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Chapter 5:

Kriya got up immediately and clenched her fist. She then released it and rose her hand and slapped him hard enough to make the canteen go silent with the sound of the slap echoing. Eveyone was shocked at this sudden action of hers. Swayam thought that she would shout but didn't expect her to slap him. Nobody dared to blink their eyes even for a second because they didn't want to miss anything in the scene happening right now. Most of them were happy because this b****y B*****d who flaunts about himself and his money deserves this. Now when everyone came back to their senses a huge smile was plastered on the faces of the gang and mostly on sharon, rey and swayam's face. Sharon soo badly wanted to this because this idiot moron had misused her friendship and tried to make his win the Inter College Dance Festival that had occurred recently but at the nick of the moment the louisans had changed their routine and performed well to bag the second place beating shivam's team. But she never got that chance and today she was extremely happy that he was been slapped by one of her friends though she hasn't spoke to kriya very much but still she was happy. And here rey and swayam were equally happy because this b*****d had hurt their best friend and love respectively. Their happiness became double when she started shouting at him.
Kr:tum samajhte kya ho apne aap ko???jo man mai aayega wo karoge huh??manners hai ya fir nahi tum mai??mujhe yeh tappad ussi den maarna chahiye tha jab tumne vo sab kiya tha but never mind uss na sahi toh aaj hi. next time mere paas bhi aayena toh iss bhi zor ka thappad padega do you get that!!!!!!!! Saying this she left from there.
Sh(with full on attitude):you know what Mr. Shivam you deserve this. Saying this she also left from there followed by the remaining girls and boys leaving reyam and shivam behind. One of the student present there had captured all the incident and with in no time it was spread around the whole college.
Sw:next time se meri behan aur mere friends se dur rehna samjha. Now reyam also left leaving behind a furious shivam.
Shi;u will have to pay for this Ms. Kriya Ghai...iska badla toh mai lekar rahunga.

Shivam was walking in the corridor and everyone present there was making fun of him. he had become the topic of day. Shivam couldn't bear any more insult so he left from there. Here kriya was in the girls locker room.
*****Kriya's POV*****
yeh ho kya gaya tha mujhe. Maine all of a sudden shivam ko thappad maara and to be frank mujhe bahut acha lag raha hai.Rey ki advice sach mai kaam aagayi. I wish maine yeh ussi din kiya hota *sigh*but jo bhi ho I felt light. Kash maine usse do teen galiya bhi dedi hoti toh shayad aur better feel karti.
*****POV Ended*****
She was smiling all the time. Sharon and the remaining girls entered the locker room. They saw kriya smiling.
Ne:Kriya kya thappad maara tumne, jiss tarah films mai dikhate haina bilkul ussi tarah, maza aagaya. (this brought kriya back to present.
Vi:ya dude seriously man he deserves that.
Sh:thank u kriya for jo kuch bhi tumne aaj kiya
Kr:aap mujhe thanks kyu bol rahi hai??
Si:because shivam jab Kr colg mai tha tab usne sharon ki friend ship ko misuse kiya aur hume inter colg dance competition mai dis qualify karna chahta tha but luckily aisa kuch nahi huya.
Kr:no wonder vo kitna kamina hai
Vi:guys chodo na y talk about him lets go the class.
Sh:lets go
All the girls go to the class and the boys were present there. All the girls went and sat near their respective boys. The seating arrangement was like this in the 4th row sharon was seating in the 2nd bench and swayam beside her and next to swayam kriya and beside her rey.
Sw:hmmm lagta hai tum firse apne jhansi ki rani avtar mai aagayi ho
Kr:kabhi kabhi dikhana pata hai yeh wala avtaar
Lecturer enters the class so they stop talking.
During the class rey talks to kriya in whispers
R:lagta hai tumhe action movies bahut pasand hai
Kr:nahi mujhe action movies nahi pasand but kyu puch rahe ho
R:agar tumhe action movies pasand nahi toh fir thodi der pehle jo maine action dekha tha vo kya tha
Kr:vo toh bus ho gaya but sach mai mujhe bahut acha feel huya
R:after all idea kiska tha, Raising his invisible and mean while the lecturer turns around and sees rey raising his hand in the air.
Lec:Mr reyansh yeh aap kya kar rahe hai!??!, His hand was still in the same position and every one looking at him.
R:a vo umm sir vo mai vo...while rey was thinking wat answer to give kriya was giggling and rey glared at her. The lecturer noticed kriya giggling.
Lec: Ms Ghai aap kyu has rahi hai. Care to explain.
Kr:ummm nahi sir i mean I'm sorry sir
R:sorry sir
Lec: Concentrate both of u
KR:yes sir
Kr:rey plzz ab aap mujhe concentrate karne do baat mat karna
R:okk
After some time rey was getting bored so he decided to talk to kriya.
R:kya kar rahi ho
Kr(annoyed):wat do u think mai kya kar rahi hu
R(innocenyly):padhayi
Kr(irritated):rey yeh class hai toh obviously padhayi hi karungi
R:par kyu kar rahi ho
Kr(extremely irritated): rey yeh kaise questions puch rahe ho ab plzz aap chup karo
R:par mai bore ho raha hu plzz baat karte hai na
Kr:arrgghh no
The lecturer noticed rey and kriya again talking
Lec: reyansh and kriya both of you out of the class now
Kr:sir but meri koi galti nahi hai
Lec:OUT
Rey happily walked out of the class whereas kriya was angry with rey because of him she was asked to get out of the class.

*****Outside the class room*****
Kriya was walking in the corridor with anger on her nose. Rey tried talking to her but failed.
R(selftalk):lagta hai bahut gussa hai. but issme gussa hone wali kaunsi baat hai agar ek lecxture nahi attend kiya toh kuch ho toh nahi jaayega. He actually said this loud enough for kriya to listen.
Kr: bahtu kuch ho jaayega agar maine ek lecture nahi attend kiya. Ek toh pehle hi maine mid term admission liya hai aur agar classes theek se attend nahi karungi toh kaise sab kuch catch up kar paungi. Aur ek baat yeh sab kuch aapki wajah se huya hai,
R:arrey but I'm sorry
She didn't listen to him and started walking.
R:tum kahan jaa rhai ho??
Kr:library kyu aap n\bhi chaloge??
R:nahi nahi kabhi bhi nahi agar mai library gaya toh mera Reputation kharab ho jaayega kyu library mai sirf nerds and geeks jaate hai mere jaise cool duded nahi. Isliye no to library.
Kr:toh mai aapko geek lagti hu
R: na nahi nahi maine aise kab kaha
Kr(raising her eyebrow):Really. Toh fir abhi abhi aapne hi kaha na ki jo library jaate hai vo nerds and geeks hot hai.
R:nahi vo toh glati se bol diya. I'm sorry
Suddenly some thing strikes in kriya's mind.
Kr:aapko maafi chahiye right???
R:haan
Kr:toh aapko maafi tab hi milegi jab aap mere saath library jaaoge aur padhoge for nearly an hour.
R: wat!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! no ways
Kr:toh fir theek hai maafi ka plan cancel.
R:acha acha ruko I'm coming.
Kr that's better.
R(selftalk): yeh kya hogaya hai mujhe. Mai kriya ke kehne par library jaa rahu hu vo bhi apni Rep ko khatre mai daal kar. But y??//Kya hai kriya mai jo mjhe itna attract kar raha hai uski taraf????
His thought were broken by kriya.
Kr:chale. They had reached the library. and before entering rey was praying to god.
R:hey god ji bacha lena plzzz.
Kr(giggling):draame baaz
R: draam wat????
Kr:kuch nahi...aapki hindi bahut weak hai.

Both of them entered the library and every one was shocked on seeing REYANSH SINGHANIA in library. No matter how important project or exam they have rey never went to library. On seeing rey in the library the librarian was almost about to faint. This had become the new gossip of the day. Rey like an obedient child followed kriya's orders and sat in the library reading some random novel. Finally an hour passed by and they left the library.
R:so, ab mujhe maafi milegi???
Kr:hmmm...
R:itna kya soch rahi ho
Kr:okk kiya maine aapko maaf.
Soon the class also ended and within no time the gang to know the shock of the day Rey in the library. Kriyansh were in the canteen and the gang also reached there. As soon as they saw rey they started pouring numerous questions on him.
R: WOAH guys...hold on...relax i know tum logo ko shock laga hai ki mai library gaya but kya karu kuch log mujhe black mail kar rahe the.(he said this eyein kriya) Here kriya was laughing at his situation.
Sw:kisne tujhe black mail kiya
R:teri pyaari behan ne.
Sh:kriya tumne??
Kr: haan maine hi kiya kyunki inki hi vajah se mujhe lecturer se daant padi.
SH:maan na padega tum mai kuch toh baat hai. Acha guys hum late ho rahe hai auditions lene hai.
Ne: kriya tum ready ho auditions ke liye
Kr:yup
Sw:kriya's always ready for dance. Vo bahut acha dance karti hai.
Sh: tum bhi toh bahut acha dance karte ho.
Swaron eye lock.
Gang:ahem ahem...They were feeling shy and embarrassed.
R:toh chale guys
Gang: lets go.

They reached the auditorium and the auditions began. Most of them were very bad and few of them were OK OK types. They didn't like any girl till now. (P.S Only girls are auditioning because the team needs a girl member.) Finally it was kriya turn. She came onto the stayed and every one wished her luck. The song started playing. BUTTONS by PUSSYCAT DOllS.
Here's the link http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VsqoCOwSYNw&feature=related (Its shakti's audition in DID. U can see the video because I suck in describing dance.)
Kriya was beautifully swaying to the song. She didn't even miss a single beat. She did some hot and s**y moves. Every one was mesmerized by her dance. Rey was highly impressed with her. Her performance ended and the audience appreciated her dance. No doubt she is a marvelous dancer. Without wasting much more time sharon announced that kriya was selected as the 12th dancer. Swayam immediately went and hugged her and soon all the girls hugged her.





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Chapter 6:
*****Later in canteen*****
Everyone was happy that they found their 6th dancer. All the louisans thank the foot loose authorities for making a new rule that only the teams consisting either 6 or 12 members could participate. Since the last two years they had been participating as a group of 11 and now when they entered their 3rd year of B.Com this new rule was made. At first they were very upset and angry with the authorities for framing such rule but now they thanked them as because of this rule only they could see such an amazing talent that kriya posseses. Every one was thinking how to celebrate this. And before they could think anything else they were called by RDX Sir in his cabin.
They all reached the cabin including kriya.
GANG: hello sir
RDX:aah hey guys!! so finally found ur 12th dancer.
Re:yes sir and she is really amazing dancer.
RDX:i know that maine auditions dekhe. So kriya congratzz for being selected as the 12th dancer.
KR:thanks sir
RDX:well guys i hope you all begin your rehearsals soon. And one more thing guys I've arranged a small party for you all this weekend adn dont forget to be there.
Gang:Wow sir party..thank u sooo much.

All of them left the cabin and heeded back to their usual hangout spot in the college-the CANTEEN.
Ni:guys kyu na hum sab aaj shaam movie ke liye chale??wats say
Vic:nice idea dude...waise bhi bahut din hogaye humne saath mai movie dekhi aur aaj toh humare paas ek acha reason bhi hai.
Re:okk so its final aaj shaam hum log movie ke liye jaa rahe hai. Mai aur swayam tickets book karne jaate hai.
Sw:yup dude.
Nil: And girls plzz apne make up par zyaada time waste mat karna nahi toh hum late ho jayenge.Sim:Nilesh wat do u mean???
Sh:haan kya kehna chahte ho tum??
Ne:dat hum girls late tayyiar hoying
Vic:nahi babu aisa nahi hai vo toh nilesh bas aise hi
Vish:dude kya bas ha?? tum toh aise keh rahe ho jaise tum boys toh bada jaldi tayyiar hote ho
Bh:abbey aeee nilesh sahi bol raha.
Sw:arrey guys bachon ki tarah ladne band karo and boys chup karo hume pata hai ki sach kya hai toh girls se behes karna is useless.
Sh:wat do u mean swayam ki mai late karti hu
Sw:arrey nahi sharon mera vo matlab nahi hai mai toh bas vo vo...
Sh:vo vo kya jab kehne ke liye kuch hai hi nahi toh vo vo kya keh rahe ho
Sw:arrey mera vo matlab nahi tha.
Sh:mujhe nahi karni tum se baat.

All the girls were upset with their boys and kriyansh were having fun on seeing this drama.
Re:yeh girls bhi na choti si baat ko kitna kheenchti. He didn't realize while speaking that kriya was just beside him. After completing his sentence it struck him that he had said this loud enough for kriya to hear.
Kr:ahem ahem EXCUSE ME aap kehna kya chahte ho???
Re:look u r getting me wrong i was just
Kr:i was just kya ha...aap yeh kehna chate ho ki hum girls tayyiar hone mai late hote hai as if aap log toh 2 second mai tayyiar ho jaate ho
Re:no i didn't mean that...I'm sorry
Kr: aap ko kya lagta hai sorry bol kar aap bach jaaoge.Now kriyansh were also indulged in fight and kriya was continuously accusing him and wasn't even letting him talk. She was in her baatcutter mode. Rey was highly irritated with her. He pulled her towards him catching hold of her waist and put his finger on her lips and spoke.
Re:chup!!!!!!!!!!! ur such a baat cutter
He was so loud that everyone present over there heard him and became quite and were looking at kriyansh.
Re:kitna bolti ho tum. Jab shuru hoti ho toh dusro ko bolne ka chance nahi deti. Finally ab jaakar tum chup huyi phew!! All this while kriya was staring at him angrily but for once she got lost in his deep chocolatey brown eyes. But again regained her anger.
Re:listen mai sirf sorry kehna chahta hu. I'm sorry. Rey paused for a while expecting her to speak but she didn't say a word.
Re:arrey kya huya kuch bol kyu nahi rahi?????
All this while kriya was saying ummm indicating him towards his finger pressed against her lips. Finally she bit his finger and he winced his pain and left her immediately.
Re:ouch!!!!!!! yeh kya kiya??
Kr:toh aur kya karti??? agar aap apna finger hataoge toh hi toh mai kuch bolungi.
Sh:chalo kriya lets go waise bhi inn boys se baat karna ka koi fayda nahi.
All the girls turned to move out of the canteen. But before steeping out of canteen sharon turned back to tell them that
Sh:and haan tum boys ko hume movie ke liye pick up karne ki zaoorat nahi hai.
Kr: We'll come by ourselves samjhe.
Saying this krisha and the remaining girls left with full attitude.

*****Boys Locker Room*****

All the boys were upset because their lady loves were angry on them. Suddenly an idea struck in vicky's mind.
Vic: IDEA!!!!!!!!!!
Boys:kya???
Vi:rey aur swayam jab tum dono film ki tickets lene jao toh koi scary movie ki ticket lena aur theater ke manager se kehna ki vo ek rule banaye ki uss movie ke liye sirf couples hi jaa sakte hai u know wat i mean
Bh:waah yaar aaj prove hogaya ki tera dimaag bhi chalta hai
Nil:right dude
Reyam: Sahi mmai dude kya baat hai...awesome idea man.
Later reyam went to the theatre and executed their plan and luckily the manager also agreed easily. Then all the boys went back to their homes to get ready for the evening. When swayam entered his house he could hear a few voices coming from kriya's room. Those voices were of the girls. He went to her room and saw that all the girls at his gang were present there having fun together and when they saw him all of them gave him serious glares as if they would kill him. He became nervous and muttered to himself 'kahan fas gaya mai'. He just gave a weak smile trying to lighten the atmosphere. They vishakha spoke
Vish:dude lets go and ready for the evening because people think (looking towards swayam) we are late lattifs.
Sim:ya rite
Girls except kriya: byeee kriya see u in the evening.
Sh:and haan i'll come and pick u up. Then immesiately swayam spoke
Sw:arrey iss koi zaroorat nahi hai i bring kriya along with me.
Kr: no thanks swayam mai sharon ke saath aaungi.
Sw:okk
All the girls left. Swayam tried talking to sharon but all his attempts went in vain. Then he tried talking to kriya.
Sw:kriya tum mujhse gussa kyu ho
Kr:wat do u mean mai gussa hu. Aaj subah jo kuch bhi tumne aur tumhare friends ne kaha pata hai kitna bura laga hume
Sw:sorry baba
Kr:nope
Sw:pllzzz (holding his ears n making a puppy face)
Kr:okk ab aise puppy face mat banao u know jab tum aisa karte ho toh i cant be angry with u for a long time.

*****In the evening*****
All the boys were waiting for the girls to arrive. Finally the girls arrived. Each and every one was looking beautiful, the boys couldnt stop drooling over them. But wait there's some one missing. Yes it was kriya she wasn't there with the girls. Rey was very eager to see his baatcutter. He wanted to ask the gals wer is she but couldnt ask as they would start questioning him. But looks like god has listened to his prayers and immediately swayam asked wers kriya. Then sharon replied that she was just coming and theres she. Rey was awestruck by seeing her. She had worn a simple purple color frock with her hair straight and left open and with very light make up.

She was looking simple yet very pretty. She was looking looking like an angel in disguise. Rey was lost in het beauty and she could feel his gaze on her. This made her a little uncomfortable as well as blush. She greeted everyone and then came to rey. She was continuously calling rey but he was busy staring at her. It was amar who brought him back to present by shaking him.
Sh:umm guys wjich movie is this
Vic':sharon its a scary movie(name tum log khud hi soch lo)
Ne:babu scary movie???
Vic:haan kyu koi problem hai.
Ne:n nahi
All the girls were a bit scared of the movie on seeing the poster of it. They were about to enter but the manager stopped them.
Man:umm sorry mam and sirs but u have to sit couple wise as this movie is very scary.
The girls tried convincing him that they'll sit however they wish to but failed. Finally every one made a couple entry and kriyansh were the last to enter. Before they entered rey called kriya.
Re:ummm kriya just one min plz
Kr:ha rey bolo
Re:umm u loook beautiful like an angel.
Kriya just blushed at this and then looked into his eyes and got lost in them. Their eye lock was broken by the manager who was telling them to enter as the film was about to start. They entered and saw that all the seats were occupied in the row where only 10 seats were booked and the remaining 2 seats were booked in the corner of some other row. Kriyansh had no choice except to sit in those corner seats. The movie started and it was really a very scary one. Kriya was very scarec that almost throught the movie she caught reys hand and dug het nails in his hand. Rey was just enjoying her touch. In one of the scenes kriya was extremely scared and she immediately hugged him burrying her face in his chest. He was at first shocked by this but then responded to her hug. He was continuously soothing her by saying 'dont worry im there here' n 'relax its just a movie'. Kriya waa feeling like heaven in his arms but soon she realised that wat she has done and pulled back from his embrace and uttered a sweet sorry. Finally the movie ended and she sighed in relief. She then observed his hand which had her nail prints on them. She had caught his hand so tightly and squeezed them such that her nails left their print there. She took his hand in hers and started caressing it ans sayimg sorry. Rey was enjoying this, he had a smile plastered on his face. As soon as she looked up in his eyes she got drowned in them. They were having a beautiful eye lock which was broken by swayam.




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Wow guys 63likes thank u sooo much. This one's for you aisha hope you like it.

Chapter 7:
rey was in the 9th heaven heaven enjoying his baatcutter so close to him that too lost in his eyes like he was but this special moment was broken by Swayam. He interrupted in between saying "guys kya kar rahe ho??chalna nahi hai movie's over." Rey so badly cursed him for becoming the kabab mai haddi and kriya became a little embarrassed on being caught having a LLHH that too by her brother. Every one then heeded back to their houses.

*****Next Morning*****
Its was yet another day with nothing special in it. Every one was roaming around in the college. Some were in the BB court, some in canteen, some busy in planning how to bunk lectures while some others attending the classes. But there was one person among all the students present in the college who was constantly looking towards the gate as if he was waiting for some body. He was continuously pacing to and fro, looking at his watch and then towards the gate. He was getting restless. He thought in his mind "kahan hai vo?! Abhi tak aayi kyu nahi??" Already he was confused due to the new feelings arising inside him and his mind and heart were fighting with each other making his situation even worse and confusing him more. His mind was saying "dude why the heck are u thinking about her so much. She's just an ordinary girl like the others and you even have such hot babes as ur girl friends then go and spend time with them instead of waiting for her. You should not be affected by her and more over waiting for a girl doesn't suit you. You are Reyansh Singhania for whom the girls wait." But his heart was telling a complete different story. It was saying "dude waiting for her is not a wrong thing. Just because you are the hottest hunk of the college that doesn't mean u can't wait for a girl. Ofcourse you can and more over she's your friend and waiting for a friend is no harm. And yes you have to accept that there is something in her something special that attracts you towards her. Her innocent yet angelic face, those big hazel beautiful eyes of her, the way her nose twiches when she gets angry, the way her rosy lips form into a big curve when she is haapy, all these things attract you. Though it has been only 3 days you actually met her but still you can't resist her charm and you yourself know you ate not interested in those irritating girl friends of yours".

While his heart and mind were fight there entered the special girl he was waiting for. She was busy with her bag adjusting her books. He called over to her. On hearing some one call "kriya" she lifted her head to see who it was. She found that it was rey. She passed him a sweet smile which made him get lost in her dreamland. It was because of his friends he was forced to come back to earth. How he wished he could just keep staring at her getting lost in her thought, to hear her voice as sweet as her but no there has to be some villian each and everytime. He couldn't talk to her until afternoon as his friends didn't even let him be free even for a second. Later in the atrium he could have a glimpse of her. She was busy with sharon, neha and the other girls who were waiting for RDX Sir to make the announcement for which he had asked everyone to assemble in the atrium. The boys found the girls standing in the other end and they walked over to them. All of them greeted each other but kriyansh exchanged only a "hi". They were confused as to how to start the conversation. They just smiled at each other and pretened to do some other work. But they constantly stealing glances at each other from the corner of their eyes. At one time they both caught each other stealing glances and then their eyes locked. After a few mins their eye lock had broken due to RDX Sir's voice who started speaking on the mike.
RDX: hello students, this announcement is to inform you all about a party. As our team Louisans have found their 12th dancer and also to give you all a break from studies I have decided to throw a party. Initially it was supposed to be this weekend but due to some important work it has been postponed to next weekend.
On hearing about the party everyone hooted.
RDX: And and guys there's a dress code. Boys are supposed to wear formals and girls sarees. And the most important thing only couple entry is allowed.
Every one was busy thinking about the party. The girls were worrying about the dress code whereas the boys were planning how to ask the girls.
RDX: and I request the team Louisans to begin your rehearsals from today. You may all now leave.

All the louisans gathered in the rehearsal hall to begin with their practice. It was decided that kriyansh would be partners from now. They rehearsals began. With each passing day kriyansh came closer and there friendship started to grow. New feelings started arising in their hearts for each other. They had never felt like this before. Finally two weeks had passed by and it was the day before the party. All the boys had asked out their girls except rey. Even kriya was left out without a date. Rey decided that he would ask her today itself as tomorrow morning all the girls had planned to go shopping. Kriya was walking in the corridor when some one pulled her inside the fire exit. She was about to shout but stopped on realizing the touch. It was rey.
R:mujhe tumse kuch puchna hai
Kr:hmmm pucho
He bent down on his knees took out a beautiful pink rose and asked her "Will you be my date for tomorrow?" She gladly accepted the rose and said yes. He was so happy that he hugged her. She was shocked at the begining but soon responded to it and when she hugged him back he felt he was the happiest person in the world. She felt great in being in his embrace. Finally he pulled back and both of them moved out.

Finally the party day has arrived. All the girls forced the boys to come along with to shopping and the boys being left with no choice accompanied them. All the boys were helping their respective girls in choosing the saree. Kriya was confused in between 2 sarees. One was a hawwtt golden saree with backless blouse with a nice work done on it and the other one was a maroon saree with simple work. Both of them were looking good. Rey on looking at her smiled and walked to her. He said in her ears "tum par dono hi achi lagengi but in this golden one you would look stunning" She smiled at this and then chose the golden saree leaving behind the maroon one. She herself didn't understand why did she chose this saree only but all she knew is rey liked it so she had picked this. Everyone was done with their shopping and heeded back home. Kriyansh were thinking about each other all the time.

err, short i know but wat do had nothing in mind and my exams r also going on. plzz hit the like tab and do leave your reviews. next update will be long promise. Pms will be sent later.
Edited by lovely7010 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wwowoww manuuu awsoomee i loved ur update thnx for doing it 4 me u bought a smile on ma face yippeee am the 1t one to commnt wow mannn aww kriya bought the saree rey liked well i thnk shell look nyc init 2 poorr rey gone restlesss haha well waiting for next 1 and thnx for messigng mee
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Posted: 13 years ago
I love your update
the kriyansh parts are very cute
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Hi. . . .
Woww. . . .
Awsome update.. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Kriaya ne rey ki like ki hui saree choose ki wow. . . .
They both r going 2gethr in the party as a couple. . . .
Intresting. . .. . . .
Letz c abb aagee kya hotta h. . .
Jaldi update krna. . .
N,pm me also. . . . .
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Posted: 13 years ago
mindblowing update mannu👏

rey asked kriya for date😃

luvd it very much😃

waiting for d next part😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it.. continue soon 😊

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