SS aRhI: Once upon a Secret CH 4 updated pg 73- 28 NOV 2014

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Sanjana

@akhilash

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

thanks for the pm.

Enjoyed reading it. looking forward to the next instalment
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FlamingsOfLove

@FlamingsOfLove

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

ommmg i love it

i actually want the real story to be like this

i deeply love it

sooo nice

pm me updtae soon plsss

xxx

hira

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Amanram

@Amanram

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

I'm loving this joint effort!! Way to go! I can;'t wait for the next update. So many secrets that can shatter so many hearts - Ouff

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@Chocoangel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

wooww...

i m loving it...!!

greatt update...

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nee

@march2011

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

raizada mansion is full of secrets?????

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-bansi-

@-bansi-

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Beautifully written...

The way you have portrayed all the emotions n hurt n agony is simply outstanding...!!

Am in love with it...

Glad u both came up with joining ur hands in writing.. m

aww..arnav realized that khushi was saying the truth all the while... thanks to buaji for that..!!!

Am liking Karan here...aww..Anjali us aware of it all..she wants to be with him too..!!!

Well he's a brother to khushi.. glad she has someone with her..!!!

Shyam the creep scumbag... grrr...

Loved it to bits..

cont soon..!!

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CoffeeMoCha

@CoffeeMoCha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Aaand... It's another winner from our two favourite writers! Honestly, teaming up is the best thing you two could have done. First chapter and I'm already hooked. Love the fact that Arnav's misunderstanding is out of the way. Lots of chappies filled Arnav trying to make up with Khushi! I can hear some distinct female squeals. That apart, I'm lovin' this SS. Please send me a PM. Pretty Please with Sobti on top? 😊Love the story,

-MC ❤️

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insanelycrazy

@insanelycrazy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

loved the title! its got this element of mystery to it :) nice nice! i loved the transition in arnav, from the shoulder grabbing and spitting venom to feeling sorry.. ! yayyie finally i get my redemptiom track (i've been whining about it since ages since the CVs scrapped the track :P )

and oooh, was the guy karan who anjali was talking to? :O :O

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aakriti

@aakriti120

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

heya girls..

interesting concept and first chapter...

a lot has happened..
arnav hurting and not believing khushi..

khushi and her secret with karan bhaiya..

anjali meeting someone?is that khushi's karan bhaiya??she knows about shayam...hmm

finally arnav got to know the truth..what will he do now?

so looking forward for the next part..

many many thanks for the pm..:)

continue soon.

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Jaya

@pink.lotus

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Posted: 13 years ago

#30

truly, this story is well written.. but it is too close to the current storyline, so feels like drudgery.
we see enough of khushi's angst on screen, I personally dont want to add another FF of angst.
will decide whether to continue reading this story, after reading chapter 2.

please take no offense, you both are brilliant writers.👏
. just my current apathy speaking..