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Shishir Darsh

@marauder

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Kanks have i i ever told you are brilliant at writing . If not then hear it now. You are simply awesome. The way you described Sharon's state of mind was jaw dropping. Wonderful start. PM me when u update.

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Radioactive.

@Radioactive.

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Ahh, Kanks, I'm so glad that you've already started off with your new FF. And need I say it's as wonderful as ever. And there's a lot of emotions in there to understand in just one go. And Nidhi's comment makes me even more sure that there's gotta be more than what meets the eye. Gah, I guess I'll just have to wait. 😳

Oh well, be sure to update this soon enough. Can't wait to read the next part.

P.S Are Nidhi n Shiv Sis competing "Who makes the comment first" on your post?! 😆 Really does seem that way!!

P.P.S Like I said, I absolutely love your writing style, Admire rather.!

Edited by Srishti_SwaRon - 13 years ago

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Kanks, It's good to see you starting a new FF with your old one just one chapter away from being over and though you have warned us that this FF is going to be dark and I can't really figure anything out about the FF from your prologue...I am still intrigued to read on just so I can uncover the mystery...So, do count me in when you send out the PMs when you update !!!

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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Kanshika this was a wonderful one.

wow gal u have said it wonderful.

The prologue is promising.

It depicts the pains or inner turmoil of girl in distress .

Do continue it.

Thanks for the pm.

Update soon.

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tanuka

@Tanuka_TanHa

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

kanks its lovely to see u start a swaron ff !! its needless to say that u r brilliant at writing . the way u emoted sharons feelings , it was fantastic :) do continue soon... thanks for the pm.

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Shalini

@lyfisbeautiful

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

I am so glad u came up with this kankshita.. hvnt read ur earlier ffs bt frm watevr little i hv read f ur writing, i know it appeals to me.. u hv this very different style of writing.. its more like an unopened gift whr u dnt knw wat to expect.. nt even how it'l leave u feeling in the end.. like right now i am very eager to read on bt i dnt knw hw m gonna react to the dark element wich u refer to.. bt if m solely to judge on the basis f the aftr effects of the prologue thn i cn say this much.. i wnt b missing this fr anything.. It didnt leave me in a happy frame of mind given the theme, bt it sure left me deeply moved n in a wierd state of mind.. n i like this feeling.. so kindly continue pm-ing me whenevr u update.. :)

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366774

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

There are very few people in the world who are well aware of the fact that they 've the writing style that can fascinate people and you are certainly one of em.Wonderful effort as always,just as others I too have no idea how I'm going to react to the dark side,all I know is I simply loved it,liked your choice of words also.Looking forward to thd next chapter,do keep PMing me.

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NR_786

@NR_786

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

aaahhh well it is beautifully written girl!!👏 i'm not a regular FF reader buh yaa this once really attracts me and i so wanted to read the first chapter!! i have no idea how em goin to react on the dark side buh em realy lookin forward to it!!

P.S. the concept is really different from the other FF..!!

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basket_101

@basket_101

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Hey! Hinal here (=

I really loved the prologue!

I enjoy reading anything for the most part, but when the content has some depth and is not only something whimsical that you may only read in fairy tales, it fascinates me and interests me a lot more!

Though the "dark"ness part is something I'm not sure of how I would react to... I appreciate how it's at least a little more realistic about life, cause we all know how "magical" life really is 😆
Anyways... You're cohesive writing is making me eager to read more!

Thanks for sending the pm... I'm definitely looking forward to the FF (=