mouth to speak out, BuaJi interrupted her...

Buaji: (with confused look) Orphanage?? We dont have any Orphanage near our house.

Khushi: Wahi Buaji, behind happy singh garage, there is road that leads to department store and to its left there is police station and to its right there is tailor shop and behind the tailor shop if you go few kilometers, you will see the Orphanage. One of my friend suggested. Right NanheJi.

NK: Yeah Yeah Thats right. Even I went with KhushiJi.

BuaJi: Where is it? I never heard of.

Khushi: Leave it BuaJi. You are getting old and you dont remember anything these days.

Buaji grinned first and laughed at her comment.

The way Khushi explained everything sounded very suspicious to NaniJi. She started wondering why Khushi bitiya is behaving like this these days. She thought she need to speak to Khushi bitiya soon.

Back in Khushi's room, Shyam found toothpick soaked in blood and dusted blind-fold. Shyam remembered blind-fold that he used to cover Arnav's eyes. He thought deep to figure out what the tooth pick says. Just then, it struck to him that his shoes had stains of Arnav's blood.

Shyam: (speaking angrily to himself) So KhushiJi, you are fooling me. Now that you know everything, I will make you part this game and I will make sure that Saalle Saheb thinks you are the kidnapper. You made a big mistake KhushiJi, you have to pay a big price for it. The game is on now. (saying this he left the room without taking any clue with him)

Khushi and NK excused themselves and came to her room. Everything looks alright. They felt relieved and decided to be careful going forward. Just about to leave the room. Khushi noticed a paper on her bed.

The paper says "meet me on terrace at 10:00PM tonight". She got scared for a second. But eventually she decided she will do everything she can.

Khushi left to terrace at 10PM to meet Shyam. NK was already hiding somewhere on terrace but Khushi doesnt know where he is hiding.

Khushi: ShyamJi..ShyamJi. are you there?

Shyam hugged her from behind. He doesnt want to leave any opportunity to trouble her. Its all his way of playing game and torture Khushi. Khushi quickly brushed him off and went away from him.

Shyam: What happened KhushiJi. I thought you love me now.

Khushi: Haan, but I got scared as I didnt see your face. saying this she came little closer to him.

Shyam: No problem KhushiJi, going forward you will get used to my games..I mean my masti mazaak.

Khushi reluctantly smiled at him.

Shyam: KhushiJi I am thinking of sending you tomorrow to the location where Salle Saheb is kept.

Khushi: (shocked to hear this) Me.

Shyam: But if you are not comfortable seeing him, then...

Khushi: No No ShyamJi. I want to go. I really want to go.

Shyam noticed her excitement. Realizing this, Khushi said...

Khushi: ShyamJi, even I want to take revenge. Please give me this opportunity. Please.

ShyamJi: Arre dont beg me so much. I will do whatever you say KhushiJi. But you have to do one task for me. You need to act like his beloved wife and take his signatures on these papers. (saying this, he handed her few stamp papers). I dont know how you will convince him to sign these papers. If you do, I will assume that you love me as much as I do.

Khushi nodded and felt very excited to meet ArnavJi. Khushi started to leave the place. Just then Shyam pulled her and said..

Shyam: What is this KhushiJi, wont you give me goodnight hug?

Saying this he forcefully hugged her. She hated herself and everybit of him. and bit her tongue in anger. Shyam started coming close to her to kiss. Seeing this NK made footsteps sound. Shyam quickly pushed her away and sighed her to leave the place.

Shyam stood there for a while. Meanwhile, NK escaped the scene to meet Khushi. Shyam called his goons and explained something very seriously.

NK and Khushi are excited to meet Arnav finally. They laid out their plan of actions for the big day.

Next Morning, NK left house saying he is going for date. Few mins later, Khushi sighed ShyamJi before leaving the home and Shyam gave a wicked smile. She is able to sense something is not correct but she cant lose this opportunity. She was willing to take risk for ArnavJi.

NK hid in Khushi's car trunk and both arrived at the location. They didnt know that Shyam is following them. One of the goons sighed Khushi to go in and the same guy called all other goons out of Arnav's room. NK without goon's knowledge slipped out of the car and went in wrong direction and noticed Shyam's car.

NK: Jijaji, OMG. So its his trap. I have to save KhushiJi. (saying this he hid behind big pile of trash)

Khushi entered the dark room and saw Arnav sitting unconscious. She broke down seeing him like that. Her legs couldnt take a step forward. She was completely lost seeing him. She didnt know what to do and what to say.

Khushi: ArnavJi.

Arnav slowly opened his eyes and gave a faint smile. He closed his eyes again thinking its his dream.

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PRECAP: Shyam shoots.
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Edited by deepthiya - 13 years ago
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Omg !!!! Brilliant story plz pmwhen you will update the next episode
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Excellent Storyline! Loved this update!
Can't wait next part!
thanks for the pm :D

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