SS aRhI: Once upon a Secret CH 4 updated pg 73- 28 NOV 2014

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Shazeia

@shaz007

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#491

Welcome back to writing 😉. I am so glad you decided to finish this story. You write so beautifully that I just can't resist re-reading your stories. I have read all of them so many times 😆

While reading this chapter I never felt that you had returned after such a long break. I am looking forward to read the up coming parts and see how the secrets unfold.

Thanks once again for deciding to complete this story.

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hydsri

@hydsri

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#492

Hey, good to have you back. Very nice story and look forward to many more updates.

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Rattyswami

@Rattyswami

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#493

i really like the concept of Arnav fighting for his love, since 'he needs her more'😉

The IPKKND Arnav would have destroyed Khushi (and himself to in the process) for even thinking of another man

So all these mechanisations to keep her close is quite fun. 😃

And your Arnav realised his mistakes pretty fast once he was pointed in the right direction.

But please do not let him of the hook easily...let him sweat for a while atleast...

As long as he thinks that he has pushed Khushi towards another man, this story will be quite interesting to read 😆 Lover boy Arnav is soo cute😳

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Apeter

@Apeter

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#494

Where is the update... More then 10 days

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#495

Nice update.. Arnav believes her but the way he is making her understand is really not making her understand..

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Spoonai

@Spoonai

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#496

It's more than ten day when r u updating??? Plz dnt disappear again :(

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hema

@Itsflora

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#497

it feels sooo nice to see you back. well I'm late about noticing it;I'm sorry for that...but it's
nice to know you will continue again.. & I mean it...
specially now when our forum really looks lonely.
...but you didn't mention anything about "this time forever"-thats my 2nd fav from ur writing. (most fav one is off course "behind that smile")...plsss continue that too...that was a real wonderful story..