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SHALINI

@valeyrie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#791

loved the story... there could have no ending more apt than this one... It would have been wrong and yes fake as you rightfully mentioned if Khushi chose Arnav in the end... It was really sad ending, but nevertheless apt for the story... All the characters built were amazing

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sharme

@sparklystarstud

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Posted: 13 years ago

#792

where were you all this while...seriously...

and in wat pit had i been that i missed out this story for this long...

u are one AWESOME writer i have found here luv...

this story line and the narrating style of urs...B.R.I.L.L.I.A.N.T

one of the masterpieces in characterization i have come across...

loved it totallyyy...

and the ending was the best fit ever...

thanx for sharing such a gr8 story with us luv

im proud to say IM A FAN of ur words already...

~~~ sam

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#793

Wow! What a story! As a reader i am not happy because Arhi are not together. But as a writer i have to say Hats of to you! Simply superb work! Loved it.