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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Wow...brilliant update!!!! 👏 Plz update a bit sooner,if possible!! 😳

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Shalini

@lyfisbeautiful

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Love u for this kanks🤗

Loved every bit of it.. right frm the begining till the very end.. And for the first time i dint wish an update was longer cos this seemed perfect in all aspects..

Though this is the first chapter I can already feel my heart reach out to Sharon.. I like her already. M luking forward to see how SwaRon interactions unfold in future. This isnt the swaron we r used to.. this is very different from whatever little of swaron i have read over here.. This was brilliant Kanks... A very interesting start.. very engaging.. Though it begins from a random day in Sharon's life everything seems to be very clear.. not a thing seemed uncanny or out of place.. M dying to know more about them.. dying to know why there seems to be a certain distance between them though they share the same roof or why Sharon needs to make a conscious effort to mk him feel loved whereas it is quite effortless from his side.. special mention to the way the chapter ended.. Loved the last line.. It will be interesting to know why it ws 'routine' for Swayam to distance himself from her at times.. Pls keep up with the updates even if u r busy with other things.. 😊

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Shivs

@The007Shivani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

amazing update thanks for the pm

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668837

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#44

That is amazingly written Kanks!:)

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ABI

@ABBY92

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

You described Sharon's frustration over dance really well...It was sad to see that something she loved so much had turned into nothing but a job for her !!! Swayam on the other hand...You can see that he loves her but at the same time, he's distancing himself from her...I'm looking forward to finding out why he is doing so !!!

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shweta211

@shweta211

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#46

I honestly dunno what to say, it's that personal, only that maybe you are even more sadistic than me. 😆 There is no legitimate reason why she suffers like this, when he IS with her, only she does. There isn't much to analyse, since you ve done that, more to be felt. I am no writer critic, that's why I ll say that I throughly enjoyed reading, I want to read more, and that it lingers in my mind after I am done. I am going to be in love with this Swayam, I know that.

P.S. You're growing on me. 😳 😳

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Anindita Sengupta

@Anindita91

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Wow loved the way u described everything...from the beginning till the end...the small swaron convo has so much depth in it... both of them love each other so much...but why is swayam distancing himself from her...i am really eager to know why it is a routine for swayam to distance himself from her...thanx for the pm...plz update soon n pm me when u update next...

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roshnithediva

@roshnithediva

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#48

awesome update
loved it to the core
thanks for the pm 😊

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NinaArief

@NinaArief

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#49

very convincing update, liking it loadz, you are a fab writer and im sure you will rock this.

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Shishir Darsh

@marauder

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#50

Why i have a feeling that everything isn't the same about SwaRon as it appears in the first look . Why i have a inkling that this update is misleading ? I don't know it may sound far fetched but i think Sharon is schizophrenic in this FF. Because nothing seems to be right about Swayam and Sharon relationship to me.
A very engaging and intriguing start. Loved the way you have expressed the frustration of Sharon over being instructd what to do and what not to do. Her pain , anger and frustration can be felt . Superb writing. Waiting for the next update.

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